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Gravislayer said
Mhh the problem is for what i have in mind it probably will be A level~ But well i could make him B level if people do feel uncomfortable with it~ i mean it does give me more potential to grow beyond my limits


Im not saying you cant be A level, but from what you described, it seemed like he was good at the magic he used but it was obvious he could improve significantly. Thats what it felt like to me anyways. You may use whatever you want, just know that me and the midget may ask everyone with A rank to either defend it or reduce the rank to (if we do it will be by PM)
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dirkinz said
So, I like the premise of Angelo but I have a few comments.Age: later in the CS you said you left when you were 10 and joined Phoenix Wing. Im afraid phoenix wing is only five years old at most.History: Magic in a small town would not get you any money, People are still very suspicious of magic in all forms, if anything they might run you out of town. Also, 10 years old is really young to strike out on your own but it is possible, just be reasonable about it.team members: bird mark? if you are referring to the guild symbol then no it does not count.Strengths & Weaknesses: be more specific with the strong/weak to elements of magic. In Fiore, magic comes in so many different forms that water or earth magic can mean hundreds of things.


im not referring to a guild symbol im referring to a pet that I got during my travels
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is mine better now?
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Panda-Man said
Revised the CS and came up with an ability am quite proud of.

Oh man, now I really like prince, well done with the magic (even if some of the higher power masks are a bit dark) And I assume it works as a requip magic?
As far as I am concerned, you are accepted.

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im not referring to a guild symbol im referring to a pet that I got during my travels

All right, then it depends on how your character would categorize them. Also, put things like this in your history.
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dirkinz said
Oh man, now I really like prince, well done with the magic (even if some of the higher power masks are a bit dark) And I assume it works as a requip magic?As far as I am concerned, you are accepted.


Actually..great idea, with Requip magic I can turn Masquerade into a Holder type which makes sense instead of Caster type.
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Jangel13 said
is mine better now?


Ok so I've been reading through yours and talked to dirkinz and I think I know what the problems are.

1. You need to explain your magic, more then just titling it. Yes you have lightning magic but what kind of magic, give examples! Does lightning form around your body? Do you shoot lightning out of your fingers? Do you call lightning down from the sky? Or do you do something else?
2. In your history, you state that you performed magic in a small town but that wouldn't get you any money, people don't really like magic.
3. In general write more! Describe your characters actions with more details. How did your character do the action? What was your character feeling when he did it?
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Panda-Man said
Actually..great idea, with Requip magic I can turn Masquerade into a Holder type which makes sense instead of Caster type.


Requip is a caster magic.
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lordmidget said
Requip is a caster magic.


Indeed, which allows for Masquerade to be Holder-type. In which case, two types of magic. Allowed or should I change it back to Caster-Type?
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Indeed, which allows for Masquerade to be Holder-type. In which case, two types of magic. Allowed or should I change it back to Caster-Type?

Okay, so you use the caster magic: requip, to requip your holder magic: masquerade right?
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I wanted him to not fully have full control over his magic at the beginning and also i wanted to create a kind of "difference" between Caits and my character. While she creates things to help her indirectly, i am creating things to boost me directly.

Like creating an Armadillo like armor to boost defense and offense or to a skorpion one to therefor increase speed and offense. Also tricks like quick sand or sand-storms would distract and lower the enemy´s mobility



It more resembles take over i know~ But that´s what i found interesting about that idea~~~
Sure simple crafting like weapons are manageable too but i wanted him to be based on that~
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Making a CS now, is it okay if he's S-classed with a Take Over magic?o.o
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Gravislayer said
I wanted him to not fully have full control over his magic
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That sounds fine
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Phobos said
Making a CS now, is it okay if he's S-classed with a Take Over magic?o.o


Silly Shoske
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Okay, so you use the caster magic: requip, to requip your holder magic: masquerade right?


Exactly.
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Zane620 said
Silly Shoske

Get outta here!! *kicks Zane in the ass out the door*
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Phobos said
Making a CS now, is it okay if he's S-classed with a Take Over magic?o.o

You can make an A class mage who has the potential to eventually develop into an S class wizard. But currently we're only accepting A class wizards, the guild master will probably be the only S class wizard and might not even qualify as "Master" class magic.
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Panda-Man said
Exactly.


Okay, sounds good
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im good to go, I hope
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Still recruiting? :)

How casual are we talking about here, high or low? The fact that you'd require strengths/weaknesses listed in a CS is, well, discouraging if i'm to be frank.
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Jangel13 said
im good to go, I hope

you still are saying that you practiced magic in a small town for entertainment, and that doesnt fly in Fiore right now.

Forsythe said
Still recruiting? :)How casual are we talking about here, high or low? The fact that you'd require strengths/weaknesses listed in a CS is, well, discouraging if i'm to be frank.

We are indeed, and its medium on the casual scale. Fairy tail by nature is rather high spirited and comic and we wanted to stick to that. Also, I generally have the strength/weakness aspect mainly to discourage mary-sues/gary-stues and people that are "good at everything when it is convenient"
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