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@Dead Cruiser Hey boss, how does my character sheet look so far?
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Defunct CS, use in reference to other posts for your benefit in making your own character, if you please
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As a side note, I'm not utterly attached to this one, I had the idea and then executing it proved to be more challenging than expected— he's unorthodox enough that it's challenging to imagine how he'd fit into this IP. I'll probably attempt something more normal and put it here as well. Also, trying to decipher U.M. is a big task, especially being so new to K6BD. I think I got the writing mostly right, though, only his more "common" name. Will probably replace with a picture of him once I find/make one. Also wasn't sure what colors were preferred for the aspect. I went with a very dark blue, but it's very close to black. May change it to be more distinctive.


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@Dark Cloud Not bad so far, just remember that your aspect is PROGRESS exactly that way. Also I find a totally inorganic being with a mind and soul a bit sketchy as far as how souls work, so would you be alright with a Ghost in the Shell kind of setup where he's 99% inorganic but still has some hindbrain or something?

@ZAVAZggg I like it so far. He would definitely be among the New Gods that got the most fucked over by their ascension, from what I'm seeing.

@Sanity43217 Not bad but very, very, very similar to Dark Cloud's character. We can brainstorm ways to make your guy more distinct.

@rezay I don't think the concept is bad, just not right for this RP. I'd prefer to see a character rather than like, an antagonistic force.

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@Dead Cruiser Okay I was trying to go for the Ghost in the Shell. We'll say he's a Android with a human brain.
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@Dark Cloud Yeah that works fine for me.
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@Dead Cruiser Aight cool.
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@Stylobilly Sobriquet Ideas:
The Muse, The God of Melodies.
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@Stylobilly I'll give you more notes when you have more done, so far so good though.
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@Dark Cloud Not bad so far, just remember that your aspect is PROGRESS exactly that way. Also I find a totally inorganic being with a mind and soul a bit sketchy as far as how souls work, so would you be alright with a Ghost in the Shell kind of setup where he's 99% inorganic but still has some hindbrain or something?

@ZAVAZggg I like it so far. He would definitely be among the New Gods that got the most fucked over by their ascension, from what I'm seeing.

@Sanity43217 Not bad but very, very, very similar to Dark Cloud's character. We can brainstorm ways to make your guy more distinct.

@rezay I don't think the concept is bad, just not right for this RP. I'd prefer to see a character rather than like, an antagonistic force.


That's what I thought after writing it up as well. Sorta hard to make a character of it, though maybe I could pull off something similar.
I do like the edgy aesthetic

If I can make a suggestion, I'd say give a couple more examples of Aspects, I got pretty hung up there. Your description helped a lot, but only included examples from K6BD (as far as I can tell). If we're to make our own, more points of reference would be helpful.

I'll leave the CS up for the benefit of others.
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@rezay Noted, but I don't mind working out aspects with people privately, since it's an important part of your character.
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@Dead Cruiser Understood
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I've looked into the magic from K6BD, and I was wondering, which of the three would you say fits a character who's essentially going to be a pure berserker in combat?
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Silly question here, but how do I join?
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@Dead Cruiser
It is complete, if you care to peruse.
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@ZAVAZggg Agree with @Stylobilly, that's more the pursuit of some sort of martial art, which in effect can be very similar to magic.

Magic is the art of lying to the face of God and getting away with it. The New Gods, being what they are, can be particularly adept at this, but it's not applicable in every scenario.

That said, Able looks good and will be accepted when the OOC goes up.
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