Oh, I'm not entirely sure how important this will end up being but I won't be able to post too much on Fridays on account of it being my weekly D&D night. Just wanted to bring it up before it became an issue.
Minaru Gazo
“Heroes may get remembered, but Legends never die.”
One Of a Kind – Different DesignMinaru stands at 179 CM, weighing about 60 kilograms. He's got an athletic build. Eyes of an unnatural golden color and olive colored skin. His hair is a light brown - he's got tattoos under his eyes. His headband is sown into a scarf he can pull over his face like a mask, as well as a black hood on his black jacket. Underneath he carries a cross-belt with two sword sheaths on the back, T-shirts of different colors and dark, earthy colors, like brown, black or green pants with tabi on his feet. His shin's are wrapped in white bandages, so are his forearms. He dons black gloves on his hands, never far from the two-handed sword that hangs by his side. A gold necklace hangs around his neck and a golden band hugs his upper right arm. Old family heirlooms.
Personnel files.
Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.【Full Name】Minaru F. Gazu
【Alias】The Golden One
Lionheart
【Age】16
【Sex】Male
【Sexuality】Heterosexual
【Birthplace】Land Of Iron
【Bloodline】Gazo – The Goldens Ones. Formerly a clan of merchants, making a fortune due to their ability to turn any metal into gold. When Minaru was a baby the clan compound was attacked by bandits and hired missing nin, annihilating the clan, leaving Minaru the only survivor of the clan who's numbers had once been in the hundreds.
【Rank】Jonin
Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.【Personality】Minaru “The F Stands For What You'd Happily Let Me Do To Your Girlfriend” Gazu is – as shown by the way he presents himself cocky and arrogant. He's one to point out that he's a prodigy, showing strength and skill well beyond his years. Gaining the rank of Jonin due to his efficiency and power, rather than his tactical thinking or his smarts. That's not to say that Minaru isn't intellient, he's simply just immature – Cut first, ask questions while cutting – kind of guy. Put in charge of his first team much to the Golden Boy's dismay, an effort to make him grow up when he has to take charge of his comrades for a long period of time.
Beyond his already impressive military career, Minaru is a womanizer, not afraid to show off his powers to impress those of the other gender, weather they are shinobi or civilian. Due to him being perceived as immature and not very serious he usually butts heads with his fellow Jonin, under harsh critique for a lot of his actions. Critique the brown haired boy shrugs off, with a phrase like
'fuck you haters'.
【History】Childhood: 0 - 6His father and Mother's names are all forgotten, any record of them burned in the incident that took place when Minaru was 2 years old. The local bandits had zeroed in on the Gazu compound, they killed everyone but Minaru and his parents, holding the young child hostage till his parents – the two most powerful users of their kekkei genkai. Created them enough gold to last them a lifetime, turning all of their weapons and all of the jewelry they carried to gold. They then killed his parents and when they were about to kill him, a duo of Samurai arrived at the burning compound. While they were outmanned, the enemies weapons were now useless and thus the Samurai cut down most of the bandits, those that escaped did so with most of the gold. Leaving the boy orphaned in the ruins of his home.
He grew up in an orphanage in the land of Iron. At the age of 4 he was adopted by a family, Mizu and Hashi Nambo and moved to the Village Hidden In The Clouds. Having memories of the Land Of Iron and the mighty samurai – people who stood outside of the cloak and dagger of the Ninja World, he fondly played those out while causing a lot of problems for his new parents, thus he was sent to another orphanage, this time in Kumogakure.
Academy Years: 5- 7Not getting close to anyone in Kumo, he attended the Academy, a loner at first but soon he realized his potential. Training with weaponry, practicing taijutsu and utilizing his chakra and even beginning to understand his bloodline limit all happened during the span of two years, letting him graduate with top of the line grades and a bright future ahead of him.
Genin Years 8- 10A genin at eight and a swordsman by heart. He grew a lot during these years, being held back from the Exam his first year as a genin, due to him being thought too weak to handle the growing pressure of the much older ninjas that would participate. During his second year he pushed himself further, weaponizing his Kekkei Genkai and learning the true power of a sword in the right hand. His Chunnin Exam Duel is still talked about as the shortest fight in recent Kumo history, Minaru cutting down his opponent in a golden ray coming from his quickly drawn blade.
Chunnin Years: 10 - 14Having become a Chunnin before he was even a teenager, he was sent on several covert missions into enemy territory, most notably spending 2 years undercover in Kirigakure as an academy student due to his young age and youthful appearance, even becoming a genin in the Kiri armed forces, all in the name of gathering intel. Intel that would aid in a ANBU operation when Minaru was 13. Destryoing a Kirigakure convoy and capturing one of their commanders. For his valiant actions undercover, he was promoted to Special Jounin and his skills continued to flourish, before he was 14 he had been brought up for promotion to full time Jounin.
Jonin Years: 14 - 16Before even entering the back half of his teen years, Minaru was part of the Shinobi Elite of Kumogakure, participating in several small skirmishes against Kirigakure and Sunagakure, fighting over territory or resources. He had earned quite a name for himself due to his undercover work in The Mist, being recognized several times during battle and even forging a few rivalries over the course of his many skirmishes. Only getting wounded twice, his skill and strength was undeniable. But what he lacked was leadership skills and teamwork – the two concerns they had when they promoted him to Jounin. As such, he's been put in charge of leading a team of fresher Chunnins. To teach and guide them, but also to grow as a leader.
【Dreams and fears】He dreams of becoming the world's greatest swordsman. A Blademaster without rival. Beyond that, he wishes to trace down the remnants of the bandits that butchered his clan and get justice for his bloodline, and once he's brought those scum to heel, he wants to rebuild his clan.
His deepest fear is finding the bandits and after all of his hard work still being incapable of stopping them.
Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.
【Fighting style】A Ninkenjutsu artist at heart, Minaru is at his best with a blade in his hand. His Kekkei Genkai gives him the ability to keep a swordfight at a medium distance, an advantage this seasoned warrior is not afraid to use. He relies on fast footwork and sword-based techniques that relies on a minimal amount of handseals, as to always keep his hand on his blade. As such, he's also quite proficient in making handseals with one hand. While his footwork keeps him from getting hit, his chakra enhanced weaponry, fueling his Lightning and Wind nature and thus letting him deal fatal blows to the opponent making him a fierce duelist.
【Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit】Bloodline limit name:
Alchemist's Secret.
Description:
The ability to turn any metall into gold.
Strengths:
Most of Minaru's clan has no combat applications in their gold, they made a fortune from selling the gold and as electricians, creating golden components. Minaru however has weaponized his Kekkei Genkai, effectively 'unlocking' the next stage of it. The gold he creates transfers not only electricity at a far superior rate than ordinary gold, but also pure chakra allowing him to create devestating attacks when combining his Kekkei Genkai with his swordsmanship.
Weaknesses:
He turns his things into gold. Gold is very soft and heavy. Not very good for combat.
【Ninja techniques】A Rank Techniques:
Wind Release: Vacuum Blade
B Rank Techniques:
Samurai Sabre Technique
Lightning Katana
C Rank Techniques:
Iaidō
D-E rank techniques:
Diverse Academy Techniques.
【Custom made techniques】Jutsu name:
Midas Touch
Rank:
B
Range:
Touch
Description:
Transmutes any metal in as large of an area as Minaru desires. The larger the area, the more chakra is used Scaling exponentially with size. I.E The difference between making ten and five shuriken is a lot bigger than making one or five.
Jutsu name:
Golden Lionheart Style
Rank:
A
Range:
N/A
Description:
The Fighting style created my Minaru, combining the Samurai Sabre Technique with his golden metal, he creates a far more powerful version of the Samurai Technique due to the conductivity of the material. It also relies heavily on foot work and on dodging enemy hits, rather than parrying. It helps counteract his natural weakness to long range jutsu by being able to cut through most elemental techniques coming his way. However, due to the Saber Technique, and his Wind and Lightning Chakra, his sword strikes are impossible to block with the average sword. His swords aren't very useful for parrying due to the golden nature, thus making him weak to other offenses. A ranged offense is his biggest weakness.
Jutsu name:
Lionheart: Edge Of Midas
Rank:
A
Range:
Close to long
Description:
The blade is coated with gold chakra energy from the Sabre Technique. A glowing crescent is created on the blade and when the blade is drawn the golden chakra is released in an unstoppable wave expanding outwards in a crescent, the power diminishing after 50 meters, being completely neutralized at 200. After which, the transmuted sword turns back into it's original state, albeit weaker. ( For instance, a steel sword would rust.)
Jutsu name:
Lionheart Style; Trinity Destruction
Rank:
S
Range:
Up to 250 meters.
Description:
The Perfected form of the Midas Edge. Channeling both the Lighting Blade technique and the Vacuum Blade Technique, as well as the Golden Midas Edge technique. The wave of energy is so powerful that if you would try and parry the blade itself your body would evaporate. The wave is sent out in a half moon crescent, capable of tearing through a battlefield. The Crescent has larger with than his sword, about twice as wide, reaching for tens of meters in length. Losing power with each thing hit. The technique leaves Minaru severely weakened, his sword completely destroyed. Not to mention the sheer ferocity of the technique - not being able to tell friend from foe as it tears through skin muscle and bone. At a quarter kilometer the energy begins to disperse, still harmful at twice that length.
Jutsu name:
Lightning Style; Electrotherapy
Rank:
C
Range:
Mid.
Description:
Minaru pulls his two tantos from his back and hits the opponent with them. Prefering to lodge them into his foe, or his foes armor. Then he channels electricity through them from a distance, tazing the opponent, stunning them.
【Weaponry, tools and objects.】
Weapon, tool or object name:
Ninja Pouch
Weapon, tool or object type:
Tools.
Description:
Standard amount of Kunai, Shuriken, Wire, Explosive Tags and Smoke Bombs. Also gauze.
Weapon, tool or object name:
The Craftsman's Katana
Weapon, tool or object type:
Weapon
Description:
A Three-part Katana. One part handle, two different blades. An outer blade that's full sized and a inner, shorter blade. The inner blade is always made out of gold. Outer made out of steel, sometimes turned into gold. The outer blade is often switched whenever Minaru goes back to base.
Weapon, tool or object name:
Slash & Gash
Weapon, tool or object type:
Weapon
Description:
Twin Tanto's, doesn't turn them into gold. They are adorned with gold plating on their handles.
I'll finish the Jutsu later today, got errands to run.
Minaru Gazo
“Heroes may get remembered, but Legends never die.”
cheeezy
One Of a Kind – Different Design
was gonna rip on this but this shit is fire, props man. i'm subscribing to this artist right nowMinaru stands at 179 CM, weighing about 60 kilograms. heard this before from you He's got an athletic build. sigh, where my fat shinobi's at Eyes of an unnatural golden color and olive colored skin. His hair is a light brown - he's got tattoos under his eyes. ruined for life His headband is sown into a scarf he can pull over his face like a mask, as well as a black hood on his black jacket. Underneath he carries a cross-belt with two sword sheaths on the back, T-shirts of different colors and dark, earthy colors, like brown, black or green pants with tabi on his feet. His shin's are wrapped in white bandages, so are his forearms. He dons black gloves on his hands, never far from the two-handed sword that hangs by his side. A gold necklace hangs around his neck and a golden band hugs his right upper arm. Old family heirlooms.
Personnel files.
Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.【Full Name】Minaru F. Gazu
Minaru Fuckboy Gazu
【Alias】
The Golden One eh
Lionheart ehhhhhhhhhh
【Age】16
【Sex】Male
【Sexuality】Heterosexual
【Birthplace】Land Of Iron
【Bloodline】Gazo – The Goldens Ones. Formerly a clan of merchants, making a fortune due to their ability to turn any metal into gold. When Minaru was a baby the clan compound was attacked by bandits and hired missing nin, annihilating the clan, leaving Minaru the only survivor of the clan who's numbers had once been in the hundreds.
【Rank】Jonin
Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.【Personality】Minaru “The F Stands For What You'd Happily Let Me Do To Your Girlfriend” Gazu see, wasn't far off from the truth boiiii is – as shown by the way he presents himself cocky and arrogant. He's one to point out that he's a prodigy, showing strength and skill well beyond his years. doesn't actually make him stronger than anyone older than him. from jonin rank upwards I've always had the idea that experience has a bigger role than anything. Gaining the rank of Jonin due to his efficiency and power, rather than his tactical thinking or his smarts. That's not to say that Minaru isn't intellient well..... he's simply just immature – Cut first, ask questions while cutting – kind of guy. Put in charge of his first team much to the Golden Boy's dismay, an effort to make him grow up when he has to take charge of his comrades for a long period of time.
Beyond his already impressive military career, Minaru is a womanizer, not afraid to show off his powers to impress those of the other gender, weather they are shinobi or civilian. Due to him being perceived as immature and not very serious he usually butts heads with his fellow Jonin, under harsh critique for a lot of his actions. Critique the brown haired boy shrugs off, with a phrase like
'fuck you haters'. eh fug u haterz, i am the russian kid on the block, i do all the cool things like i punche the man in the face, i smoke the weed, i do the drug and inject the alcohols, i love u haterz u just wake the me strongar
【History】Childhood: 0 - 6His father and Mother's names are all forgotten, any record of them burned in the incident that took place when Minaru was 2 years old. The local bandits had zeroed in on the Gazu compound, they killed everyone but Minaru and his parents, holding the young child hostage till his parents – the two most powerful users of their kekkei genkai. Created them enough gold to last them a lifetime, turning all of their weapons and all of the jewelry they carried to gold. They then killed his parents and when they were about to kill him, a duo of Samurai arrived at the burning compound. While they were outmanned, the enemies weapons were now useless and thus the Samurai cut down most of the bandits, those that escaped did so with most of the gold. Leaving the boy orphaned in the ruins of his home. traumatic boohooooooooooowhat a chump
He grew up in an orphanage in the land of Iron. At the age of 4 he was adopted by a family, Mizu and Hashi Nambo and moved to the Village Hidden In The Clouds. Having memories of the Land Of Iron and the mighty samurai – people who stood outside of the cloak and dagger of the Ninja World, he fondly played those out while causing a lot of problems for his new parents, thus he was sent to another orphanage, this time in Kumogakure.
Academy Years: 5- 7Not getting close to anyone in Kumo, he attended the Academy, a loner at first but soon he realized his potential. Training with weaponry, practicing taijutsu and utilizing his chakra and even beginning to understand his bloodline limit all happened during the span of two years, letting him graduate with top of the line grades and a bright future ahead of him.amazing progress #wow
Genin Years 8- 10A genin at eight and a swordsman by heart. He grew a lot during these years, being held back from the Exam his first year as a genin, due to him being thought too weak to handle the growing pressure of the much older ninjas that would participate. During his second year he pushed himself further, weaponizing his Kekkei Genkai and learning the true power of a sword in the right hand. His Chunnin Exam Duel is still talked about as the shortest fight in recent Kumo history, Minaru cutting down his opponent in a golden ray coming from his quickly drawn blade. amazing, it's almost like i'd fangirl over him before i realize that this stuff is fiction and you could've written in him defeating the ancient combination of Naruto and Sasuke like it's a feat of great skill where as in reality it's the writer making shit up
kudo's :*
Chunnin Years: 10 - 14Having become a Chunnin before he was even a teenager, he was sent on several covert missions into enemy territory, most notably spending 2 years undercover in Kirigakure as an academy student due to his young age and youthful appearance, even becoming a genin in the Kiri armed forces, all in the name of gathering intel. ok now that is cool Intel that would aid in a ANBU operation when Minaru was 13. Destryoing a Kirigakure convoy and capturing one of their commanders. For his valiant actions undercover, he was promoted to Special Jounin and his skills continued to flourish, before he was 14 he had been brought up for promotion to full time Jounin.
Jonin Years: 14 - 16Before even entering the back half of his teen years, Minaru was part of the Shinobi Elite of Kumogakure, participating in several small skirmishes against Kirigakure and Sunagakure, fighting over territory or resources. He had earned quite a name for himself due to his undercover work in The Mist, being recognized several times during battle and even forging a few rivalries over the course of his many skirmishes. Only getting wounded twice, his skill and strength was undeniable. But what he lacked was leadership skills and teamwork – the two concerns they had when they promoted him to Jounin. As such, he's been put in charge of leading a team of fresher Chunnins. To teach and guide them, but also to grow as a leader.
【Dreams and fears】He dreams of becoming the world's greatest swordsman. A Blademaster without rival. Beyond that, he wishes to trace down the remnants of the bandits that butchered his clan and get justice for his bloodline, and once he's brought those scum to heel, he wants to rebuild his clan. I'M SAUCEKE 2.0
I AM AN AVENGER!!!!! WREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I AM THE EVENGERNRNRR I EM DE STRONGER THAN MY PREY
His deepest fear is finding the bandits and after all of his hard work still being incapable of stopping them. that'd be fucking hilarious lol
Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.
【Fighting style】A Ninkenjutsu artist at heart, Minaru is at his best with a blade in his hand. referring to the blade between his legs : ^) His Kekkei Genkai gives him the ability to keep a swordfight at a medium distance, an advantage this seasoned warrior is not afraid to use. while he is an expert with the sword, he sees more benefit of staying out of swordslength He relies on fast footwork and sword-based techniques that relies on a minimal amount of handseals, as to always keep his hand on his blade. As such, he's also quite proficient in making handseals with one hand. While his footwork keeps him from getting hit, his chakra enhanced weaponry, fueling his Lightning and Wind nature and thus letting him deal fatal blows to the opponent making him a fierce duelist.
【Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit】Bloodline limit name:
Alchemist's Secret.
Description:
The ability to turn any metall into gold. I too add random letters to the end of a word to make it seem like I wrote more than I did
Strengths:
Most of Minaru's clan has no combat applications in their gold, they made a fortune from selling the gold and as electricians, creating golden components. Minaru however has weaponized his Kekkei Genkai, effectively 'unlocking' the next stage of it. The gold he creates transfers not only electricity at a far superior rate than ordinary gold, but also pure chakra allowing him to create devestating attacks when combining his Kekkei Genkai with his swordsmanship. kk
Weaknesses:
He turns his things into gold. Gold is very soft and heavy. Not very good for combat. can he un-do the transmutation? I'd say you can't since he can only make metal -> gold and not metal -> metal
【Ninja techniques】A Rank Techniques:
Wind Release: Vacuum Blade
B Rank Techniques:
Samurai Sabre Technique
Lightning Katana
all fine
C Rank Techniques:
Iaidō
yes
D-E rank techniques:
Diverse Academy Techniques.
【Custom made techniques】Jutsu name:
Midas Touch
Rank:
B
Range:
Touch
Description:
Transmutes any metal in as large of an area as Minaru desires. The larger the area, the more chakra is used Scaling exponentially with size. I.E The difference between making ten and five shuriken is a lot bigger than making one or five. at the cost of making them soft, weak and probably not good at cutting. also does it require touch? he needs to transfer the chakra to the metal somehow.
Jutsu name:
Golden Lionheart Style
Rank:
A
Range:
N/A
Description:
The Fighting style created my Minaru, combining the Samurai Sabre Technique with his golden metal, he creates a far more powerful version of the Samurai Technique due to the conductivity of the material. It also relies heavily on foot work and on dodging enemy hits, rather than parrying. It helps counteract his natural weakness to long range jutsu by being able to cut through most elemental techniques coming his way. However, due to the Saber Technique, and his Wind and Lightning Chakra, his sword strikes are impossible to block with the average sword.
So this requires his sword to be golden right? Also this needs a weakness since it can't be blocked with an average sword (LOGICALLY) but it needs something that can a) beat it and something that can b) overcome and neutralize it
Jutsu name:
Lionheart: Edge Of Midas
Rank:
A
Range:
Close to long
Description:
The blade is coated with gold chakra energy from the Sabre Technique. A glowing crescent is created on the blade and when the blade is drawn the golden chakra is released in a unstoppable wave. After which, the transmuted sword turns back into it's original state, albeit weaker. ( For instance, a steel sword would rust.)
So this is basically a 'cut' like a wind jutsu except made of golden chakra? Can you see it? Can you dodge it? The sword will be easier to cut through afterwards right?
Jutsu name:
Lionheart Style; Trinity Destruction
Rank:
S
Range:
Up to 250 meters.
Description:
The Perfected form of the Midas Edge. Channeling both the Lighting Blade technique and the Vacuum Blade Technique, as well as the Golden Midas Edge technique. The wave of energy is so powerful that if you would try and parry the blade itself your body would evaporate lol, okay, maybe not evaporate, but that's not the point - you'll die which is fine. The wave is sent out in a half moon crescent, capable of tearing through a battlefield, losing power with each thing hit. The technique leaves Minaru severely weakened, his sword completely destroyed. Not to mention the sheer ferocity of the technique - not being able to tell friend from foe as it tears through skin muscle and bone. At a quarter kilometer the energy begins to disperse.
How wide is this blast? Does it expand outwards or does it just travel in a straight line forwards?
Jutsu name:
Lightning Style; Electrotherapy
Rank:
C
Range:
Mid.
Description:
Minaru pulls his two tantos from his back and hits the opponent with them. Prefering to lodge them into his foe, or his foes armor. Then he channels electricity through them from a distance, tazing the opponent, stunning them. cool
【Weaponry, tools and objects.】
Weapon, tool or object name:
Ninja Pouch
Weapon, tool or object type:
Tools.
Description:
Standard amount of Kunai, Shuriken, Wire, Explosive Tags and Smoke Bombs. Also gauze.
Weapon, tool or object name:
The Craftsman's Katana
Weapon, tool or object type:
Weapon
Description:
A Three-part Katana. One part handle, two different blades. An outer blade that's full sized and a inner, shorter blade. The inner blade is always made out of gold. Outer made out of steel, sometimes turned into gold. The outer blade is often switched whenever Minaru goes back to base. ofc, because if it remained gold the sword would be, well, trash
Weapon, tool or object name:
Slash & Gash
Weapon, tool or object type:
Weapon
Description:
Twin Tanto's, doesn't turn them into gold. They are adorned with gold plating on their handles.
I'll finish the Jutsu later today, got errands to run.
Like any cat, water is a Nekoyama's greatest crutch. While it has little effect on tracking, dumping a bucket of water, or being drenched in rain can easily throw off the senses and depth perception of an experienced Neko no Seishin user. Damp whiskers are a liability in battle, and once this weakness is exploited, an enemy can use this vulnerability to their advantage and easily take out or seriously injure the user. Dry eyes, or cloudy vision holds the same effect. Throwing a handful of sand or dirt in a users eyes can hold the same effect as a powerful attack, and once this sense has been deprived, their entire perception on depth go out the window -- granted that users whiskers have been dampened. Mastering her Clan's kekkei genkai has been a side-goal that she has long pushed back to make room for her personal studies in medical ninjutsu. Having yet to truly perfect this technique, besides it's most basic form, Midori's eyes become extremely sensitive during the day or in bright lights. She can only use the ability for so long during the day, and once passing her limit, painful headaches and nausea consume her mind and body.
While Neko no Seishin doubles the users chakra
Double? Hell nah. That's way too much. This 'ability' doesn't really even make sense. What does it have to do with chakra? Also if anything a kekkei genkai that is a ninja technique should cost chakra, not give it somehow. , it depletes it even faster. Using it in combination with ninjutsu techniques will exhaust the users chakra at an excessive pace, and when tapping into the feral transformation an inexperienced Neko no Seishin user will be overcome by the animalistic nature of the power. Unlike the Sharingan, or Byakugan, Neko no Seishin can not activate and deactivate with out some kind of tax.
good but kinda redundant i guess. On and off activation will wear down the eyes, making it harder to see in the dark and thus making it easier to just keep the kekkei genkai activated. Heightening the senses and ultimately making them more vulnerable, strong smells and sharp noises can easily throw a Nekoyama into disarray, making it harder for them to focus or pinpoint the exact location of an enemy.
So the strengths are as listed:
Night Vision
Heightened Senses
Better strength
Bigger vision (200 degrees)
Sees chakra
Animal transformation (or, almost)
More speed
Weaknesses are..
Water annoys them (it doesn't deal more or less damage, it just annoys them)
Throw sand at their eyes to.. damage their eyes, stop them from using it?
Sensitive (doesn't really seem like a great weakness, I mean, surely she would just not use the dojutsu during the day)
Faster chakra depletion
Strong smells and loud noises..?
I mean shit my cat-guy is almost literally a cat and has less benefits than this KG, which isn't even full cat. You'd need to seriously tone this down a bit and remove some of the abilities. Because as it stands your character has like 30 things it CAN do and only very few things that she doesn't like.
I.e. medical nin who is apparently also very very dangerous in close combat, with an essentially 2nd character pet, who can also act as sensory nin.
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Edit this and put it in the CS bin. Not trying to dissuade you or anything but this requires a bit of reworking.
@Buddha
gay af“Run to the light...”
B Y T H E T I M E
Xiao's Voice
Taking greatly after his mother and grandmother, Xiao is an effeminate young boy often mistaken for girl because of his voice oh fuk off, it's because he even dresses like a girl you merone, thin body, and feminine facial features. Like the darkness of a shadow, his wavy hair flows ominously like the black presence of outer-space. His round face sits rightfully on his thin neck, accentuated by big open eyes of a silvery shade. A small nose, pink lips, thick eyelashes, and thin eyebrows further perpetuate his doll like appearance. Xiao's skin is fair and smooth, with a slight peachy-ness to it. Though pull back the garbs and one would definitely take notice of the numerous scars on his back, legs, and arms.
Appearing as though he could easily be blown away by the wind, he has a very slim frame, thin arms, and an overall lanky body. Standing at only at 5'2, and weighing a measly mass of 44Kg(97lbs), Xiao keeps himself wrapped in a shawl-turban like garment, its exterior mimicking the sultry white hue of the moon in a starry night sky. A similarly styled bonnet rest upon his head, though nothing fancy. His style is simplistic, only wearing a rose ring and necklace. He wears the general ninja shoes, though they mostly remain hidden under the turban.
Sometimes he wears a blue variant, but this isn't often. Other unusual things on him include a strangely shaped birthmark on the back of his neck and a tattoo of a rose on his back and leg. He often has a habit of appearing anxious or worried. His big doe-eyes make him appear frail and defenseless, or maybe even lost and uncertain. Based off of this, people sometimes think he looks like an airhead or spacey.
Personnel files.
Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.【Full Name】
Cheng Xiao. I think you're lost - Naruto takes place in Japan and not in China. :/
【Alias】
Dove; His codename in combat. sigh
Dancing Angel; A moniker he refers to himself as when he performs(dances). siiiiiiiiigh
Gō; His slave name. you are so predictable
【Village】
Kumogakure.
【Age】
15.
【Sex】
Male.
【Sexuality】
Pan-romantic. A person who is romantically attracted to others but is not limited by the other's sex or gender. Pan-romantics will tend to feel that their partner's gender does little to define their relationship. bisexual, great
【Birthplace】
Xiao was born on a small island known as Sakura Country, southeast of Wind Country. It was a non-ninja country consisting of many small-sized families instead of large clans, most residing in the capital city of Cheri. This was his home until he and his family were imported and brought as slaves to Blood Country. Chigakure(Village Hidden in Blood).
【Bloodline】
Xiao's Family Bloodline; His family, like most families in Sakura Country, are so small that they are not even considered clans. But in his family, Xiao inherited a few special traits from his Great-Grandmother. His tears produce pearls, his body is bio-luminescent and can produce a brilliant white light, and his skin cells can be converted into white feathers, which can then be used for various purposes. that really is gay af
【Rank】
Chūnin.
Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.【Personality】
Xiao is a runner. What I mean by this is that his instinctive reaction is to run away from his problems, whether they be external or internal. He's often afraid or easily frightened or startled. He finds adorably clever ways to avoid tension or discomfort. His instinct to run has to be suppressed when his presence is still required. He's pretty pragmatic for the most part though. The soft-spoken, mature, sensible type. Doesn't too much like to step outside of the box. He worries about others and can become anxious or restless should things not turn out as he expected or planned. He's quite the nervous strategist. He's got the smarts and the intelligence, but doubts himself. Despite his fright, he is quite precocious for his age. Easy to talk to or to ask for advice, despite probably needing some of his own medicine. probably needs some literal medicine, too
He has some anxious ticks, like tapping his foot when waiting for something. But do not be fooled. He is actually very patient believe it or not. It's just that when things don't turn out as planned, does he then begin to lose his cool and panic. But despite this, he has a way of being able to appease to others, placate them somehow, calm them down. Help them see the big picture. He's a very sweet guy. Often saying nice things or complimenting others, even using honourifics. Xiao is very thoughtful and generous, known for his gracious gestures such as baking desserts for people or doing favors for them. He doesn't mind doing them. In fact, he quite enjoys it. He even does quaint things like sending people hand-written letters. what a fegget
Perhaps its because he is a poet and a dancer, his mind body and soul of the poetic, romantic, graceful type. He feels the world around him in words, a flowing stream suddenly becomes a beautifully intricate sonnet about the cascading waters and glimmering rainbow fish. Even his way of speaking is quite beautiful and poetic. He's got an effeminate, though mature sounding voice for his age. He's a lover of books, ancient classics, of course dancing, poetry, and art. Art in all forms, painting, sculptures, pottery. He has a fine appreciation for such things and enjoys dabbling in them when he gets the chance. It gives him some reprieve from the bustle and hustle of shinobi-hood. His most prominent talent is his ability as a dancer. It is this that makes him graceful and elegant.
He is creative and imaginative, with a deep appreciation for everything, even things generally considered mundane or uninteresting. He has very vivid dreams, but because of his hardships, also suffers from very relentless nightmares. These often manifest in his artwork and or he may appear to be daydreaming or thinking hard on something where he suddenly begins to stare off or drift away from a conversation. There's something mysterious about him. From his effeminate features, to his dreamy mannerisms. The world is a poetic canvas, just waiting to be written.
sounds like he took the wrong fucking career, he should've just stayed a dancer
【History】
Xiao was born on an non-ninja island referred to as Sakura Country, its lands covered in beautiful Cherry Blossom Trees. These trees are so important to the culture and environment of the island, that a monthly sakura petal festival is held in honour of the trees and the capitol city is called Cheri. Xiao was never rich, but he had lived a very simple and peaceful life at the beginning. His parents worked and owned an orchard. The picking of ripe fruit and the sweet aroma of freshly baked apple pie was the norm for him.
His kekkei genkai first manifested when he was 5 years old, where he accidentally caused his school teacher to go blind. And whenever he cried himself to sleep, a pile of pearls would be found left on his pillow. For a while, he regretted what he had done to his favorite teacher and was afraid of accidentally doing the same to someone else. However, there was a time when things became rough on the orchard and his family began selling his pearls to make ends meet. Xiao had always been a cheerful crier, so they always went above and beyond to make him extremely thrilled and happy when it was time to pay bills and what not.
Eventually, word got around that Xiao's tears turned into pearls and when he was 8 years old, a vile nation known as Blood Country came upon them. They were fiercely combative and their ninja village Chigakure(Village Hidden in Blood) was known for their bloody, brutal, and demonic tactics. This nation consisted of corrupt royal clans and an even more corrupt daimyo who overpowered and captured several families from Sakura Country and turned them into slaves. The daimyo that enslaved him beat him every day so he would cry and produce pearls. The natural intensity and luster of his pearls became a hot commodity amongst the lesser royal clans that could afford them. This, and his natural feminine beauty began a bidding war over who would own him. Xiao was like that of a tattered jewel. The daimyo often brought him along to his social functions and his presence served as an expression of his ultimate power and dominance. what the fu
During his first year in hell, he met a boy who was a few years older than him. This boy, who he would eventually find out was named Sin, was very hot-headed and rebellious. He often got whipped as well, though not for the same reason as the fearful and acquiescent Xiao. A natural friendship of opposites attract bloomed. Sin would often stand up for Xiao and help him to be strong, while Xiao, patient and mild-mannered, often did his best to calm his friend down so he wouldn't get any worse trouble than he already was. i bet they had a lot of gay sex, knowing you
This companionship bloomed over the next five years, until a beacon of salvation arrived and Xiao and Sin's families were able to escape from Blood Country in the thick of night by the help of a very powerful and mysterious shinobi. This mysterious shinobi helped them to immigrate to Kumogakure, where Xiao and Sin would eventually become ninja together.
【Family ties】
Though the first half of his life was wonderful, the next 5 years after he turned 8 were complete hell. Xiao's family never really had a lot of money, but they lived a peaceful life. They had the pleasure of experiencing cherry blossom bloomings more often than most. It was this and the simple things that kept them content. Not to mention there was little to no conflict in Sakura Country. Even crime was very low in the capital city of Cheri. But when they suddenly became slaves to the royal clans of Blood Country, their lives took a turn for the worst.
Xiao Xiao | Mother | 33, Kumogakure, Orchard Owner, Alive.
Zhang Li Xiao | Father | 50, Kumogakure, Orchard Owner, Alive.
Zhen | Paternal Great-Grandmother | 95, Kumogakure, Retired Librarian, Alive.
Sin Sayid | Best-friend since childhood | 18, Kumogakure, Chunin, Alive.
JUST IN: Chinese boy and Arab man immigrate to Kumogakure. Seriously, what is with these names
【Dreams and fears】
He DREAMS to become an ambassador of slavery rights and extricate the slaves of Blood Country, but eventually in other places too that legalize slavery. He HOPES to eventually move back to Sakura Country. He FEARS being found by Blood Country shinobi or somehow being extradited and deported back there. He also fears thunderstorms and other forms of scary extreme weather.
Ambassador of slavery rights, really
Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.【Fighting style】
In combat, Xiao relinquishes himself to a primarily defensive role, relying on the jutsus of his Kekkei Genkai for utility. He has various angelic based jutsus to minimize damage against himself and his allies, placate his enemies, or to dispatch his foes quickly, and his body's ability to glow can be used to blind his opponents or light the way for his comrades. Damage mitigation and genjutsus are his biggest asset. Though he isn't very durable, as a dancer, he is elusive, graceful, and quick on his feet. Fancy footwork. He makes up for his weakness with incredible chakra control and an unusually high chakra pool, allowing him to go longer periods without running out of his chakra supply. His jutsus are known to be quite aesthetically beautiful, despite their potential capabilities.
【Kekkei Genkai, or Bloodline Limit or Hiden】
Kekkei Genkai Name:
Mystic Angel
Description:
Exclusive to Xiao's family, his kekkei genkai involves several different aspects. Known for their peculiar tears that turn into pearls, his body is also bio-luminescent, allowing him to emanate a brilliant white light from his body. He can modify the intensity of this light, from a gentle glow to pulsating blinding flashes. However, his most notable trait, his is ability to convert his skin cells into white feathers, which when combined with his chakra, can achieve a number of different feats. knowing you, he can fly, gg
Strengths:
His kekkei genkai can be best described as versatile, allowing him to use it for utility, offense, and defense. He is a an Angel to his comrades p. sure nobody will see him like an angel, a beacon of light to guide the way or bring judgement down upon his foes. His abilities help him to avoid capture and to be an elusive presence to those who may seek to take hold of him. Furthermore, his kekkei genkai doesn't require enormous amounts of chakra to utilize, meaning he can prolong his efforts in combat.
Weaknesses:
Though versatile, his kekkei can cause him pain after prolonged usage. Both glowing and converting his skin cells into feathers is an unpleasant sensation, though most wouldn't see it. Glowing in particular feels very uncomfortable and prolonged usage drains his chakra and tires him out. Furthermore, some of his jutsus require intensive concentration and require a bit of a startup, which can leave him vulnerable.
needs better weaknesses. you just list limits. 'Can't be used for too long' isn't a weakness if it destroys literally everything ahead of you during the time that it can be used.
How can I beat the jutsu's is what I need to know
【Ninja techniques】
A rank techniques:
Temple of Nirvana Technique
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D-E rank techniques:
Knows all the basic D and E rank techniques.
【Custom made techniques】
Jutsu name:
Mystic Angel: The Night of Shooting Stars
Rank:
B
Range:
Long-Range
Description:
This jutsu causes his bio-luminescent body to shine with a brilliant white light. After pin-pointing his targets, he focuses intensely on each of them and causes this light to harden and rage softly around him. Several beams of light, reminiscent of shooting stars, are released into the air and target the opponents no matter where their positions are, striking them with great force. This jutsu, though powerful, has a long start up and requires at least 30 seconds of concentration before the beams of light can be released, leaving him vulnerable if he doesn't release it in time. And although the beams are homing, they can be dodged. He must remain still while using this jutsu.
okay. can i dodge them? can i block them with physical barriers light cannot pass through? if so then this is a good technique
Jutsu name:
Mystic Angel: Illumination
Rank:
C
Range:
Short-to-Mid Range
Description:
This jutsu causes his bio-luminescent body to shine with a brilliant white light. He can control the intensity of this illumination, from a gentle soft glow to blinding or disorienting flashes of light. These flashes can, with enough concentration, be strong enough to burn flesh, like an extensive sunburn.
On a C-rank probably not, given this doesn't even distinguish who it targets. If it targets everyone, even teammates, then yes. Otherwise it should be toned down a bit I think.
Jutsu name:
Mystic Angel: Dancing Veil
Rank:
C
Range:
Self
Description:
After converting the outer layer of his skin cells into feathers, he can then release a pheromone into the air similar to that of a bird or specifically, Doves. Foes unknowingly come into contact with these pheromones and Xiao appears to suddenly disappear and burst into a veil of white feathers.
Jutsu name:
Mystic Angel: Dancing Plume
Rank:
D
Range:
N/A
Description:
A utility based jutsu that allows Xiao to enlarge one of his feathers. It can become large enough for him to climb on and then manipulate to carry him wherever he pleases. It is his favorite form of transportation, though not always practical. From this feather he can observe and follow both friend and foe, as well as attack and defend if need be. It is possible to fall off the feather and a fire jutsu of equal or stronger rank can burn it. Xiao has to be conscious for this ability to work, so if he lost consciousness, the feather he is riding would shrink and he would fall. why the fuck do you always need flight in your characters omg
Jutsu name:
Mystic Angel: Celestial Petals
Rank:
B
Range:
Long-Range
Description:
This techniques allows Xiao to release countless white feathers into the air around him that hover about. This beautiful display of gently floating feathers soon becomes deadly, as he projects these chakra enhanced feathers at his enemies with enough ferocity to pierce their skin like throwing needles or daggers. This petals can also be controlled to swarm opponents to distract them or cloud their vision. so it's Konan's jutsu but instead it's feathers
Jutsu name:
Angelic Illusion: Dove
Rank:
C
Range:
Short-to-Long Range
Description:
This jutsu allows Xiao to create an astral projection in the shape of a dove. This illusionary dove can be used to relay messages to others, or "peck" thoughts from other minds. Offensively, the dove is capable of causing incredible illusionary discomfort, so much so, that it can convince their psyche that they are experiencing tormenting physical pain. Prolonged exposure can cause incapacitation. This jutsu can only be used on one person at a time. astral projection. damn. it's like you put all your failed pet peeves into this character. Why does it need to have defensive and offensive capabilities? Sounds rather stupid. "oh it's a messenger but also it can kill you boi"
Jutsu name:
Angelic Illusion: Heaven
Rank:
B
Range:
Short-to-Mid Range
Description:
This particular angelic illusion corrupts an individual's concept of Nirvana, or true enlightenment by invoking a false sense of materialistic satisfaction and creating an illusion of perfection. Those who fall victim to this genjutsu succumb to an illusion of Heaven. A utopia where the world around them is suddenly ethereal and beautiful. In reality, the individual is placed into a coma, entranced in a utopian illusion. This illusion is very realistic and can appear differently for everyone. General tactics to break free of the illusion can be used, but the most effective way to wake up from the coma is to realize that the perfect world isn't real. or, you know, to dispel a genjutsu. which is fucking as easy as dispelling it with a tiger seal and screaming KAI like a moron.
Really genjutsu is so dumb because once I realize you use genjutsu, I will just walk around 'KAI'ing myself every 2 seconds
Jutsu name:
Angelic Illusion: Flock of Doves
Rank:
B
Range:
Short-to-Long Range
Description:
This jutsu allows Xiao to create an astral projection in the shape of a flock of doves. These illusionary doves can be used to relay messages to others, or "peck" thoughts from other minds. Offensively, the doves are capable of causing incredible illusionary discomfort, so much so, that it can convince their psyche that they are experiencing tormenting physical pain. Prolonged exposure can cause incapacitation. This jutsu is an advanced form of the singular Dove genjutsu and can be used on multiple people at once, though requires more chakra.
Chakra usage just multiplies from the amount of doves I guess
【Weaponry, tools and objects.】
Weapon, tool or object name:
Rose Halo
Weapon, tool or object type:
Large Flywheel
Description:
This weapon is a large stylized flywheel, coloured in a sleek gold and adorned with roses in hues of red and pink. His fighting style is very graceful and elegant, resembling a dance as his flywheel twirls around his body sensually. His fighting style is very beautiful, but careful not to become entranced by his dance of death. I literally had to google a flywheel and I still don't understand how he uses a fucking gear as a weapon. The name of what you are thinking of is a hulahoop lmao
