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It looks fine, but I have a few pointers:

As stated in the OP, dwarves don't really have gods. They worship their ancestors, and tend to get superstitious about natural phenomena they can't explain.

I get a "surprise half-dwarf" vibe from your text, and let's just clear the air right now: that's not going to happen.

Other than that, it's a good start. I'd like you to focus more on YOUR dwarf and their personal history. Who are they? What have they done? What are their skills and flaws?

Keep it up!
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Under Background, you asked for details about family - parents, siblings, spouses, children - so I'm generating that. Her history is next, although the suggestion is she may be a bit more travelled than the usual dwarf. I hadn't planned on any half-dwarves or adopted brothers of other races. I imagine they would bump their heads a lot, if they existed. Like Gandalf in a hobbit hole.

Forgot about the ancestor worship, I can work with that.

Oh, and Happy Birthday.
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@Expendable Accepted!

I'm hoping to get at least one more player before we begin. I don't mind a small group, but just three seems a bit meagre.
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Really excited at this idea! Here is my sheet for consideration!


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@tundrafrog1124 Excellent character. Accepted!

I think we have enough players now to start things up. You can expect the game to begin within a few days!
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Before I make my first post I have a couple of questions.

What exactly are the parameters of this expedition?

Has it been explained to our characters?

How was it explained?

How were our characters notified they were chosen and could they have volunteered?

Is this something that happens in Thrillem or is it an unprecedented event?
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1) Reclaim the Fist of Durin Hammerheld from the dragon in the faraway mountain.

2) Yes.

3) Thrillem has been buzzing with talk of the quest for quite some time. The elders have instructed our characters with vague directions to the mountain and a description of the weapon.

4) They were told by their clan, who probably nominated them in the first place.

5) Similar quests have taken place before, but this is the first attempt to reclaim the Fist.
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Are our characters the only members of the expedition or are there other dwarfs with us as well.
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@tundrafrog1124 You're the only ones.
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@tundrafrog1124 How's it going for you, friend? 🙂
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Should have a post up soon! Apologize for the hold up! O
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Should i wait for you to post before i get something up?
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@Eviledd1984 No, go right ahead!
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Okay i'll wait for the others to post before I post something.
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There should be more quaffing of beer. (i.e. spilling most of it while trying to drink it). Ah, tradition.
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