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Due to the events in the collab at the end of Aisede’s post, I expect to be holding my turn until I hear from @Lewascan2


Understood.
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The RP is still open!
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@Silverstein, sorry to ping you here, but are you still in the RP? You have not responded on Discord lately.

Are you in need of any help being involved in the IC?
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In just two months of action, we've managed to reach 50 IC posts; thanks, guys!
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The next GM Post should be coming soon!
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Is this still open?
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Senhara No Thoughts, Head Empty / (she/they)

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Is this still open?


Yep
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Is this still open?


You're the new guy in Discord, right?
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My character submission.
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@Creative Chaos, How did he learn Filipino and Japanese? Also, a Noble Arm must be a single weapon, meaning that Helios and Selene will either be reduced to one sword or have to be connected to each other by a chain.
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@Letter Bee Did some edits and fixed a couple things I hadn’t researched well enough the first time.
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@Creative Chaos, I'd like another paragraph of the biography dealing with his birth, childhood, family situation and upbringing, but that's just me. Approval One given.
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I’ll look at this more in-depth in a bit, but for starters, you have potential S. There’s no precedent for S as a stand-alone rank, it’s a qualifier. C (S) means generally C with a strong but attached.
S on its own doesn’t mean much, unless you’re trying to say that his power’s adaptability and growth is all over the map.
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@Sniblet

Alright, lemme fix that.
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Alright, more thorough power review.

Power: B = 4
Speed: C = 3
Range: C = 3
Persistence: D = 2
Precision: B = 4
Potential: D(S) = 2
Adds up to 18, divide by 6 for the average of all stats
3 = barely C

Mathematically speaking, Helios Rod is a low C-rank. Being able to access incredible A-rank Power at range for 2 hours each day should bump this to B for in-universe purposes, but in-game, it's not guaranteed that Nico's going to be fighting at noon very often at all - a competent enemy will certainly avoid challenging him at this time.
The fact that he can only fight in melee at any other time of day might limit him more than you expect. If you don't mind that, go ahead and keep it - it would line up with his personality - but if you think you might regret having an NA that necessitates getting in someone's face without being blown away on the approach, this is your warning. With a potential stat of D, this weakness is unlikely to get any better with practice.

The full effects of Sun Stoked and Sunsetter aren't perfectly clear to me. Do they boost Nico's own physical abilities, like letting him run faster and lift great weights, or does boosted speed and power mean in the sense of making Helios Rod more responsive and hotter? Both?
And what does greater defense mean - does Nico just get harder to harm? Does his usual regeneration get stronger? Does Helios Rod manifest a forcefield?
And greater precision - does this mean he can more reliably land "critical hits," or that Burning Edge will no longer harm his allies?
Does Burning Edge radiate heat, or does it only burn those who come in contact with the fire?

The bio and personality look alright to me, especially since Bee was willing to pass it.
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I'll approve Nico as he is currently @Creative Chaos
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@Creative Chaos
And with that, my approval is had for Nico.
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@Creative Chaos, Final approval given.
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@Creative Chaos
Message for you in the discord. Your post unfortunately has a couple problems.
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After a tad bit of discussion on Discord, I edited both Regil's and Regina's backstories to fit the lore of the RP in accordance with what was discussed. If there's anything else that needs addressing, please let me know.
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