@Stormflyx so I'm double posting as I wanna talk about two things.
First) I don't know if you're actually Scottish living in Australia or if you've visited but I really like how you're capturing the essence, I myself can read it in a scottish voice which is not something I often get seeing people play someone Scottish. I mean there's some slightly different word choices but I'd expect that.
Second) I really like how you are describing the scene without so much relying on her visual senses, while you're making it clear she does have some 'element' of sight you're giving us a very much Eilidh perspective which is very tactile. I've seen people attempt to RP blind people and they've always still described scenes as you would visually.
So Bravo Madame. Looking forward to seeing some more.
I’m actually a geordie living in Australia. I’ve spent a lot of time in Scotland and would consider myself a plastic scot haha. With the lingo, it’ll be better with time as I write more and find her voice a bit. But, that is very kind of you to write that so thank you very much 💜
