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Name:
Prince

Age:
18

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Magic:
Caster-Type: Requip
Holder-Type: Masquerade



Magic Level:
B(?)





Team Members:
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Three Strengths:
1. Great intellect.
2. Quite the versatile fighter
3. Compassionate

Three Weaknesses:
1. Coward
2. Changing between his masks takes a few precious seconds which the opponent may use to his advantage.
3. He is average, physically, without the aid of his magic.

Greatest Love:
Books and solitude.

Motivation:
To make the world respect him and if that is impossible, fear him.
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Both are too familiar!

And I am seeing a Obe piece ability here or am I mistaken? No offense thou! But I also think such an ability would be S Level.....you can simple dismember a person or switch his heart.... I am no Gm here so it's not my job to judge but I still find it extremely powerfull and unbalanced~
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Haha, except for the fact that he's a player,and she's not
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Gravislayer said
And I am seeing a Obe piece ability here or am I mistaken? No offense thou! But I also think such an ability would be S Level.....you can simple dismember a person or switch his heart.... I am no Gm here so it's not my job to judge but I still find it extremely powerfull and unbalanced~


It's an older character of mine which was based (ability-wise) on Law's Ope Ope no Mi. I, too, can't decide whether it's overpowered for an A-class mage or not so am waiting for a GM's opinion.
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Since it can instant dismembering an enemy and so making him completely useless in combat I think so. You can simply cut through anyone and then stab him....this way even the pain thing (Which is guess you added to tone the power down) would be ignored!

I mean you have a sphere where you can control everything inside. Meaning attacks entering the field can be thrown back and people inside would find themselves or rather their body parts shattered all over the ground! It isn't even fully explained in the OP lore and so....just ehhhh well I find it certainly over powered!

If you look at FT even a sphere with full Gravity control is troublesome enough to put Gildarts down and a certain female mage is putting up quiet a show by just altering her weight. You sphere allows many many more....
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Okay so I'll try to get through as many of these characters as I can this morning, and then dirkinz and I will get the rest and check through the ones I already did.

Jangel13 said
could I join? I have a question though, personally my favorite thing is lightning abilities but im wondering if i could modify that and actually be a first generation dragon hunter with lightning abilities


Dragon Slayer magic has been sealed as it says in the OOC, but you could create some original variation on lightning magic. Please try to make something different then Laxus' lightning magic, yes it is cool, but we want to come up with as many original abilities as we can.

Gravislayer said


I'm not seeing anything out of place (besides the spelling errors) or too overpowered, so unless dirkinz thinks otherwise for some reason you're accepted.

Caits said


Looks good, same as gravislayer unless dirkinz sees something wrong with it (which is unlikely for either of your characters) you're good.
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Name: Natsume Fong
Age: 18
Magic:
Blaze Crimson(Fire Magic)
-Natsume's fire magic is unusual, it is colored neon red, she uses it in a stealthy way by infusing the palm of her hands which later becomes hot for assassin duties. When in full force, she would send off condensed and concentrated fireball attacks from her palm and destructive barrage of flames, she is also capable of creating inanimate and creative appearances of flames much of like a Phoenix and a Dragon. Burning is her main method of killing, neon flames are just about two times hotter than normal flames. It's weakness still applies, water, wind and by any means it can be countered and it's mana consumption rate is doubled compare to normal fire magic, risky but practical.

Magic Level: A

History:
Born into a prestigious family of assassins, Natsume had it tough on her childhood, undergoing countless trials of murder and torture since she was 10 but the results are what made her the person she is today. An abnormal fact is that, she's not even guilty for the people she killed in the past, that's why she is merciless in battle. Natsume's fire magic is something inspired from her torture of hot objects from her family, not that she is a masochist, she would often train by torturing herself with hot objects and the latter fighting fire itself. After eight years of torture, Natsume is relieved from her duties of an Assassin by her own will, she ran away from home and eventually joined Phoenix Wing.

Personality:
Natsume is full of enthusiasm, ever ready when the going gets tough, she always look for something to do that keeps her occupied and refrain from getting bored. She values her independence as well as acknowledge people who values their freedom, Natsume is level headed, she would do anything to stay calm and cheer up herself or those who need encouragement. However she is also timid and lazy when it comes to something disturbing but when she needs to fight, she's up for it but this is for better or worse, she doesn't hesitate to kill regardless of age and gender, that is her dark side.
Team Members: (None yet)
Three Strengths:
1. Keen Intellect
2. Determined
3. Fire resistance but not entirely immune to fire.
Three Weaknesses:
1. The cold, she can't stand super cold temperature even if it is cold drinks or food to a certain extent, she is sensitive.
2. Lack of empathy to the sinful. Be it a foe or a friend, her inability to let someone live can be called a strength but it doesn't change the fact that it is injustice and it would terrify the people around her thus isolating her.
3. She's bad at cooking, she burns it up too easily.

Greatest Love: Fireworks
Motivation: To live a new life.
Appearance:

Additional details:
Don't piss her off, you might actually regret it.
Name is not a shout out to Natsu Dragneel.
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Panda-Man said
Caster Magic: Circle of Scorn

The Circle of Scorn allows its user to create a spherical space or "room", where the user has complete control over the placement and orientation of everything inside. He uses his ability in combination with his sword which is vital for his offensive and defensive repertoire regarding his opponents as he can freely dismember them without causing any harm for that is the only taboo that he dares not break since any actual pain that he causes will be inflicted three fold upon him.

Inside the sphere, he can manipulate anything such as the terrain or gravity in what he describes as a "surgical" manner. Through this ability, Prince can also lift or displace objects of any size, attach separated body parts in any manner he sees fit (such as sticking someone's head to a barrel) and even switch peoples' "hearts", which is shown to effectively switch minds. After switching people's minds or messing with someone's body parts, only Prince himself can reverse it, but the recipient(s) must be present in order for him to restore them. People separated by this ability are not killed nor harmed and can still feel their separated parts, regardless of the distance.

I'm thinking this is too overpowered and classifies as at least S class, so I'm going to reject your application. I'll get to Masaki's character later, as I am short on time at the moment.
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Sure thingk I will look forward to approval and i come up with an original fire magic that I will develop as the rp progresses.
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Phobos said
Interested, I'll let a person or two post a cs before I post mines

Awesome, cant wait.

Jangel13 said
could I join? I have a question though, personally my favorite thing is lightning abilities but im wondering if i could modify that and actually be a first generation dragon hunter with lightning abilities

Im afraid I must say no, all dragon, god, and devil, slayer magic and the like has been sealed so that it cannot be used anymore. However, lightning magic can still be used in other forms.

Gravislayer said
History: When he was around 16 the caravan made it's way to Fiore, there Sidious heard words of a guild of mages and so was naturally interested in them.

Good bio Gravislayer, your in (unless the Midget has something to say). And just so you know, Phoenix Wing is not the only guild in Fiore nor is it the biggest, even so, guilds are still sort of frowned upon and not talked about all that often.

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Name: Sasha Shin
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I think you are good to go but wait for the midget's approval.
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lordmidget said
I'm thinking this is too overpowered and classifies as at least S class, so I'm going to reject your application. I'll get to Masaki's character later, as I am short on time at the moment.


Fair enough, I'll try to come up with something original and edit accordingly.
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so regular lightning magic is still allowed? I only saw stuff loxas used and I wasn't sure if im allowed to use his moves
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Haha, Im terrible with pages, I always forget to check if there is a new on, whoops. Anyways, i suppose my last post didnt have anything new so ill check Masaki's CS but first I have a few more comments for Panda-Man
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History:
From a young age he was recruited in a local gang and forced to lead unsuspecting civilians into a trap set by the rest of the gang which could then plunder freely. However, his magical ability soon became apparent and the leader of the small gang, a Dark mage, decided to teach the young boy the ways of magic in order to acquire a tool that would later prove invaluable. Up to the tender age of 14, Prince had masted the basics of his weird ability

Greatest Love:
Nothing that he is aware of.

Motivation:
Has no motivation.

Okay, so I agree with the Midget about Circle of Scorn being far too powerful but I also have some other issues, Partially because we should have made it clear in the OP. But anyways, in the 100 years that were for the most part without magic, one of the main focuses of governmental research was into anti-magic stuff. As such the army has become very powerful when it comes to dealing with mages so a small mage gang does not seem likely. Also, No love or Motivation? really? How does prince get himself up in the morning and why would he do anything at all once he has gotten up? Since he has amnesia, his motivation could be to find his memories, or perhaps he just wants lots of money so he can make a castle under water. And there has to be something he really loves doing, eating, drinking, perhaps he has a girlfriend in town, or maybe again he loves money, and wants as much as he can get of it.

OK, time for masaki

........ *reads CS* ......

well that's pretty good, I like, it your in.
Jangel13 said
so regular lightning magic is still allowed? I only saw stuff loxas used and I wasn't sure if im allowed to use his moves


Just for reference, Laxus was a dragon Slayer (granted a fake one) and so he drew from the same source of power as all dragon slayers. However, he also knew normal lightning magic so a lot of his spells that didnt require punching or kicking or roaring are feasible. So, if you want to use lightning magic, perhaps it could be something like:
1. They can use electrical shocks straight to their own muscles to increase reaction time, strength, and speed, as well as be able to deal small shocks to any opponents they hit, slowing down their reactions.
2. Zeus's lightning spears
3. Lightning molding magic could be interesting.
4. sith style force lightning
5. The ability to call down lightning from the sky.
6. a combination of any of the above
7. anything else.
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I can work with that. I guess ill be a lightning user
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oooof....Everyone is an A level mage...

Now I'm not sure if I want to join since everyone seems to want to be one step away from S rank

Or if I have to join so we have someone who is at least as low as B in power.
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Name: "the lightning king" Angelo Ortega
Age: 19
Magic: lightning magic. I can super charge my body to hurt people that attack me and making me twice as fast, I can also shoot lightning bolts as fast as real lightning
Magic Level: B
History: I lived doing absolutely nothing, I did magic in a small town to entertain people although not many people liked magic to begin with I did small shows for kids that didn't believe their parents and get chump change from time to time but I never stayed in one place to long. I tried going to different places that had some people that appreciated my magical abilities but sadly their were none to be found so I just kept trying even if it got me nowhere but most of the time I just sat on a floor and held out my hands for a hand out from kind people I never had a good job but when I learned about phoenix guild that I joined them 3 years back or even a good family for that matter, I left home when I was 10 wanting to make it on my own, after 2 years of being on my own I was lonely and I didn't have any friends and I barley had any food to feed myself half the time but a crow was nearby looking just as hungry as me although I was hungry I didn't want to let an innocent animal die either, so I gave him a few pieces of my bread and he took it happily and I smiled at him and after that me and my crow mark I distracted shop owners and mark would grab some bread so we could eat together although I miss my mom terribly I couldn't stay with my abusive father and I told him I would make something out of myself but so far nothing good has happened. but when I saw the guild of the phoenix wing I wanted to join them to prove myself.
Personality: I do everything I can to do the work right and I usually laugh in the most tense of situations I can smile most of the time but im usually quiet....unless im drinking
Team Members: does my pet bird mark count?
Three Strengths:
1.can take advantage of water molding magic
2. can smile in even the worst of situations
3. can be inspirational to others
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. nervous around new people
2. weakness to earth wall magic or any defense type earth magic
3.hates being in dark places like caves
Greatest Love: being an entertainer
Motivation: wants to prove he can be the best no matter what
Appearance: http://ts1.mm.bing.net/th?id=HN.608003026632180766&w=205&h=190&c=7&rs=1&pid=1.7
Additional Details: wears a gold angel necklace from his mother before he left
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KiltmanBagz said
oooof....Everyone is an A level mage...Now I'm not sure if I want to join since everyone seems to want to be one step away from S rankOr if I have to join so we have someone who is at least as low as B in power.


A level is actually rather far from S level but I do agree, and The midget and I may go through a little later and rank each magic ourselves. For one, I feel like Sidious Viper's magic is actually probably B level. Also I want to clarify to everyone (and Ill get this on the OP a little later) that magic level, is not necessarily how powerful your magic is. for example, A person with the most powerful magic could not know how to use it and so have a C rank, or a person with the magic that is considered the most simple and weak could perhaps have a really different way of using it that raises them to A rank. So everyone who reads this, please reevaluate your rank if it needs it.
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Mhh the problem is for what i have in mind it probably will be A level~ But well i could make him B level if people do feel uncomfortable with it~ i mean it does give me more potential to grow beyond my limits
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Jangel13 said
Name: "the lightning king" Angelo Ortega
Age: 19
Magic: lightning magic
History: I lived doing absolutely nothing, I did magic in a small town to entertain people and get chump change from time to time but I never had a good job or even a good family for that matter, I left when I was 10 wanting to make it on my own, although I miss my mom terribly I couldn't stay with my abusive father and I told him I would make something out of myself but so far nothing good has happened. but when I saw the guild of the phoenix wing I wanted to join them to prove myself.
Team Members: does my bird mark count?
Three Strengths:
1.can take advantage of water magic
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
2. weakness to earth magic


So, I like the premise of Angelo but I have a few comments.
Age: later in the CS you said you left when you were 10 and joined Phoenix Wing. Im afraid phoenix wing is only five years old at most.
History: Magic in a small town would not get you any money, People are still very suspicious of magic in all forms, if anything they might run you out of town. Also, 10 years old is really young to strike out on your own but it is possible, just be reasonable about it.
team members: bird mark? if you are referring to the guild symbol then no it does not count.
Strengths & Weaknesses: be more specific with the strong/weak to elements of magic. In Fiore, magic comes in so many different forms that water or earth magic can mean hundreds of things.
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Revised the CS and came up with an ability am quite proud of.
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