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Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by MMGiru
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Welp, that last match was exceptionally short and grim. Anyway: posted.

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Edited to correct a sentence with a lost train of thought.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Dizzmcd
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Posted. Nice response from Yui
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Sorry to say Dizz but you might have to start improving your post quality. This is in the advanced section and whilst I'm fine with low-advanced standards posts still need to be more developed than your last. I understand the setting hasn't been brilliant lately and I also get that advanced can be a steep learning curve (I don't think I'm very good myself) but I want to avoid any mods coming in and reprimanding us all for something I should be keeping check on.

I'm willing to help you and I hope you don't take this as offensive in any way it's just something that needs to be kept in check :)
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I'll just have my character at the base.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Dizzmcd
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I'll do what I can from now on.
I edited the post, added a bit more to it. Idk if the content is enough, but I'll at least make them longer.
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Thanks Dizz, again I don't want you to be offended or anything your definitely part of this RP :) it's just later on when the story develops I'm planning for things to get a lot more fleshed out etc. I suppose this should really be in the Casual section but I can't move it and I think it would do everyone well to try and reach Advanced standards, including myself!

So thanks for editing Dizz and I'm sure you've got the skills! lets have some fun ;D
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Everblight said
Thanks Dizz, again I don't want you to be offended or anything your definitely part of this RP :) it's just later on when the story develops I'm planning for things to get a lot more fleshed out etc. I suppose this should really be in the Casual section but I can't move it and I think it would do everyone well to try and reach Advanced standards, including myself! So thanks for editing Dizz and I'm sure you've got the skills! lets have some fun ;D


I'm not offended. As long as i'm lacking lengthy posts, not posts with important content, then I should be fine. I can make them longer, and more developed, especially as the story goes on.
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Ugh, I'm pretty tired. I'll post tomorrow morning, I promise!

EDIT: there we go, that's a post (I think)
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by MMGiru
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So, should I perhaps delete or rework my IC post? I'm feeling like it might suit the flow of the scene better to not have that dialogue there, given lack of acknowledgement. I could have him not say anything, or have him back at the dojo. I don't want to come across as sour here; any suggestions are welcome.

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EDIT: Also, are we in physical bodies? I didn't notice Sin had pickpocketed some dude befor, but I thought we were in Karakura.
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MMGiru said
So, should I perhaps delete or rework my IC post? I'm feeling like it might suit the flow of the scene better to not have that dialogue there, given lack of acknowledgement. I could have him not say anything, or have him back at the . I don't want to come across as sour here; any suggestions are welcome.--EDIT: Also, are we in physical bodies? I didn't notice Sin had pickpocketed some dude befor, but I thought we were in Karakura.


it was a flashback...
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by MMGiru
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Aah, sorry; I didn't pay enough attention, apparently.
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I dont think there's any need to edit the post. I tried to acknowledge your speech in my post, but it was kinda hard because there was so much to take into consideration, and I had to make stuff move on as well. Don't be offended, some times people just prioritize differently in their posts :)
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Sorry everyone seems this thread unsubscribed itself for me o.O I've been revising a lot for school lately as to why I've been a bit distant but I'll work on some stuff tonight :)
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Thanks for the reassurance, Hansa. I accrue anxiety about shit like this. I suppose it's not a huge issue; not like anyone is counting on him to speak right now. I should get back to being excited about my first Bleach RP.

Also, Mother's Day is over for me, which is nice.
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I'll post tonight guys :) we might want to begin thinking about who will fight the leuitenants and who will NPC them! So voice your opinions
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Everblight said
We might want to begin thinking about who will fight the leuitenants and who will NPC them! So voice your opinions


Honestly, I don't really have a preference. Strategically, it would be pretty good to have Akio fight one, so we get that valuable information, but then again that works with any opponent. So yeah, you guys choose :P
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Dizzmcd
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i honestly don't prefer to control a character I didn't create. I wouldn't know how to make them act, despite my religious love of bleach and rangiku.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Derren Krenshaw
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I could give NPCing a lieutenant a shot, especially if we have people interested in fighting the two (there are only two for the first fight, yes?) Lieutenants coming over. Fighting Rangiku with Yui could be fun, but I think it'd be more interesting to have her fight someone like Hisagi... or maybe one of the weaker captains if we're short on opponents for them.
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I don't know bleach a ton. So i am not comfortable controlling a capt or lieutenant
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Would this be accepting anymore recruits?
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