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Lol, I love making Bios, but I understand XD

Calum, apart from the age thing, your sheet seems decent to me, though a few things, mostly to do with combat.
Forsythe, the unprecedented combat is from the sybiote, not the Host, as far as I understand.
As for combat, perhaps specify the skill under the Symbiote rather than the host, as, while they share skills, its the Symbiotes knowledge. Also, Tok'ra aren't usually quite up to Jaffa level of skill due to not practicing nearly as much. For a Jaffa, combat is life, for a Tok'ra, combat is something you do when things are going badly.
I'll add it to the accepted characters list once you have updated it.
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I was going to say something, however I forgot. So I posted this instead.
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I want to work on something. I'm not certain on what, however. Who do we need?
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Ground team, scientists. Head of research...
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You could even import Doctor Evil if you want to keep him around.
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In other news, Ariadne's sheet is nearing completion.
Hopefully I can post it tomorrow.
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I have altered the bio so Ahmos was a Goa'uld who defected. I hope that will suffice but if not tell me what you'd like changed and I can do my best to alter it.

Just saw the nit pics from you guys. Not to worry I'll get on it. I did write this in the early hours last night lol

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Ok I have updated the bio. I hope it is more acceptable now. I also ironed out the idea of the combat. Sorry it was my bad, he was supposed to be an efficient assassin grade fighter. He works best when not seen.
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great, i don't see any problem now :)
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You guys still accepting? If so how many Tok'ra/Goa'uld slots are left?
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Hurray! I look forward to getting this underway.
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The RP is still recruiting, yes.

Unless Sep/Echo changes things, there's right now no Tok'ra slots left. Not sure if he had any goa'uld slots planned, but you can always ask.
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Well an Assassin doesn't make an effective warrior. An assassin is entirely different relying on remaining unseen, if his opponents know he is there he is pretty much screwed. Also I doubt an Ashrak would defect but I'll give it a read, hell I doubt the Tok'ra would let in an Ashrak.

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You guys still accepting? If so how many Tok'ra/Goa'uld slots are left?


Still recruiting, no more Tok'ra slots and we already have two infiltrators on board otherwise I would allow a Goa'uld infiltrator.
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He's not an Ashrak. I was basing his fighting style on the assassins Anubis left aboard one of his ships ( I can't remember what they were called).
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Oh they were his Jaffa elite guard...
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Sep said Still recruiting, no more Tok'ra slots and we already have two infiltrators on board otherwise I would allow a Goa'uld infiltrator.


Damn, I wanted to have a split personality character, I love those. Ah well I'll come up with something else.
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Sep said
Oh they were his Jaffa elite guard...


Ah well the way they were stealthed was what I was going for. Able to fight as any other jaffa/Goa'uld but for assassination puposes. I'm not saying he'd go in guns blazing or anything so do not expect a Tok'ra Terminator lol
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So, you were basically a sneaky backstabbing Goa'uld.
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Cayden Black said
Ah well the way they were stealthed was what I was going for. Able to fight as any other jaffa/Goa'uld but for assassination puposes. I'm not saying he'd go in guns blazing or anything so do not expect a Tok'ra Terminator lol


*Is human, and firepower obsessed*

SYSTEM LORD FLEET?
NUKES
ANCIENT FLEET USED AGAINST US?
NUUUUUUUUUUUKES
THE ANCIENTS AND THE WRAITH TOGETHER? (hah)
MORE NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUKES
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To begin with no, but it's a skill Ahmos has mastered. Ninja from necessity I guess covers my meaning.
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GravityFlux said
*Is human, and firepower obsessed*SYSTEM LORD FLEET?NUKESANCIENT FLEET USED AGAINST US?NUUUUUUUUUUUKESTHE ANCIENTS AND THE WRAITH TOGETHER? (hah)MORE NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUKES


You realize nukes aren't as effective in space as they are in orbit... riiiighhhtttt?

The best way to use nukes in space combat is by what the Daedalus perfects and beams nukes aboard enemy ships.
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