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Should hopefully get something up by tomorrow.
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What city is this set in?
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Deadline's Wednesday, btw.
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Meant more like what it's name is.
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Also, was my character approved?
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Meant more like what it's name is.


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Also, was my character approved?


Asuras is waiting until Wednesday for the final acceptance sweep.
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oh ok.@OwO
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Probably went overboard.


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Got the goddamn murrican government in on it now?

Guess the Illuminati are real after all.
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@ERode
If there was oil in the Dark City, they'd probably try to invade it.
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Obscurity is just another way of saying 'oil'.

Also
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Man, the characters coming out are gonna be fun to see how they interact. Very excited.
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Mann, this is the coolest thing since sliced bread, but when declaring interest initially, I didn’t realise how bad the timing was, haha. I’ll still be travelling until the end of the week, so I don’t think I can really sit down and finish a character in time.

Maybe if there’s more slots later on or if someone drops, I can try again though? Would love to be part of this eventually.
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In the same boat as Vertigo - I've been too busy with work to get very far into my CS, and am working through Wednesday. I have a few days off after that; would also be down to change up my character to make her of the Dynamicism Crest so we have all the crests represented, though again, I wouldn't be able to get it done by Wednesday.
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Going to be reading sheets today. Note that not all slots will necessarily be filled. If all slots are not filled, then they'll remain open to application indefinitely.
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@Sky Blue I can't accept this character. There's a number of issues, but most notable is that I get the impression that you either didn't really read through the setting or otherwise opted to use a character you had in your back pocket regardless of whatever you did read. But besides that, there's contradictions here, and even presumptuousness. What makes you think gods outside the Norse pantheon won't be as important? Where in the setting did it say that there exist different 'species' to play as, or for that matter, a shapeshifter specifically?

It's these sorts of things that gives me the impression that you took a character meant for elsewhere and dropped them in here, heedless of setting. How can he be both a prodigy but also showing merely 'signs' of skill and also lacking experience and control? These are polar opposites. But also, presuming a shapeshifter, that wouldn't even be a Craft, but a latent ability.

Ultimately I can't do much with this character for the plotline, never mind that they are not adapted well for the setting itself.

@ERode Looks good. There is a gap between the "itch" she developed as a mundane, and having entered the Dark Sphere. Should I presume that her Crest was a development of this itch (an infection/lingering of some arcane nature), or her eventually finding her way into the Dark Sphere purposefully? If the latter, was it the itch that guided her in, or more happenstance that exposed her? Alternatively, you can leave it to me, as I'd be happy to add in elements to this gap.

Accepted.

@Estylwen Checks out. Reina does read as a mage of a bit higher caliber than what I intend to allow at the start of the plotline, though there is some freedom here. Nevertheless I will note immediately that her strength will have some complications developing early on, but I will discuss this with you.

Her Riding the Dimensional Drift craft, however I will need to note is beyond the abilities of a character I wish to allow for the moment, specifically for setting reasons: even as a weaker representation of the Labyrinth, the Dark City is highly resistant to navigation. Spells that move you between locations within the Dark City are exceptionally rare and difficult to perform. This, tied with the Dark City still being an "overlay" upon the city means that the kind of teleportation you describe in this spell is not something Reina can achieve [at her expected skill level].

@OwO Accepted. No notes, looks good.

@Kronshi Also good. No notes. I will be sure to make him suffer.

@Remram Trace... On. Looks good. I genuinely did not expect someone would go for this sort of idea; military "dark forces" that is.

@ERode@Estylwen@OwO@Kronshi@Remram Please place your sheets in the character tab. With that, we have filled 5 slots and I am closing applications.

Next steps are that I will begin to formulate the plotlines. During this period I will be checking in with players here and there to ask questions and discuss background things. If I don't contact you don't worry; it doesn't mean I've got nothing for your character. Additionally, during this time, you're welcome to forge pre-existing relationships with one another. This is not required, however, and don't feel obligated to do so. You'll all get roped in together one way or another with time regardless.

I will hopefully begin IC within a few days.
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Oh that closed a few hours sooner than I thought. Unlucky.

Good luck to everyone who made it in.
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@Asuras Duly noted, I'll remove the Drift for now. And I'll be happy to take on any weaknesses/complications you see fit to place.

I'll reach out to our fellow players to discuss relationships later today, ideally. :)
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Menhara girl and mental attack ally.

Surely this won't cause any problems in the future.
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