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@Kal-El: Okay, um... I'll be honest and say I think he's a bit overpowered. He has too many abilities, stacking them on an already-powerful sword seems a bit much if he's that skilled as well. I'll also ask for original names for anything you come up with, as real-life mythology stuff doesn't really fit the setting.

I'll also be honest and say that deliberately blinding children to make special magic knights seems a bit unlikely. If you do want to keep him blind there's a lot of potential explanations for it.

Also, for having a special bond with Fanilly, could you discuss the details with me beforehand? Anyone wanting things like that really needs to. ^^;
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Welp, I think I might just write Rolan in as a spectator who was guarding the horses that most knights vaulted from, anyone down for having had their horse injured, killed, hit in the flank and bolted off into the woods, etc?


I would love Marianne to meet with Rolan and get some character interaction. So, I'd be down with her steed having been scared and run off.
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I can explain rather easily.

The sword is not really special. Besides its color, the durability is only better then normal swords as constant combat would break swords and a better cutting edge purely keeps it from dulling quickly like most medieval swords do.

His swordsmanship backs up his magic to which he can't just spam magic as it costs quite a bit. While strong in melee combat, it can be lacking mid to long range with his fire spell being the only to have some range to it.

Only those that choose to be Asura undergo it. It's purely a choice and one that's been going on for hundreds of years. Its not like it's every person and some people in the household take it at older ages aswell. But it's purely their choice and not forced upon the knight in question.

I'm not using the mythology. Just the word.

Though I can change whatever. Rather keep the magic swordsman aspect.

Also since its not accepted yet, I just added in the Fanilly thing so to see how it would be taken first as you told me you wanted to wait and see first.
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The sword is not really special. Besides its color, the durability is only better then normal swords as constant combat would break swords and a better cutting edge purely keeps it from dulling quickly like most medieval swords do.


Realism is totally what we need when the sword is absolutely enormous and the rest of the bio is 'magic swordsman'.

His swordsmanship backs up his magic to which he can't just spam magic as it costs quite a bit. While strong in melee combat, it can be lacking mid to long range with his fire spell being the only to have some range to it.


And... aside from the two people with average hand-to-hand ability, nobody in the roleplay has much in the way of ranged presence. "He can only melee" does not justify "more powerful than any other character" when that limitation applies to almost everyone.

I'm not using the mythology. Just the word.


A word that has no reason to exist without the mythology. If, in fact, the word has absolutely fuck all to do with anything, why is it being used?
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@Kal-El: Given this is both fantasy and heavily anime-inspired, breaking or dulling weapons really won't happen unless dramatically appropriate. ^^;

For the mythology thing, it's still connected to that and needs a rename. If you want examples of weapons in-setting with names, the main one I have in mind is Repharion, so... something like that? Obviously not actually named Repharion, since that's taken, but something along those lines.

He can stay a magic swordsman perfectly fine, just tone the amount of magic he has down.

As for the stuff with Fanilly, just tell me what you had in mind and I'll say if it's okay.
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Oh, right, um, I forgot to mention this before: I'd like any new signups to place their character with the order for at least two or more years. We have a lot of new knights already.
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@Raineh Daze
1. The sword is not huge. I glad you didn't actually look at the pic of the sword.

2. Tirial and Marianne has range. Marianne has multiple skills from swordplay to archery to hand to hand to high magic but I'M the one being too powerful when my guy only has swordplay and magic (no offense at all to you harinezumikouken). Tirial is good at swordsmanship AND good at manipulating water/ice for many purposes. Go read over them.

3. Its a word. If it loses meaning in the fantasy world, I give it the meaning.

No hostility in my response.

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Basically what I put. Fanilly trained with Aleyn for three years and share a bond.
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The sword looks really big in the picture, and it's natural to assume it's the same size as shown in the character appearance when nothing else is indicated.

As for the thing about range, I think it's more that a focus on ranged is fine since we don't have many ranged fighters anyway? I just wanted it to be cut down if he wants to do more stuff.

I haven't looked at the edited bio in detail yet, but I'll say "special bond" is really vague and could mean a lot of things. Strictly speaking it could even mean dislike, but I doubt that's what you were going for. So just discuss it with me? ^^; Again, it's vague as it stands.

Besides, Fanilly's my character so I could explain some things about her and stuff to work it out more deeply.
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@Raineh Daze
1. The sword is not huge. I glad you didn't actually look at the pic of the sword.

2. Tirial and Marianne has range. Marianne has multiple skills from swordplay to archery to hand to hand to high magic but I'M the one being too powerful when my guy only has swordplay and magic (no offense at all to you harinezumikouken). Tirial is good at swordsmanship AND good at manipulating water/ice for many purposes. Go read over them.

3. Its a word. If it loses meaning in the fantasy world, I give it the meaning.

No hostility in my response.

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Basically what I put. Fanilly trained with Aleyn for three years and share a bond.


Jack of all trades, master of none,
though oftentimes better than master of one.


No offense taken. I tried my best to word her abilities to make it clear that while she can sword fight, fist fight, shoot arrows, and cast magic... She can't cleave a person in two with her sword. She can't knock anyone's teeth out or break their jaw in a fist fight. She can't shoot the nuts off a squirrel with her arrows. When she casts magic, it drains her completely. Meant to make her a versatile Knight, but balanced out with drawbacks as far as lack of ability and power.

Plus, she's squishy.

A few too many hits and she's down for the count. All in all, she's heavily reliant on her speed and precision with the blade. She can't get rough and tumble, down and dirty like some of the other knights.
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Tirial and Marianne has range. Marianne has multiple skills from swordplay to archery to hand to hand to high magic but I'M the one being too powerful when my guy only has swordplay and magic (no offense at all to you harinezumikouken). Tirial is good at swordsmanship AND good at manipulating water/ice for many purposes. Go read over them.


There's a reason I chose my words carefully in the form. Tiral "has chosen not to solely specialize in the way of the blade." This does not mean that he is by any means a master at swordsmanship; in fact, the most recent set of events in-RP has shown as much. He cannot handle more than a 1-on-1 duel in combat, since he just isn't that skilled yet; it's the biggest reason why he called for aid in the last skirmish, even with only two bandits at his throat.

He's more a magician than anything else, actually. Swordplay is used as more self-defense as of right now, and given the rules of magic in-universe, his main tool of combat (his magic) is limited but is considerably versatile to shore that weakness up until the day comes where he is able to fight proficiently with his sword... Which, all things considered, won't be for a long while.

Also, armor choice. Man's wearing little armor in favor of mobility. He has to be a lot more cautious in combat similar to harine's character.
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The sword looks really big in the picture, and it's natural to assume it's the same size as shown in the character appearance when nothing else is indicated.

As for the thing about range, I think it's more that a focus on ranged is fine since we don't have many ranged fighters anyway? I just wanted it to be cut down if he wants to do more stuff.

I haven't looked at the edited bio in detail yet, but I'll say "special bond" is really vague and could mean a lot of things. Strictly speaking it could even mean dislike, but I doubt that's what you were going for. So just discuss it with me? ^^; Again, it's vague as it stands.

Besides, Fanilly's my character so I could explain some things about her and stuff to work it out more deeply.


Oh no. Lol. That's why I used the picture. I'm not even into big sword mode right now.

It's cut down. His focus is really on melee combat. Barely ranged.

A brother/sister bond. He's helped train her but, in his mind he sees her as a little sister instead of master/student.

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You are fine. lol. :D
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It's just the way you described his swordplay, and the picture of the sword, both make it seem really big. ^^;

Sibling-esque bond is fine, that's perfectly fine.

Looking over abilities, they seem better now as well.
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Oh, right. Unrelated as it might seem, that wall of text might seem, it does include something of interest to characters versed in tactics or magic. AKA: something mages can do in a battle aside from blow people up. xD
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Oh, right. Unrelated as it might seem, that wall of text might seem, it does include something of interest to characters versed in tactics or magic. AKA: something mages can do in a battle aside from blow people up. xD


Wall of text? What wall of text?
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Wall of text? What wall of text?


It takes over a screen's length to display (without purposefully elongating the screen) and is unrelated to anything currently happening. It counts. :T
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It takes over a screen's length to display (without purposefully elongating the screen) and is unrelated to anything currently happening. It counts. :T


Hm...-Scours for secret information-..
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It's just the way you described his swordplay, and the picture of the sword, both make it seem really big. ^^;

Sibling-esque bond is fine, that's perfectly fine.

Looking over abilities, they seem better now as well.


Is he acceptable, My Empress?
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