[OOC] Pokemon Spiral

[LuckyBlackCat]

@fer1323 Yeah, it'd be great if Nintendo did something new with a Pokemon game. I actually prefer the fanmade games. The battles aren't as visually impressive, but the storylines and gameplay features are more inventive.

I'll check out this manga.

[fer1323]

@LuckyBlackCat

for more info

http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Pokémon_Mystery_Dungeon:_Red_Rescue_Team_and_Blue_Rescue_Team

That is why I like the mystery dungeon series by Chunsoft. It is less hyped than the main series but it deserves some praise.

[LuckyBlackCat]

@fer1323 Dang, if only I had money right now...

Oh well, at least there are fanmade games, and RPs of course.

Edit: Just wondering, when should I be able to see this fanfic you're doing?

[fer1323]

@LuckyBlackCat

first fanfic

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11461699/1/Sacrifices-Sol

Here is my first fanfic. I have difficulty with my second. I have so busy with life that I have not updated in awhile but There are five chapters. Since it is early days for it, You can make a oc and help me write it.

[LuckyBlackCat]

@fer1323 Ok! I'd be glad to do that.

As for the fanfic so far... Got to say, I found it started a little slow (This is just constructive criticism here), but the story picked up. I like those Pokemon POVs, and I'd definitely be interested in reading more.

[fer1323]

@LuckyBlackCatthe first two chapter sets the scene for and introduces the pivotal chacacters. You can leave a review so I can track criticism better. Have you read it all already?

[LuckyBlackCat]

@fer1323 Yep, I have, right up to the cliffhanger. Looking forward to seeing which Pokemon the main chara becomes, and how he adapts to being one...

[fer1323]

@LuckyBlackCatany likes or dislikes? Any area that I can improve on?

[LuckyBlackCat]

@fer1323

Likes: Well thought-out story, interesting characters. It makes me want to read more to find out exactly what's causing these events. I also like the way you have Pokemon do more than just battle, and you explore their lives.

Dislikes: Not so sure about the use of the present tense, though that's quite a minor thing. And yeah, it did begin a little too slowly for my liking, maybe the two chapters that set things up could have been shortened and merged into one.

All in all, though, I enjoyed it.

[fer1323]

@LuckyBlackCat I agree with you on having pokemon do more than battle. I will hopefully have a new chapter out soon.

[fer1323]

@LuckyBlackCatThe new chapter will be up in 30 mins max. Please follow and leave a review.

[LuckyBlackCat]

@fer1323 Ooh, the tension's building... I need to create a fanfiction.net account.

[fer1323]

@LuckyBlackCatI find building tension easy. Maintaining it is the hard part. I know my chapter are short anf I am not the best writer but I think I leave enough for poeple to stay interested and thta is my best writing ability.

[fer1323]

@Heckno12waiting on that time skip

[LuckyBlackCat]

@fer1323 While we're waiting, do you have any more themes for this RP? I've been listening to some of GlitchxCity's remixes on YouTube.

[fer1323]

@LuckyBlackCat I like listen to the timesplitters future perfect soundtrack. My fav tracks are Disco ago-go, Chinese and Mexican Mission.

[LuckyBlackCat]

@fer1323 Ah yes, I remember Disco A Go-Go.

I wonder if this one would work for Vareena...

Possible Vareena theme

Still looking for one for Mesalon though.

[fer1323]

@LuckyBlackCat I am feeling a meditative music would work best. The best song that comes to me is plain of eternity.

[LuckyBlackCat]

@fer1323 Just looked it up, pretty good. Do you have any others for places, characters etc?

[fer1323]

@LuckyBlackCat I would like descriptors such as tone, pace, meaning etc.