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Please critique if you feel inclined! Also, the bio got kinda long; sorry about that.

-Name: Mackenzie Sherman
-Age: 34
-Appearance: She is 6'3", her skin tanned brown and showing signs of early aging from working outdoors for nearly 15 years. Her medium brown hair is cut short, and her eyes are brown. She is muscular and very broad in the shoulders, weighing in at 223 lbs. She wears heavy-denim jeans, a tee-shirt, a black flight jacket, and steel-toed work boots. Reference, although not exact.
-Convenient previous occupation/hobby: Welder, with some very brief training in machining and electrical work
-Starting equipment: Lathe-sharpened steel bar with leather-wrapped handle, for use as a primitive spear; key-card which grants access to the machine shop and stockrooms of her former workplace (although it may be overrun by zombies by now)
-Bio: Mackenzie is an Icarus City native; her parents ran a mechanic's shop at which she began to help at a young age. Mechanically inclined but an average student at very best, she left high school to begin vocational training at 17, and became a certified welder after two years of training. She was hired by the city's premier fortification design and construction firm, beginning as a welder and eventually working her way into a shift-management job, until she had been offered the surprise promotion to full (albeit probationary) field engineer. As part of the company's "bottom-up" design philosophy, this meant spending two months in training at each of the company's foundational trades, electrical work and machining (she was permitted to skip the customary welding stint, for obvious reasons), as well as taking community college courses to make up for her defecits in math.

She wasn't even halfway through the machining pseudo-apprenticeship when the city fell. She, her mentor, and some of the professional machinists were working in one of the company's myriad metal shops when the notice went out company-wide: infected in the city, shelter in place, God help us all. They raided the cafeteria a floor below for whatever supplies they could find, and then the machinists' stockroom for whatever metal stock looked like it might hold an edge or a point. Being sheltered in a basement and thus unlikely to attract hostile attention, the group survived reasonably well for a week or so while the initial chaos died down, but supplies soon ran low. It became clear that the group would have to seek refuge elsewhere, if they wished to avoid cannibalism and lethal infighting. Mackenzie managed to locate a cannery with a stock of unshipped product sufficient to sustain a single person indefinitely. She lived undetected in the cannery for almost two years, but a gang of raiders recently discovered the facility; she barely escaped with two days' worth of food, and her life.
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Appovayed.,
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Alright, you guys can start posting IC now.
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Just made a post. I set Kylie up to meet Mileficent. Should be interesting.
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Very nicely done.
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Sorry, I'm a little confused with the timeline. Has the sanctuary been set up yet or no?
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Mach2 said
Just made a post. I set Kylie up to meet Mileficent. Should be interesting.


Goth criminal meets innocent child, Mileficent is gonna end up playing the 'big sister' role eventually or something xD I have a soft spot for kids
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The sanctuary has been set up....but only Lewis lives there right now.
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Ok thanks, my post will be up shortly
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Aaaaaand Mackenzie has found herself in a staring match with Lewis! Sorry my post was a bit slow.
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Name:
Gillian O'Callaghan
Age:
25
Appearance:
Red curly hair, light blue eyes, a lot of freckles. Stands at 5'5" and weighs 118 lbs.
Convenient previous occupation/hobby:
Medic
Starting equipment:
First Aide kit with antibiotics, on the field surgeon tools (needles, thread for stitches), amputation knives.
Bio:
Gillian is a mother and a full time traveling nurse who would journey to many places across America whenever she heard word of help. She would leave her daughter with her mother when she had to travel knowing their location was safe enough to return to once things were stable enough at her location she was stationed in. Unfortunately she was working at a refugee camp on the west coast of america where the virus affected many of the people. When the once peaceful community began to go crazy, every person for themselves, she fled back home to what was once the flourishing state of Florida to be with her mother and sister. Her mother decided it would be safe to stay in one of the safe holds in Key West since they were isolated ever since the bombing of the bridge that connected the last island to the rest of Florida. Thinking it was the best idea she agreed but had to leave shortly after to help out in Icarus City where . It wasn't long until the infection spread but before all lines were cut to communicate with them she made sure to inform her mother of the safe hold up in Canada where it was safer to get to by ship. Gillian has no idea if they made it there or not but she prays for their safety and that they did.
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sorry I posted so late!!! But I hope to join too!
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EllfenBrofis said
Goth criminal meets innocent child, Mileficent is gonna end up playing the 'big sister' role eventually or something xD I have a soft spot for kids


All my yes to this plan. XD

I'm also looking forward to having Kylie meeting Mackenzie. I can just picture her reaction. Stare at Mackenzie's hair and clothes and tallness for a few seconds and then ask "Are you a boy or a girl?"
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> "Are you a boy or a girl?"

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Dude, I'm so stoked!
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I will type something up. Hunter/traveler
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As for Gillian, most of it works, however, the army had formally disbanded about 50 years ago.
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K I will fix!~

Edit: Fixed!
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A'right, approved.
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Thank you very much!
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Mach2 said
All my yes to this plan. XDI'm also looking forward to having Kylie meeting Mackenzie. I can just picture her reaction. Stare at Mackenzie's hair and clothes and tallness for a few seconds and then ask "Are you a boy or a girl?"


That is going to be hilarious xD

Kylie: "Are you a boy or a girl???"
Mileficent: "Pffffffffftttttt!!!!! xD"

lmfao
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