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Very cool lore and everything as usual. The whole setup made me think of an Esper from Final Fantasy 12 named "Ultima", a six-winged angel-like being. Perhaps something for Peter's Archon form?

I'm guessing Peter's element of choice will be this "Golden" element that I've mentioned in the Codex, and that you mentioned here yourself. I've named in "Aether" in one of the cards for the combat system, which can be something to keep in mind. It could also be called "light", perhaps. I don't think it should have a set name as some other elements, seeing as it is pure spirit energy or energy of the Etro (God), or something like that.

Anyway, this bubble that Peter can surround himself with and shield others, is that the same thing as the "barrier" technique in the codex? Or is it different? Also, this 'sleep' effect that you mention, how does that work specifically? Like, can it put an active combatant instantly to sleep or is it one of those things where the target is unaware of Peter's presence, to begin with, like a 'stealth' kind of thing?

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Thanks! And I love the idea of a six-winged angel-like being as Peter's archon form.

And when I was thinking of "light" element, I was thinking of it being his own unique version of the Golden element or the pure spirit energy. But, I mostly just said "light" since its easier to visualize than saying Golden or pure spirit energy. But it is also partly light too. Honestly, I hadn't given it super deep thought to be honest, so I'm not sure which route you think I should go with it. I'm fine with however you want me to present it as though, since ultimately, the achieves the same purpose and effect.

And yes, the bubble functions exactly like the Barrier technique. It's basically that with Peter's unique golden sparkly light element effect, giving it a more whimsical look, but its essentially the barrier technique in form and use.

As for his sleep techniques, it affects different beings differently. For example, it causes comet beasts to fall asleep pretty quickly because of their primitive minds and biology. I imagine its more effective on smaller beasts than bigger stronger ones. But on humans, it would probably make them drowsy first and then put them to sleep (so not instant on humans like it might be on comet beasts). It's even less effective on other Aeons, with some probably being able to resist the full sleep effect (i.e. only feeling a bit of disorientation and drowsiness). But that could vary from Aeon to Aeon too depending on their strength and level of resistance.

Targets are still aware of Peter's presence tho, so it's not a stealth thing unless he snuck up on them and put them to sleep before they realized what happened. But, no, it's definitely not a stealth thing by nature.

But you know, as a player, id never force sleep onto any other player Aeons, characters, or important NPC Aeons without OOC consent.

That was a lot. hopefully that clarified everything! :)
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Oh yeah, just look at the aesthetics of this thing. Perfectly on theme with the golden glow/sparkles that you described:



Okay, looks good to me! Put it into the character tab.

I was probing about the sleep effect to see if I needed to make it a proper thing for the combat 'system', and maybe even have its own little card. Would you be okay with others being able to create sleep effects? Otherwise it can be a unique thing to Peter.
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Oh that's really pretty! <3 Obsessed!

And thanks!

As for the sleep thing, I was thinking of it as a unique thing to Peter, but I'm not pressed eitherway tbh. I can't tell other players that their characters can't use sleep magic, you know? LOL That's not really my place, so, it's up to you as the GM. The sleep thing was just something I thought fit the character thematically, but I think you should do what you think is best for the RP :)
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We'll keep it unique to Peter. I was thinking about how it fits with the rest of his theme—you know, being around death/eternal sleep. Sleeping is also a good remedy for a slew of problems in people, so it goes well with the healing aspect of his character.
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Exactly! Eloquently stated.

I wanted there to be a thematic dichotomy, paralleling his connection between death and restoration/healing. Like you said, with sleep being an important part of healing in many ways, but eternal sleep also meaning death basically.

But, lets see if I can put this theme to good use! lol
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I made a character banner for Peter. It's in there in the character tab.

Also, I went ahead and structured the code for your post so that we're using the same layout. Seeing as you've got two characters, this code will be a perfect template for you, and everyone else for that matter! If it's just the one character in a post, it can get a bit repetitive with the image, but the damn "quote" line is always off if you don't include the picture. I guess it could be adjusted somehow, but I'm not that smart when it comes to code.

So, here's your post in full. Check the 'raw' button to get it. The summary is at the bottom of it all. Maybe a few words there for us dummies around here with short memory? That would be splendid, love.

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@Prisk Aesthetic as always. Thanks Prisk!

And yup, I can definitely add a summary at the end of each post.

Just perfect!

Merci!
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So 20 minutes late but here she is. I do my best with proofreads but I'm always overlooking mistakes so please let me know if I'm being blind and there is anything that needs fixing. Also let me know if any of lore needs adjusting to fit into what has been established. Like my proofreading, I might have misread something and if I did, it'll reflect in the above.
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Proofreading is for nerds.
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Oh, @Exit is the master mind of all these layouts here. At least I asked for permission before stealing it all, heh.

@Exit
Super. I've got nothing to comment on. Where do you want Falden to be specifically within Astaria? I'll edit the world map with it included. Put your sheet in the character tab when you're ready.

Here's your ic-post banner:


@Salsa Verde
Do you really want to say this in a thread run by a language teacher? Mommy will definitely lose her shit ;)

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Oh, @Exit is the master mind of all these layouts here. At least I asked for permission before stealing it all, heh.


I appreciate you. And you've done an amazing job creating your own style. It looks really good!

As for the location of Falden, I'll place it here:


EDIT: I can get a post out in the next couple of days.
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Hello, who are you? This game is not a free for all. You have to apply and get approval before posting characters.
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2 things.

First:

Can there PLEASE be a rivalry between Christina and Emilia? And I don't mean like a school girl frenemies sort of thing. I mean, these two women have history and are flat-out rivals. To the point where they respect, but openly dislike each other. And they always try to outperform each other in combat and whenever they talk, they always throw in clever backhanded insults. The kind where everyone else around them is looking around awkwardly because of how overtly hostile they are toward each other.

I'm just being silly. But like...please? I see the potential. LOL @Prisk@Exit

Second:

@Krash I noticed you changed Errikos codename to Dreamer. Was curious as to why.

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@Aeolian I missed the 'Presence' section for Emilia and now I realize the characters are pretty similar lol. Interesting to see that they're born on opposite sides of a spectrum but end up in the same place.
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@Prisk Excuse the double post but I also want to say I thoroughly enjoy the cards. I'd wanted to implement something similar
before, like a deck with specific attacks that's built before hand by each player and then shuffled, meant for players to use against each other, but I always thought that would be too much work. And then here it is adding a bit of flavor to combat. Very cool!
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Which is exactly why I think a rivalry between them would be so interesting to explore. Even their visuals are similar. Maybe they could be long-lost sisters (same mom, different dad). A rivalry sibling dynamic would be so fresh for this RP!

Anyways, ignore me. lol

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Thank you! I found this AI art website some time ago: WOMBO. You write some text/words in, choose a style, add a supporting image if you want to, and then it spits out some unique art. If this didn't exist, then making the cards would be a pain in the ass, because browsing for art can take a long time.

This could probably work well with arena roleplays, sure. Haven't thought about that, as the original intent of my 'game system' was to just be a simple anti-godmodding thing, so I don't have to have conversations about that with people. The numbers behind the scenes that I take care of are extremely simple, and it can be as easy or complicated as you want it to be.
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@Krash I noticed you changed Errikos codename to Dreamer. Was curious as to why.


Honestly felt that Conductor did not roll off the tongue well and explored different forms of Deus ex Machina and machine related phrases, but nothing really stuck out. I toyed with the idea that souls and that Errikos isn't his body since he can jump into electronics so to speak and realized I accidentally'd Ghost in the Shell but again, nothing really clicked outside of cliche stuff like "Ghost" or "Specter" etc. I toyed with the Matrix route too of using technical terms ala Switch, Cypher and what not as it would make sense but... didn't narrow it down. I finally landed on Dreamer since he appears to be unconscious while he's diving. I really don't feel like I've gotten it right yet and honestly am still working on it... If you're wanting to snag that title, then by all means, go for it.

Tbh I'd been so focused on my cybersecurity test that I took earlier today I wasn't putting as much effort into this lol.

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annnnnd now that I have some time without haranguing myself over studying, name changed. Peter can have all the dream stuff to themselves lol
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Wow. What a thoughtful explanation. Finding a codename can be hard, so I definitely understand the struggle. Getting it just right shows you put a lot of thought and care into the character.

But you DO NOT need to change his codename on my account. I wasn't even thinking of Peter when I asked. LOL I was genuinely just curious.

I have no intentions of changing Peter's codename. lol
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