[OOC] I Died & Reincarnated Into- What Is Up With This World!?

[Zamokra41]

Late as all frack, I know. Apologies. IRL stuff always seems to get in the way, no?

[Eviledd1984]

I am interested in this rp.

[Eklispe]

@Holy Soldier bonk

[Leaves]

@Belwicket

Can't say. Just start your first post as instructed in the first IC post and I'll put you in a predicament.

@Eviledd1984

Go ahead and post a character sheet. Myself or the Co-Gms will get to it.

[Eviledd1984]

Character Concept: A Strange man who does not have very good social skills,However he is a master at collecting and loves to read.

Name: Nathan Weathers

Gender: Male

Background: Tell us about yourself. What did you do in your Earthly life? How do you feel about your death? What are your plans for the future? Nathan was born to a shoemaker father and factory working mother born in Chicago during the 1940's,Growing up he was a very shy child keeping to himself having strange interests like collecting bugs and walking in forest usually at night.When he was around 20 he was drafted into Vietnam and was killed by a bullet form a enemy.

He feels like he should not have died and feels sad that he died so young,He also plans to try to live again or learn more about death.

Level: 1

Class: Raven-Man

Race: Raven-Man

Attribute: Focus

Below are 3 categories of supernatural powers you can possess. At the start you can either have 3 Techniques, 3 Spells or 1 Power. During the course of the RP you'll get both more abilities of the same category and abilities of other categories.

1. Summon Ravens: Summon blood thirsty ravens that will attack a enemy or enemies.

2. Turns into a raven: Can turn into a raven and can fly around.

3. Raven God: Summons a giant raven that attack a enemy that can take down large armies if asked.

Martial Arts: (Don't know what to put here either)

Thaumaturgy: (Don't know what to do here)

Gift: Val'ri's Blessing: Gains the blessing of Val'ri who is the god of ravens giving him the sole power of control of ravens and gaining the secondary power to heal wounds if he kills a raven.

Equipment: Nothing

[Eklispe]

:/

[Scarifar]

@Eviledd1984 Main issue: You have three thaumaturgy abilities (those are your raven spells) and one gift. That's not allowed. You can only have 3 thaumaturgy abilities or 3 martial arts or 1 gift. So, either remove the spells, or remove the gift.

Other issues:
1: Your third spell might be a bit too powerful. Disregard this issue if you plan to remove your spells.
2: Your character concept should only have 1 sentence. I recommend at least changing that "however" into a "but" (Me being a Grammar Nazi).
3: Your backstory is a little short. It could definitely be extended a bit, at least by one line, and by line, I don't mean sentence; I mean typing enough so that your words begin moving downward. Also, remove the words "Tell us about yourself. What did you do in your Earthly life? How do you feel about your death? What are your plans for the future?" from there. You don't need that there and you should have removed it.
4: Put some spaces between your sentences, man, and try not to make typos with the commas. Proofreading is very important. I can understand if you have issues with your keyboard or if English is not your first language or something, in which case you are free to ask other people for help and take their advice (me included).

[Leaves]

Long post. Time for bed. : 3

[Eviledd1984]

@Scarifar

Okay sorry..i will take a look..and edit.

[KabenSaal]

Ain't nothing I can post to that, Leaves-chan. So you can skip me this turn.

[Scarifar]

My god, @Belwicket, the lengths of those posts...

Not saying there's anything, well, wrong with it, but, um...

Yeah....

[Leaves]

@NarayanK@Scarifar@KabenSaal

I'll be posting the start of battle with the bandits later today, yay!

Scarifar, Damien acquired a skill point toward a new skill for reading the journal. Not sure if you have anything in mind on what you want.

[KabenSaal]

This is going to be hot.

[Belwicket]

@Scarifar I'm not being given enough to go on. My character's alone so my posts are gonna be short.

[Scarifar]

@Leaves I'm not really sure what to do with that skill point. There's no info in the first ooc post about it or anything.

[Leaves]

@Leaves I'm not really sure what to do with that skill point. There's no info in the first ooc post about it or anything.

@Scarifar

You basically get a new skill for right now. So your character would have a gift and one "spell." I realize where I've messed up; I've been naming it a skill when it's a spell. My bad.

I'll probably be adding more to the front page as I have added more information regarding other things.

[Scarifar]

Well that sounds interesting. Good thing I already got plans for Damien's next abilities. Do I need to post them somewhere or anything?

[Leaves]

Well that sounds interesting. Good thing I already got plans for Damien's next abilities. Do I need to post them somewhere or anything?

@Scarifar

Probably in your last post and character information.

[KabenSaal]

I got my next eight upgrades already planned out.

[Scarifar]

Hey @Leaves, I assume it's alright to do what we want with the first nine bandits, right?