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I'm having major difficulties writing my character's history without turning it into a novel <__<
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Tan S Lake said
I'm having major difficulties writing my character's history without turning it into a novel <__<


Just go for it.

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We've all been there, haha.
Tan S Lake said
I'm having major difficulties writing my character's history without turning it into a novel <__<


We've all been there, haha. It'll be helpful with understanding your character :)
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Tan S Lake said
I'm having major difficulties writing my character's history without turning it into a novel <__<


I have chapters and everything for mine... and I didnt even go into great detail.
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Just think of gruesome ways to kill their parents.

That's what most of us did anyway :D
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Tan S Lake said
I'm having major difficulties writing my character's history without turning it into a novel <__<


haha, doesn't need to be some in-depth story. You can phase out some details here and there, we don't need to know that they scraped their knee when they were 4 and it reeaaaally hurt, ya know? Basically, where were they from? What sort of life did they live? Poor? Okay? Well-to-do? What were some major events in their life that made them who they are today or could be critical to their story as it continues? How did they get here?

Kestrel said
Just think of gruesome ways to kill their parents.That's what most of us did anyway :D


Hey, I prefer to maim my characters before they even make it into the story.
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>.>;

You guys are evil.
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Name: Cristoff Whitemarch
Age: 24
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Appearance: An average looking man by any description, Cristoff stands at 5’8”, with a somewhat thinner build than average. His neck-length hair – always neatly brushed back – and his neat garb make him appear more suited to the library than to the battlefield. Yet a closer look suggests there may be more to him than meets the eye – his grey eyes, though slightly drooping, seem to never settle in one place when he looks around; and when something catches his attention, they never move off the object of his interest. Grey shadows under his eyes speak of a lack of sleep. A certain pallor about his skin, and a lack of breadth about the shoulders make him appear more frail than he is, but he makes up for it with a rigid, upright posture and a stiff lip.


Homeland: Renalta


Motivation: He was bred from youth to join the military; put simply, it’s his career choice. He wants to get to the top, where he believes he can do some good. Personal ambition and a desire to uphold family honor, and his father’s wishes, also play important roles.

Stats & Traits

Strength: 4/10
Agility: 4/10
Charisma: 2/10
Magical Endurance: 6/10

Fighter: 3/10
Slashing, One Handed

Sniper: 0/10
Leader: 3/10
Seducer: 0/10
Sneak: 0/10
Mage: 4/10
-- (Custom) Offensive Support Magic – Cristoff specializes in disabling enemies in a variety of ways, from blinding flashes of light, to slowing or even completely stopping a target, to temporarily cutting off their ability to cast spells – perhaps even interrupting them mid-cast – and more. He can increase the strength of these spells by channeling them, rendering himself vulnerable and immobile, but simultaneously trapping an opponent. Additionally, the flashes of light can also be used as ‘signal flares’ or as illumination, as he can control the duration and intensity of the light.

Experience Traits
--Trait 1.
--Trait 2.

Conditions
--Clean Blood
--Rich Family
--Powerful Connection – General Hanus Wolfblood. The Whitemarch family is quite well known, so the General had met and heard of young Cristoff prior to his recruitment into the Blades.

Unique
-- Tactical Awareness: Naturally gifted with keen senses and a sharp mind, Cristoff’s awareness on the battlefield was honed through years of education and training, and highly instructive experience in life-threatening situations. While not especially adept at devising cunning gambits to maximize his advantage, he is a master of tracking positions and movement. This allows him to be aware of every move made, allowing him to prepare defenses, launch pre-emptive strikes, disrupt enemy movements, and generally predict the flow of battle. He is very difficult to take by surprise as a result.

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Romance: Opt out
Play style: Either
Does the Kouri Plushie exist?: I'm guessing this is a reference used to see who was in the first iteration of LoR?
Signature: Tan S Lake

EDIT (24.01.2014): Changed Romance to "opt out"
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Tan S Lake said
I'm having major difficulties writing my character's history without turning it into a novel <__<


Some times it's better to leave out much of the history. Gives the others a mystery to unfold in the rp.
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Well, I managed to adjust it to fit my character better - and as a lucky coincidence, it turned much shorter, too XD Pseudonym, could you read the history and just check if it's consistent with your character?
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Aerandir said
Some times it's better to leave out much of the history. Gives the others a mystery to unfold in the rp.


Mm, good method. Of course, anything you worry might conflict with lore or other characters... Talk to them before making it canon. Its always good to talk to the GM before making decisions that -could- be off-character for someone in the story. Last thing I want, and likely everyone else, is to look like an ass when something doesn't add up, aye? : P
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Tan S Lake said
Well, I managed to adjust it to fit my character better - and as a lucky coincidence, it turned much shorter, too XD Pseudonym, could you read the history and just check if it's consistent with your character?


Yep everything adds up :D Sup brah!
Also, very, very awkward family reunion ahead.
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Tempest said
Mm, good method. Of course, anything you worry might conflict with lore or other characters... Talk to them before making it canon. Its always good to talk to the GM before making decisions that -could- be off-character for someone in the story. Last thing I want, and likely everyone else, is to look like an ass when something doesn't add up, aye? : P


I agree. I was referring to instead of explaining In detail what happened just give an overview. Like for my character for example. Could have gone into detail about the day his father died, how it affected him emotionally and where he was wounded. We all understand that must be a dramatic experience and the lack of detail gives the author material to use in the rp. Better example? He lived in the capital with his mentor for 9 years, probably living in the castle he knows the queens very well due to his mentors station and he basically follows him everywhere cause he is an apprentice, also the castle though massive is still a small place essentially but no need to go into details on how well because it's given to a point.

But of course it's always fun to read about a history of a character, so there is no right way of doing it :)

Edit: also when including other npcs like the queens it's better to be vague so you don't make an ass of yourself making stuff up that's not there. course you can get it cleared by the to gm or other player just more effort but that's besides the point! :)
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GreenGoat said
>.>;You guys are evil.


How adorable. Welcome to the group. I can't wait until you meet Kad.
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Pseudonym said
Yep everything adds up :D Sup brah!Also, very, very awkward family reunion ahead.


Should be interesting XD
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Aerandir said
I agree. I was referring to instead of explaining In detail what happened just give an overview. Like for my character for example. Could have gone into detail about the day his father died, how it affected him emotionally and where he was wounded. We all understand that must be a dramatic experience and the lack of detail gives the author material to use in the rp. Better example? He lived in the capital with his mentor for 9 years, probably living in the castle he knows the queens very well due to his mentors station and he basically follows him everywhere cause he is an apprentice, also the castle though massive is still a small place essentially but no need to go into details on how well because it's given to a point.But of course it's always fun to read about a history of a character, so there is no right way of doing it :)

Edit: also when including other npcs like the queens it's better to be vague so you don't make an ass of yourself making stuff up that's not there. course you can get it cleared by the to gm or other player just more effort but that's besides the point! :)


That is a big bit right there, bold and italicized. If you have an idea for something that involves named characters established, it is best to get it cleared first. This is common courtesy because many of these characters are the creative property of another, liable, they will act or follow through a certain way unless proper reasons are there. So, to keep character consistency and not trample over someone's feet, do try to get in touch when you have big ideas like this. We will work with you to the best of our limitations

Icarus said
How adorable. Welcome to the group. I can't wait until you meet Kad.


..... Yes, I do believe Kad is looming like a monstrous shark, waiting for the first victims to come closer before going on a feeding frenzy o.o He is an evil overlord for a reason.
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How many more we need until we start IC?
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Azathoth said
*has been reading the material for the past two hours*Mind if I join?


Fill out a CS

Griever said
How many more we need until we start IC?


mission board will be instituted likely on Friday, so everyone can start picking out what mission they wish to start on. It shouldn't be too long after that all gets settled that the IC begins up.
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