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OK so the OP is clearly a work in progress, I am going to try and put up the CS/Example this weekend.

For now try and get me general character pitches so I can give you a thumbs up/down/notes/whatever on it. I hate wasting time on a CS when the GM hates my idea so I'd rather spare you all the effort.
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The idea i had is the first slime created at the beginning of their universes birth. The beings created it with the sole purpose of disposing and absorbing all unwanted creations and keeping their properties for cataloging mistakes and unwanted mishaps for the gods (ranging from beings, matter, accidental evolutions, explosion that could potential destroy a planet, etc). It would fit into the catagory of White flame, and white magic on top of that, its main power would be the ability to shapeshift into different forms/matter its absorbed over the thousands of years it has existed. The forms i have right now are probably going to be the main ones and they'd all have seperate abilities/properties
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@Moonlit Ghost What's missing from your concept is an arc, basically. These are meant to be characters that achieved their status and power through a journey of some form or another. The story is meant to begin with them hitting the apex of their power, thrusting them into this new tier of existence. "Perfect slime from the beginning of time" isn't a compelling character to me, at least as far as what you've shown/told me so far.
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Without a concrete example yet, I feel the need to ask rather than what is allowed, what ISN'T allowed in terms of how creative can we get here?
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@KillamriX88 I feel like I would rather definite a positive than a negative, and let you feel for a character from there.

Your Inheritor is basically someone at the end of one journey, and at the beginning of a new one. Their journey has surely changed them, perhaps not for the better. They've reached the end that their means have been striving toward, and this has pushed them into the next plane of existence. Here, despite all of their power, they will essentially be starting from the bottom again. The journey begins anew.

Think about where they come from, and what they had to do to become who they are. Think about why their will drives them beyond the limits of their world. Think about what they sacrificed to come this far.

Characters I want: doom-driven heroes, prophesied saviors, enlightened masters, tortured madmen, hot-blooded fighters, black-hearted schemers, silver-tongued liars, god-kings, demon lords, conquerors, revolutionaries. Your character stands where the World becomes the Fool again.

Hope this helps.
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Well I guess I was more worried about how creative I can be with the magic system. It feels like we've been given all but free reign there but I didn't want to assume.
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@KillamriX88 Okay, that's more specific, and I can answer more specifically.

I pretty much tried to demarcate my standards for magic with the ranking of the Arts. Think of it like, if you are a dedicated Sorcerer, Red Arts are what I expect you to be capable of, White Arts are the limits of what you're capable of, and Black Arts are beyond what you're capable of.
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I'll have my concept fleshed out in the morning
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Although I am having second thoughts on my character.
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@Dark Cloud Could always wait for the CS, I plan to work on it later today.
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@Dead Cruiser I thought we were all just twerking gifs? Talk about false advertising. XD
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@Dead Cruiser sus

god I threw up a bit just saying that :P
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Anyway off to work I go
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For now try and get me general character pitches so I can give you a thumbs up/down/notes/whatever on it.


If your still open to more slots, and it seems like you are, then i have a char pitch for you:



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@DracoLunaris I think the idea works. I would possibly even push it a little further. She could easily be some sort of nascent avatar or messianic figure for goblinkind or even greenskins as a whole.
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I am interested in this. I am not final on my concept and I will need to do some research for it, but here is my idea:

A god-king with a kingdom styled after Ancient Egypt, with all the religious and other trappings that entails. Someone who has ascended to the eternal throne of a civilisation of monument builders, a true, peaceful and just king who has brought prosperity to his people. However, this has not always been this way. For long, long ago, he was worse than a beggar. A nameless nobody who begged on the streets for money. He knew only that his world was unjust, for he could barely eat and drink enough, along with many others. Indeed, the world was a terrible place before he started to act.

He then received a vision and started preaching religion. He fought against the existing state, he convinced people about his righteous ways, he carved it all out for himself. He made sacrifices for his goal and expected sacrifices to be made in turn. Over the course of many years, his entire world was overturned by his work. And now, having finished it all, having finally delivered the change he sought out in society... some asshole yanks him away and goes "nuh-uh."

He is a little pissed about the situation.
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