I added those locations, plus a few roads and some train tracks extending from Mecanizada to Jubil since they're the most developed cities in Sord thus far (forgot the cavern, so I'll add that later ><; ). I also added Aoli, another town that's a bit larger than Izumo and has a Sect monastery that Melvin and Co. will strike, although I may move it more north to avoid the swamp or add a route that he knows to prevent them from slowing down.
If you want to add a gang of bandits, what overall purpose will they serve? Will they just be standalone baddies that give the heroes a reason to meet each other, or are they part of a larger conspiracy by the Sect or Sord's government? Melvin's team will be going to Aoli to attack that temple, but I hope to have the Sect destroy that church themselves and cleverly lay the blame on Melvin, thus making them national criminals.
BTW Gareth, if I didn't look to see who your character was, I would have had no idea who you were RPing as in your latest post. You solely used the 'he' pronoun, which confused me.