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Hidden 2 yrs ago 2 yrs ago Post by CaliforniaState
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Here she is

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Hey! Sure. Wait a second, something looks similar between you and @Archangel89.


Oh shit! You're right! I wonder what it could be?
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Oh shit! You're right! I wonder what it could be?


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Do you you have my rent yet?
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Do you you have my rent yet?


i owe austin a payment first
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Very interesting reading! Seeing as your character has such expertise with fungi, some of those 'evil' corporations mentioned in my "Enemy" section would likely be interested in acquiring your character for several reasons. This gives me some interesting things to do in the story, for sure.

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This is a fictional world, which I still don't mention in a clear way. So, the People’s Republic of Korea has to be renamed to something of your choosing. After that, look at the 'world map' in the IC-tab and decide where this country is, and I'll add it. All the details mentioned so far about the country can stay as it is.

The comet did not actually hit the world itself, but took an orbit around it. But, debris from it bombard the world every day, so what happened to your character still holds up. Just rephrase the sentence to fit the lore.

Keep the timeline in mind. The comet arrived ten years ago, when your character was 18.
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Very interesting reading! Seeing as your character has such expertise with fungi, some of those 'evil' corporations mentioned in my "Enemy" section would likely be interested in acquiring your character for several reasons. This gives me some interesting things to do in the story, for sure.

Okay, then, comments:
This is a fictional world, which I still don't mention in a clear way. So, the People’s Republic of Korea has to be renamed to something of your choosing. After that, look at the 'world map' in the IC-tab and decide where this country is, and I'll add it. All the details mentioned so far about the country can stay as it is.

The comet did not actually hit the world itself, but took an orbit around it. But, debris from it bombard the world every day, so what happened to your character still holds up. Just rephrase the sentence to fit the lore.

Keep the timeline in mind. The comet arrived ten years ago, when your character was 18.


Thank you! I was hoping that the link between her work and the fungi thats warping life would help create a narrative!

I’ll make the necessary changes. I had to finagle her history a few times with respect to the timeline and the 10 year period. 18 made sense to me since she’d be in University just having close to her first year over having entered when she was 17. 4 years for undergrad, 1-2 for grad, 4 for doctorate, and then the 2 years for the UDF.

Edit: Can you make the People’s Republic of Goryeo directly south of Sauraine where that oddly shaped peninsula occurs?
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@Salsa Verde
Great! Look at the map when you get a chance, see if that was the location you thought about.
Here is your character image edited for the character tab: i.imgur.com/NGe8wMt.png
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@Prisk Moved my sheet into the Character section, thanks for the clarification!



I drew an outline of where I thought Telos might be.
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Great! Look at the map when you get a chance, see if that was the location you thought about.
Here is your character image edited for the character tab: i.imgur.com/NGe8wMt.png


Perfect! Everything looks great.
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Excellent, updated the world map. Here's an edited image for your character: i.imgur.com/ipQiPOO.png
Put it in the character tab. I blurred the flag patch to remove the real world reference a bit.
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@Prisk

Thank you for all the great feedback!

I think I fixed her Chronicle now, so it makes sense with the timeline.

Also changed her magic to "Darkness" element. Since she spent most of her time in the Research Division, I wanted her to magic to have less direct-combat focuses. Hope that works. :)

Cheers!

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That works!—as long as you describe it as something tangible that others can see when it is being used, so that it isn't abstract.
Here is your edited character image to put together with your character sheet in the character tab: i.imgur.com/4xMzGvH.jpg
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@Aeolian
That works!—as long as you describe it as something tangible that others can see when it is being used, so that it isn't abstract.
Here is your edited character image to put together with your character sheet in the character tab: i.imgur.com/4xMzGvH.jpg


Thank you so much Prisk. Oh yes yes, her darkness is very much something that others can see when she uses it! Not abstract at all! :)
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Big cast vibes
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been listening to nothing but the arrival and tenet soundtracks while writing for this its going to wreak havoc on my recommendations
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Big cast vibes


Honestly a bit nervous. Wanted to dust off my RP skills by jumping into a casual thread to see if I want to get back into RP and... This lol.
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Get in here.
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Honestly a bit nervous. Wanted to dust off my RP skills by jumping into a casual thread to see if I want to get back into RP and... This lol.


honestly i feel larger groups take some of the pressure off
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We decompress the RP stress.
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