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@KoL My plan relied on the concept that team demon would not be revealed before Balrog fired, by the Machina attacking and people with general omniscience.

But this very much did not happen, and the Angelic guard was raised effectively immediately.

And while there may not be a strict posting order, I still don't particularly like time lapsing people.


Well, at the present, only Eclipse Princess is there at the war front, none of the other angels arrived yet. You can still do your first move. However, it was not omniscience on the Angels part, but Diana reaching them before they went on a wild goose chase.

For the Machina, seriously, just look at what you had dumped right on the floor of Henry's castle. Eos is connected to every machine ever built by their faction, obviously she could spy on you all passively. The only machines she can't override are the PCs, but ask you had there were mechanical parts that were just plain normal and working.

Then again, my personal opinion about your plan is just that one. It's not meant to mean anything other than pointing to another avenue of thought. You can keep doing what you are just now, there's still time for it, IC.
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@KoL ... Eos has that power? O_o.... She has watched so many people take showers...
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@KoL ... Eos has that power? O_o.... She has watched so many people take showers...


Well, I described that every since her intro, however she only had that degree of awareness in her Core Chamber.

Anyway, you are not even wrong about that second part, not even a bit.
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@KoL

Every machine? Even ones kept in Henry's treasure horde for god knows how many years without being powered or even touched? By that logic, Heaven should have known Miyu's mech was one big wire tap and never allowed it in Heaven in the first place. That's a major tactical advantage that could have seriously been exploited by the Machina to cripple the Angels last round.
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They ones on Henry's vault are away from her reach until they are summoned to the world. Even then, most Machina NPCs are powered by wireless transmitted energy. It's much better and safe than packing batteries on everything.

On that logic, I think that Miyu's mech is shielded by her powers, just like Balrog's implants.
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@KoL Honestly, I think many of the Machina's greatest military victories have come from fusion powered machina. I mean, Grafdakka nuking the angelic host with his body was pretty boss. Granted, didn't achieve the objective, but was boss.

Also, Miyu's mechs definitely have their own internal reactors. She wouldn't trust to always have power being beamed to them. And she's pulled a Mini-Grafdakka before.
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<Snipped quote by The 42nd Gecko>
Anyway, you are not even wrong about that second part, not even a bit.


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@KoL Honestly, I think many of the Machina's greatest military victories have come from fusion powered machina. I mean, Grafdakka nuking the angelic host with his body was pretty boss. Granted, didn't achieve the objective, but was boss.

Also, Miyu's mechs definitely have their own internal reactors. She wouldn't trust to always have power being beamed to them. And she's pulled a Mini-Grafdakka before.


Fusion power is only for important units. The majority of the faceless rank and file is powered by Eos. Think of the countless mookdroids from Star Wars. If ask of them were autonomous units that would be a logistical nightmare to keep them acting in formation the whole time. Instead they get both power and commands from outside sources to keep things simple.
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You are wrong on your post. The ballistas are targeted at Graf and the Machina, not the Demons.

It's the shields that are focused on blocking the Demon artillery.
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However, it was not omniscience on the Angels part, but Diana reaching them before they went on a wild goose chase.


*Kicks KoL*
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So am I allowed to move onto the Char tab or what?
@TheWindel@KoL@Lonewolf685

Edit: I'm sorry if I sounded rude, I did not mean to come off that way if I did.
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Hey everybody I'm going to need the next post as soon as I get back from work it's big stuff. Teams demon/angel don't go too far without me. Aka Balrog and Fran had the right idea originally.
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@Banana

I will look at your CS later, though the other GMs should be on to give you feedback.
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@Banana

To be frank, I don't like the Bonesword. He's far too weak to survive anything in the Nexus when all he has is an unbreakable sword, good reaction times, and is superior to a human in agility which, coincidentally, everyone else is by at least a factor of 10.

Add to that his history consists of: being spurned by humans and joining the demons. Palling around with demons until they start raping the human woman and children. Kills demons and joins humans.

If that is his reaction, then he shouldn't be on any factions side, human included, cause they all treat the losers the same way. And before you ask, No, he can not be a neutral or rogue agent fitting on his own in the Nexus.

So as it stands, and the other two GMs can feel free to veto me, but I do not accept your CS.
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I'm going to have to agree with @Lonewolf685 on this one actually. I'm not a GM so my opinion doesn't matter as much, but The Bonesword is really weak in comparison to everyone else. Even Miyu during Ruthria could beat him, and she was probably the weakest character at the time. I suggest buffing him a lot, give him some plant magic or something. That would probably help.
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@Banana

His personality needs to be longer; at least a paragraph will do. Concerning his powers and abilities, I'm not against him being on the weak side. It's not needed, just recommended that he's buffed up a bit since everyone in the Nexus is a crazy warrior of some sort.

Also, just to be clear, he's a demon working for the Machina right? It seems like he could easily switch sides due to his code of honor and that's fine. He just needs a valid reason to explain to others why he's suddenly fighting for the other factions if need be. But as alone said, he can't be his own faction.
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I'll do some changes and be back with a 3rd version of the CS.
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I may have left a small bit out, but I need to leave for a while so I can't fix it immediately. I'll be back in a few hours to make a final edit or two to this, so watch out for then. All feedback is appreciated though.

edit: whoops sorry for that double posting.
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@Banana

His powers look fine by me except his Holy Strike. Why is a skeleton who fights for Humans and Machina using a holy technique? I also still have a few issues about his backstory. As the humans created the Machina, why were there no Machina present to protect the humans? Is he aware of the Machina at all? Furthermore, all humans should be living in high-tech cities considering they, again, created the Machina and thus there shouldn't be any human villages at all. Unless he defended a city of humans? In which case, that's fine. Apologies since I forgot to mention that bit in my last review.

Polish that up and he'll be good to go.
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@TheWindel I presume there are still outposts and villages around them to gather raw resources. Unless that too has been handed over to machines with like, giant crawling strip mining vehicles that slowly trawl along and rip off the crust of an entire planet for raw material..

And that sounds kinda boss and right up the Machina alley now that I think about it. A future battle should involve a repurposed one of those.
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