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Pseudo-Daredevil hijinks at base sounds good. Don't overdo it though. Just so you know though, Oratorio's probably gonna fuck with her considering how concentrated the mortals are there compared to the environments she's been in before.

For her Domain, it'd be good if you could tell me what kinda of following you'd imagine she'd be gathering up in the future.

In regards to her Divine Protection, the Domain of Souls is doing a life-sense kinda thing, so there's some overlap. I'd say in general that the Divine Protection granted would work out well enough to detect things such as moving individuals and buildings and such, but smaller objects just get either lost in the background or 'fused' together with the one carrying them (the coins in a bag would just be a bag, a bag on a person would just be a person, a person in a carriage would just be a carriage, etc). In a similar way, small movements would be pretty hard to pick out, due to how the gravitational sense itself gives a more blobby feel.

Can imagine that this Protection gives her and her followers a sense that extends to around the size of a living room, so a 10 meter radius.
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Random thought triggered.

What would your Followers be called, if you were Vtubers?
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Pseudo-Daredevil hijinks at base sounds good. Don't overdo it though. Just so you know though, Oratorio's probably gonna fuck with her considering how concentrated the mortals are there compared to the environments she's been in before.


Yes boss, I've made some edits to the CS. Please lemme know how it looks now. I will relish torturing her a bit with the sensory overload....

For her Domain, it'd be good if you could tell me what kinda of following you'd imagine she'd be gathering up in the future.


The down-trodden, the one's kicked to the curb, the used and abused, the ones seeking revenge. Her personal goal is to track down and end those who did her and her family wrong, so it would make sense her following would be seeking power or revenge.

Hm, should I make her passive more battle-centered so there's no overlap? Didn't realize Souls already had something similar set up. Might make more sense for her to have something power or revenge related anyways.

I can tweak it, re-write it, just let me know!

Also: The Power Gauntlet.
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Random thought triggered.

What would your Followers be called, if you were Vtubers?


Stellarites.
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It's up to you if you want to make it more battle-focused or not, but it should feel like something appropriate for the Domain, rather than the vibes of the Ichor-Blessed and their following. I personally wouldn't think of the Domain of Void/Gravity as a naturally war-like Domain.

Sounds good though. Kinda funny that there's probably three different Domains now that'll be angling towards appealing to the poor/unwashed masses.

Toss 'er in.
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@Estylwen@Theyra Right, pick one skill, not two, for your Personal Refinement.

Anyhow, Theyra, just do a grammar check of your backstory, and I don’t have any issues with it. It wouldn’t be as a result of Voi’s travels though. He’d have been intrinsically drawn towards Oratorio.

As well, word his Divine Protection so that it doesn’t include his name. Those things serve as a passive boon that affect everyone under the Domain of Souls, rather than Voi specifically.
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@Estylwen@Theyra Right, pick one skill, not two, for your Personal Refinement.

Anyhow, Theyra, just do a grammar check of your backstory, and I don’t have any issues with it. It wouldn’t be as a result of Voi’s travels though. He’d have been intrinsically drawn towards Oratorio.

As well, word his Divine Protection so that it doesn’t include his name. Those things serve as a passive boon that affect everyone under the Domain of Souls, rather than Voi specifically.


Okay, I have made some edits and changed his starting benefit to having the 300 wealth. Is this better?
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Yah, I'm fine with that. Send 'im.
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@Estylwen Reposting from Discord.

Once you are accepted, go to this link below. Make a copy of the spreadsheet via File > Make A Copy. After that, fill out whatever you can from there, which really shouldn't be too much. This will serve, hopefully, as a better form of record-keeping than constantly editing your post on RPGuild.

Once you do, make sure the sheet is viewable and then give me the link to it. I'll post it in this channel afterwards, as well as edit the first post of the Character Tab with it.

Link Here.
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@Estylwen@Theyra Right, pick one skill, not two, for your Personal Refinement.


For sure, I've updated my CS. How's it look now?

And I'll fill out the sheet when I have a moment, and send it over!
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Map do be up. Use this to denote your character's current location in the IC. For future shenanigans, this will be used to track hijinks like where your Property is and how much of Oratorio you rule as well, but that's like, future shit.
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@ERodeFinished to the best of my capabilities so tell me if you want anything changed. I'm open to changing the Property to Skill.


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Main thing in your backstory is that the Ichor-Blessed only existed within a year of each other, and their compulsion to head towards Oratorio is fairly strong. It's a need and a yearning and all. Adjust so that Cantor requested the transfer, and that he became the Ichor-Blessed of Preservation within the timespan of a year.

Once again, just so you're aware, Divine Protections are passives that are for the benefit of all. If you are aware, and are fine with such hijinks, then ye, I'm good with the "good at makeup" Divine Protection.

Considering the situation, I'd say...Ordo Benevolence exists. Pick out a place for it in the A-range on the map. Cantor, of course, doesn't own it, but rather than getting a free stall, I'll say that he gets a small (market-stall-sized) room to call his own inside that church building.

After those changes, you're good to go. His denomination can feel free to use masculine pronouns with the Thousand-Faced God.
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@ERodeAll changes made as requested. But yeah, I think I'm fine with the "make up", seem like everyone else 0th level is also very mundane so I keep with the theme.
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@ShovelToss it into the Character tab and go fill out the spread sheet.

@Click ThisFor the Paladin, unless you mean 'dungeons' as in literal prisons and hijinks, just remove that reference. She ain't tested in the Abyss yet.

For her Divine Protection, remove "discerning the intentions of". It's enough just to have them be more efficient working with other Followers. Mind-reading's something else. Other than that, she's good to go.
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Worthwhile to repost here, I guesssssss.

The Ichor-Blessed can call forth Miracles via ritual n such, which can cause relatively large-scale effects and impose them upon the world. Think stuff like rain-making ceremonies and all that stuff. It's probably gonna be a long while before the Ichor-Blessed are just Wizards 2.0 with their divine abilities, slinging lightning bolts n all that stuff.

Magic exists generally on a more person-to-person level. They're still puzzling out the intricacies of how the world has changed over the years since the Thousand-Faced perished. Simplest stuff would be the manifestation of elements or internally strengthening yourself. You'll need more studying n all in order to get things that exist outside of elements (think telekinesis or magical wards or stuff like that). The stuff that's even more complicated would be hijinks like directly affecting someone else's body without physically going from the outside-in (curses, buffing others, etc).

So in terms of difficulty it's basically...
Enhancing yourself > Reproducing natural phenomenon > Reproducing only 'effects' > Affecting others directly with healing or curses.
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@ShovelToss it into the Character tab and go fill out the spread sheet.

@Click ThisFor the Paladin, unless you mean 'dungeons' as in literal prisons and hijinks, just remove that reference. She ain't tested in the Abyss yet.

For her Divine Protection, remove "discerning the intentions of". It's enough just to have them be more efficient working with other Followers. Mind-reading's something else. Other than that, she's good to go.


Nah, I don't mean the Abyss.

On the Divine Protection stuff, it's more like being good at reading people, not mind reading. Or is that still too much?
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@Click ThisSo you meant prison-dungeons?

And yah, I'd say pick one or the other. I can see how being able to do both are somewhat related, but you don't need to be able to read people's intentions in order to swing pickaxes in the rhythm to a song n all. One feels more like an 'intellectual' boon, while the other feels like a 'workplace productivity' boon.
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