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Human emotions are one of the things that makes people who they are. While many animals can feel emotions and experience emotional thought, human beings are among those most capable of expressing these feelings.

Indeed, this sort of expression is intrinsic to human nature.

Happiness. Comfort. Kindness. Love.

Positive human emotions are only one side of the coin, however.

A student stresses out over her upcoming test. A salaryman resents his boss. A young couple has a fight that, even for a moment, they're scared that they'll never recover from.

Fears. Stress. Frustration. Anger.

Negative human emotions that coalesce like shadows in dark places.

Certainly, they are a part of what makes someone a human being, but in concentrated numbers they can become something far darker.

Shades form of negative human emotions, composed of darkness. At their weakest they can drain the energy from people and cause them to become increasingly depressed and beaten down by their mere existence. The stronger they get, the more capable of causing real physical harm they become.

They can even kill someone.

Composed of negative energies, it isn't possible to harm a Shade with conventional weaponry.

But that's why magical girls exist.

Sought out from young girls with high potential by fairies, magical girls are capable of destroying Shades, dispelling the energies composing their bodies permanently. These girls are capable of defending the world from the destructive influence of Shades.

But in a large city, like Tokyo, the sheer number of human beings populating it results in negative emotions building up at a high rate, producing dangerous Shades far more quickly.

And so, that's why such a city needs plenty of magical girls to keep these monsters in check.

And in Tokyo, there is a certain group of these magical girls, who have united to defend its citizens from the midnight threats known only to those who fight them off.

This is their story.




The abilities of magical girls come from a conceptual source of power. That is, each magical girl has their own Concept as a source of power. For example, a Magical Girl with the Concept of a fairytale as their source of power would have abilities based on that fairytale. Concepts can range wildly, from weapons to events to stories to nearly anything in history.

But this is not the end of the powers of a magical girl.

All magical girls wield some sort of item, be it a tool or a weapon or something else entirely. This item is their Archetype, something from stories or myths that grants them further powers, something related to their concept. A girl whose Concept is Cinderella could perhaps have the Pumpkin Carriage as her Archetype. However, when a girl first becomes a magical girl, they will not be aware of their Archetype. They must figure out what their Archetype's nature is on their own. This will unlock their most powerful abilities.

The Power of a magical girl's Concept and Archetype are influenced by a variety of factors. Age and fame are strong influences, but so to is the imagination inspired by them. This allows for more recent concepts, such as Wonderland, to be quite powerful in their own right.

The powers exhibited by magical girls are vast and broad. Some are straightforward, whereas some are more strange and difficult to use.




  • Name:
  • Age:
  • Gender: Female
  • Appearance:
  • Personality:
  • Skills:
  • Brief Backstory:
    • Magical Girl Appearance: (Usually, the eye color and hair color changes as well)
    • Concept:
    • Archetype:
    • Abilities:





I'm looking for six players tops, so it will be a case of first come first serve. People who post interest first will be considered first! Additionally, this is a team-based magical girl RP, so every girl will be part of a group of girls who have teamed up to fight shades.

Finally, this RP will operate on a weekly post schedule. Try and post at least once a week, and go no longer then two weeks without posting!
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@Ammokkx: Obviously no problem here, accepted.
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Just reposting to make sure i don't lose the thread too much
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Might do a new version with more to it later, but the character's not going to change any.
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Name: Rogue Nazario
Age: 15
Appearance: Red haired tomboy, think Max from Stranger Things or Ziggy from Fear Street!
Skills: Rogue is very good at pickpocketing and stealth hence the name Rogue.
Brief backstory: Rogue is actually called Red Robin on account of her flaming red hair and though she likes to pretend otherwise, has been raised with a silver spoon in her mouth. Determined though to understand the streets, Rogue taught herself pickpocketing and stealth, practicing her skills on passerby and even other wealthy family members. She did in fact successfully find and pawn her aunts jewelry. She was caught though by her father who seemed amused and called her his little rogue. Ever since then she has been doing jobs for her father, who keeps some of the spoils.

This is the last person one expects to be a Magical Girl.

Magical Girl Appearance: Streamliined Purplec dress with a Robin masquerade mask and pink hair.

Archetype: Shadow Ninja.

Abilities: She can slip through shadows as if they were passage ways and even manipulate them to some degree. Years of training had made her footsteps silent and she has this inherent sense where something valuable is. The more valuable it is, the stronger the sense. However she needs to know where she is going when slipping through shadows and remaining in someone’s shadow takes it’s toll. The longer she’s in someone’s shadow, the harder the concentration needeed. Likewise sound and senses are muffled while in shadow form.
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@Raineh Daze: Accepted.

@ImaginedBird67: The name isn't a real Japanese name or a real name in another other language.

That description is completely inadequate and you haven't given a picture to supplement. How is anyone supposed to get a good sense of how your character looks?

You removed her personality section.

Was she named for skills she would possess in the future? That explanation of her name doesn't make any sense.

Her archetype isn't valid and she doesn't have a concept. They're modeled on actual stories, mythological tales, sourced from things like that. See the examples I gave in the OP.

Her abilities are sparse and pretty much useless as a magical girl. In fact, I really don't see anything in this CS that points to her being a magical girl at all. Nothing is mentioned in backstory.

I'm sorry but I can't accept this, it's below the level of quality intended for this RP. Please look at the other bios already posted to get an idea of what I'm looking for.
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Ill get a CS up sometime in the next day or two when not dead from work
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Let me know if I need to change some things. I had a hard time figuring out the Archetype


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I'll be bringing back my girl from last time if that's okay.


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dang and here i thought i was being unique with the bow and arrow lmao
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@King Cosmos: Accepted. Will admit I'm playing favorites a little but since you're a returning player from the last iteration I feel like you get considered first.

@Dasheon: You don't have to change, but since it's a team-based RP you might want to swap powersets? Sorry, returning player and all just kind of felt like I should look at their bio first. I can help with archetypes if you want, they don't necessarily have to be literal.
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@Dasheon: You don't have to change, but since it's a team-based RP you might want to swap powersets? Sorry, returning player and all just kind of felt like I should look at their bio first. I can help with archetypes if you want, they don't necessarily have to be literal.


No no it's alright! I was just thinking anyways a bow would be super unfitting for Kairi so I'll change it up in a bit
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Concept: Warcraft
Archetype: Athena
Abilities: Since the start of her training of becoming a Magical Girl, she's put her learned skills to the test. Unfortunately she won't be able to use custom made tools to fight, she can still use them for supporting her and her allies with non-combative assets like healing capabilities, smoke screens, x-ray / night vision, and more. They are still quite buggy at the moment.

She can also summon battle gauntlets to allow her to strike harder and break through tough objects. Her physical abilities also enhance while in Magical Girl form, allowing her to move and strike swiftly, lift up to 300 lbs., react quicker, and endure a generous amount of blows.


How's this? @VitaVitaAR
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@Dasheon: Okay haven't properly looked at the rest of her bio yet, just her abilities.

But honestly I don't think this works. Not because the Archetype is a bad choice or anything, but because her ability set is pretty unfitting for it. I'm not sure where the custom made tools come in, and the training isn't really relevant. She's already a magical girl, the training comes afterwards to hone her abilities and figure out her Archetype.

As for said Archetype, rather then punching I'd expect Athena to be far more related to the actual Athena's legendary weapons and associations. For example, her spear, owls, you can easily incorporate a shield in there too. Could certainly feature something relating to the Palladion as well, which is symbolic of Athena's spear.
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@VitaVitaAR The training part was a misunderstanding on my end because I don't exactly know how the process happens. The idea I wanted was for Kairi to be a close combat fighter while also having knowledge on creating non-combative technology to help on the field. For the most part I'm not great at finding a Concept/Archetype that centers around this
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@Dasheon: I'd revisit your concepts for abilities, because creating technology doesn't really suit a magical girl.
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@VitaVitaAR

thanks for the help, hopefully the backstory and everything is good now~

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@Rune_Alchemist: Accepted.
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Oh hey, this is back I was waiting for this!

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