El_Tigre said
Could someone give me the skinny on what is going on in the IC? I read the opening post and like the 4 or 5 after that but from there I sort of slacked off due to sickness. But I am better (mostly) and would like to get a post up while I had some time but I can't read through everything AND post lol. So if someone could give me the important info (excluding the OP) that'd be nifty :) Then I can make a post and go about reading through all the posts at my leisure lol

InspectorGadget said
Oi. I'll go look. And Probably the best way to complain to me is in PM. Because i see it first thing. Instead of scrolling through... because I only skim the ooc. I'll look.

Chrononaut said
wot the fok did ye just say m8? i dropped out of newcastle primary skool im the sickest bloke ull ever meet & ive nicked 300 candy bars from tha corner store. im trained in street fitin’ & im the strongest foker in tha entire newcastle gym. yer nothin to me but a cheeky lil dickhead w/ a hot mum & fake bling. ill waste u and smash a fokin bottle oer yer head bruv, i swer 2 christ. ya think u can fokin run ya gabber at me whilst sittin on yer arse behind a lil screen? think again wanka. im callin me homeboys rite now preparin for a proper rumble. tha rumble thatll make ur nan sore jus hearin about it. yer a waste bruv. my homeboys be all over tha place & ill beat ya to a proper fokin pulp with me fists wanka. if i aint satisfied w/ that ill borrow me m8s cricket paddle & see if that gets u the fok out o’ newcastle ya daft kunt. if ye had seen this bloody fokin mess commin ye might a’ kept ya gabber from runnin. but it seems yer a stewpid lil twat, innit? ima shite fury & ull drown in it m8. ur in proper mess ya knobhead *Useless badass motherfuckery exposition*

Kiddo said Also your post doesn't mesh so great with ours, since both of them stood around looking about them for a while, and at least goblins have very good hearing and eyesight. It would be better if your character rode up after they'd already been chilling for a while, just so that you don't make both our characters have to be blind/deaf xD

Kiddo said
Ah, well... like you say, five minutes isn't really enough time for them to approach from out of line of sight in such a way that Dssialii wouldn't have seen them when examining the surroundings. Still want your character to come relieve us of our boredom, though :P

InspectorGadget said
He's blind and deaf, remember? I tend to assume my posts are being made at the same time as the characters who are posting their own posts. Otherwise is a linear, depthless progression of events that makes me fall asleep. I get it though. No one wants to feel like their post was ignored. I should have probably pmed you guys first... But I feel like I'm above the law of courtesy among RPers. I'm also wrong a lot.EDIT: The achievement for having most hiders in the Compendium goes to this guy. Yeah. That makes me better than all of you. It really doesn't. Ignore me. I'm in a pretty good mood, despite having to trash my comical post because you guys want me to follow silly things like line of sight and hearing and progression of time. Gosh. Uh.. Yeah. Someone post something.

HellHoundWoof said
I see, sorry that my character was not up to par. I also appologize for my inadequacies in spelling and my grammar, English is my second language.At the moment I am without my computer which affects the quality of my post. I am working from a tablet as well hence the reason I could not open the link for the history, as well as the one for the CS. Also the compendium I had assumed it was for applications. In response to some of your critiques, he left the city through a secret dock but as you said earlier the lands of Taure do not exist here so mentioning the islands of Ju'ra Yes it is a pre-made character from some time ago, I was not aware the elves of this RP are so long lived I assumed they aged more closely to humans, his political career circles around that which is why he is not seen as a 15 year old.. As per the magic I appologize though my character does not use magic. His 'spread' range of skills is simple, He has a liking for polotics from his father and what man of any wealth does not take on a means of defending himself and his honor, granted the archery could be too much if accompanied by swordsmanship. His skills as a torturer merely come from a politiciansmind set, analytical and calculating. I can also set his appearance up more if that would please you. I am happy to tailor my character to the standards you've set and will gladly work with anyone willing to help. Though this response may seem to say otherwise I thank you for your critiques. Edit: This is also my first Advanced RP.

Darkmatter said
Decided to split this Chapter post into two parts. The first for Shankee, the second for Bawzel. The former will be summoning all the adventures and the latter will be calling for his generals (sicarius, inspector and NPCs (or other players who join between now and then)).Well then, it is good that you took the criticism constructively and I would be delighted to have you on board The thing with advanced is they require time investment. They have the most reading/writing but also the most reward. The plot and character development are to a higher standard. All I ask is to make the character a part of Enduwin make it fit. Feel free to create a new race even, we have a lot of humans Mostly, it's just that the grammar, syntax etc need to be maintained to a high standard and all's good