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Krodin329 said
I know that this is a bit late as to mercenary lord's CS, but isn't leeching like adoptive muscle memory?

It can be, if around him are people trained in something, and not using it. For example, he would be fine at a martial arts tournament, until everyone actually started using their skill. Then he'd be left with nothing at all, and get his ass handed to him.
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Ahhhhhh, I see, thanks for clearing that up! Marc and Matt are gonna have to spar you know, right?
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@Krodin: Whelp all I can say is good luck, I doubt you'll need it but still I'll be rooting for you ^^
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Oh, Lulu, you so mysterious.

@ Krodin: Best of luck! :D
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Ugh, sorry for the short post, righters block :P
Btw thanks, I'm at a disadvantage there. As are any other 15 year olds..
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Okay, I'm back and stuff. I'll post later today hopefully. I might be too mentally worn out after a job interview I have in an hour and a half.

Anyways, I'm alive!!
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I wish you the best of luck ^^ Hope you get the job =)
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@Mizuho: Welcome back! :D

@All: Sorry I've been so quiet lately. I've been pretty busy with other things, and I just haven't gotten as much time here as I would like. As for posting, I will definitely get something up tomorrow if Hagura doesn't post by the time I get home from school. Again, sorry for the delay.
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So I literally joined this website today and wanted to just dive into something so I chose this, didn't realize we needed a CS, i'm really sorry about that and i'm working on it immediately, i'll have it up within the hour, but other than that hi everyone. really looking forward to see how this turns out.
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You might want to remove your post until then, in the meantime.
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sam haley said
So I literally joined this website today and wanted to just dive into something so I chose this, didn't realize we needed a CS, i'm really sorry about that and i'm working on it immediately, i'll have it up within the hour, but other than that hi everyone. really looking forward to see how this turns out.


Welcome to the Guild!

Just for future reference, most roleplays on here usually require a character sheet to be approved by the GM(s) before any IC posting can occur.

Since our GM is nice, I'm sure it'll work out fine even if its a bit out of order ^^"" although I can't really speak for Tali...
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Mizuho said
Welcome to the Guild!Just for future reference, most roleplays on here usually require a character sheet to be approved by the GM(s) before any IC posting can occur.Since our GM is nice, I'm sure it'll work out fine even if its a bit out of order ^^"" although I can't really speak for Tali...


Thank you! i'll be cautious from here on out. and that's good to know, i'll wait to see what Tali has to say before deleting the post, the CS is almost finished so i feel like if i upload it asap it might be ok.

nice to meet you, thanks for the warm welcome.
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Thank you! i'll be cautious from here on out. and that's good to know, i'll wait to see what Tali has to say before deleting the post, the CS is almost finished so i feel like if i upload it asap it might be ok.nice to meet you, thanks for the warm welcome.


Actually, I agree with Merc. You should remove that post after you copy past it into a separate document. It may not be a big deal in some roleplays, but for this one in particular, each character has powers. This can easily get out of hand, and there's a reason why there is a "weakness" section in the character sheet. It's extremely important that every character goes through the approval process, to make sure nobody is overpowered or anything that may be detrimental, or just doesn't work with what Tali has in mind.

If she accepts your CS as is, just post your original post in the same place again, otherwise, let the GM do her thing.
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Appearance: 5'11, messy brown hair, freckles, golden brown eyes, medium build, caramel skin, generally wolfish when doing any type of physical activities. almost always wearing his green army jacket, which once belonged to his father.

Name: Lucas Antonetti

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Power: Lycanthropy. Lucas has the ability to transform into a werewolf for a short amount of time, increasing his strength, speed, and physical appearance tenfold for half an hour. these powers also transfer to Lucas' normal state, naturally making him very fast and agile. Lucas may also alter his normal physique, such as changing the bone structure of his spine and legs as to that of a wolf, allowing him to move and run on all fours at a very high speed, or transforming his fingernails into sharp claws. Naturally, Lucas' nose is that of a dogs, giving him the ability to smell anything that leaves any type of distinct scent, like where someone has been or what they have eaten, or the contents of a building and the rooms in it. Lucas can smell a door knob and locate where and who touched it if they are within 100 miles of his location.

Limits/Weaknesses: Lucas may only remain in a werewolf state for half an hour and will be knocked unconscious after returning to his normal state. If Lucas is nervous or frightened he will begin to shake uncontrollably and be very jumpy and cautious, and his fingernails will transform to claws, if touched he will retaliate instinctively. If Lucas is angry his fingernails will also grow into claws against his will, if enraged his bone structure will alter, causing his face and muscles to change and forcing him to move about in a somewhat hunched over stance. Lucas also cannot swim, and is allergic to several types of food and sweets, making him sick and reversing the effects of his Lycanthropy, causing his body to become extremely weak and skinny, and making it difficult for him to walk. If Lucas' nose is somehow broken or damaged, his heightened sense of smell will no longer be available to him until his nose has healed. It is also possible to mask a scent from Lucas using some type of spray or stench, like perfume, or some type of rotten food.

Equipment: Army bag containing extra set of clothes and a special type of medication should Lucas have an allergic reaction, and Frank, his companion

Personality: Extremely confident, hyper, energetic, a bit loud but sincere and friendly, tad reckless yet very rebellious, easily butthurt and one of the jealous type. he hates liars and followers and loves to be the center of attention. Lucas will be very vocal when speaking with someone but not in a negative way, he simply has alot to say. He's extremely friendly to those around him and loves to help people, sometimes whether they want help or not, but if his trust is broken it will be almost impossible to gain it back. He's very competitive and ambitious, and always feels the need to prove his worth.

History: Lucas has had Lycan blood since he was a child but no signs of it occurred until his body was mature enough for him to maintain the form of a werewolf (junior year) he is an orphan and does not know what happened to his parents, who are presumed deceased. He's known his best friend (frank) his whole life, but when Lucas was 15 his Lycan powers were revealed to him by frank, who is actually his guardian, and also a Lycan, but mysteriously transformed into a small dog due to some type of curse connecting Lucas and Frank. Lucas has been known to act very juvenile his whole life, acting out and picking fights, but only with authority figures. Lucas' goal is to keep his Lycanthropy abilities completely under his control so he may live an ordinary life, and in the process, find out how to change his best friend and only family back to normal.

Other: Lucas' favorite meal is a peanut butter and jelly sandwich.
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Actually, I agree with Merc. You should remove that post after you copy past it into a separate document. It may not be a big deal in some roleplays, but for this one in particular, each character has powers. This can easily get out of hand, and there's a reason why there is a "weakness" section in the character sheet. It's extremely important that every character goes through the approval process, to make sure nobody is overpowered or anything that may be detrimental, or just doesn't work with what Tali has in mind.If she accepts your CS as is, just post your original post in the same place again, otherwise, let the GM do her thing.


I hear ya. i'll save it for later than :) thanks for the warning. i'll delete it right away.
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Actually, I agree with Merc. You should remove that post after you copy past it into a separate document. It may not be a big deal in some roleplays, but for this one in particular, each character has powers. This can easily get out of hand, and there's a reason why there is a "weakness" section in the character sheet. It's extremely important that every character goes through the approval process, to make sure nobody is overpowered or anything that may be detrimental, or just doesn't work with what Tali has in mind.If she accepts your CS as is, just post your original post in the same place again, otherwise, let the GM do her thing.


err, i'm unfamiliar as to how i delete my posts
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err, i'm unfamiliar as to how i delete my posts


There actually isn't a "delete post" feature on the new Guild yet. Just go to "edit" and replace your post with a period or something, then re-edit that post with your post once your char has been formally accepted.

I said post so many times. Post post post...

Also, if I may offer some advice in your CS.

I don't think that just saying lycanthropy for the ability is quite adequate. Since powers are subjective and have many definitions, you should include an in-depth description carefully outlining what that ability offers to your character.

And for the weaknesses, I don't understand how enchantments and swords would be a weakness. (Nobody has enchantments...) The weakness is supposed to be outlining the limits and weak points of the special ability I believe.

And from what you've written, it seems like you think this roleplay is combat based? Ot ar least invoving some sort of magical combat. It really isn't, although I'm sure some friendly spars and perhaps even an all out fight will occur. (In like a high school, college-esque way, not like a ninja or a fantasy epic kind of way)

And finally, I'm not entirely sure if your character is what Tali is looking for in this roleplay. It has mystical/fantastical implications which I believe she wanted to avoid. From my understanding, this is supposed to be a rather 'realistic' roleplay, not dealing with curses or anything. Just about people who were born with a little extra something.


I'm not saying your character is bad per se, I just don't know if he'll be a good fit for this roleplay specifically. Which is why CS evaluation is important. I actually think you might've gotten the wrong idea of what this roleplay is about, but I could be wrong.

But don't take my words to heart, I have absolutely no authority to say any of this XD I'm just offering you tips as a seasoned roleplayer.

PS Tali, I'm not trying to steal your position or authority as the GM! I'm just trying to help and make things easier on you~ as a person who is GMing an RP, I know how difficult it can be sometimes. Sorry if I went over the line or anything!
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There actually isn't a "delete post" feature on the new Guild yet. Just go to "edit" and replace your post with a period or something, then re-edit that post with your post once your char has been formally accepted.I said post so many times. Post post post...I'm not saying your character is bad per se, I just don't know if he'll be a good fit for this roleplay specifically. Which is why CS evaluation is important. I actually think you might've gotten the wrong idea of what this roleplay is about, but I could be wrong.But don't take my words to heart, I have absolutely no authority to say any of this XD I'm just offering you tips as a seasoned roleplayer.


Done. My post has transformed into a nice ripe period which is probably confused why its not at the end of a sentence. And sorry about that, I saw the reservation list and assumed I just needed a solid word for the ability, and as for the swords and enchantments they were a weakness to the werewolf state and merely added for character depth. But thanks for clearing that up! I can see why that would be confusing.

ugh that's a shame! I was wondering why I didn't see any kind of fairies or vampires or anything. I really hope my guy is approved but I understand why he wouldn't be. And yeah I see where everything is supposed to be going, i guess i was just excited to start writing. all in all my bad. rookie mistakes everywhere. i'll fix up the CS and i guess draft up another ability. thank you very much for the help Mizuho!
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Done. My post has transformed into a nice ripe period which is probably confused why its not at the end of a sentence. And sorry about that, I saw the reservation list and assumed I just needed a solid word for the ability, and as for the swords and enchantments they were a weakness to the werewolf state and merely added for character depth. But thanks for clearing that up! I can see why that would be confusing. ugh that's a shame! I was wondering why I didn't see any kind of fairies or vampires or anything. I really hope my guy is approved but I understand why he wouldn't be. And yeah I see where everything is supposed to be going, i guess i was just excited to start writing. all in all my bad. rookie mistakes everywhere. i'll fix up the CS and i guess draft up another ability. thank you very much for the help Mizuho!


If you want an example, just click on someone's CS to get a better understanding. All the links are in the second post of the OOC.
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If you want an example, just click on someone's CS to get a better understanding. All the links are in the second post of the OOC.


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