defineunique said
Is anyone going to reply?
Sorry had a Viola lesson. Will work on it now, though might take a good five hours since I tend to rewrite my posts a few times before posting //and even then i edit a lot.
EDIT: I'm done with my post but kinda need Mya's input of whether what she heard was loud enough for Pat to hear or not... sob.
@Mya: seeing as how she was at AISE for a while and she frequents the training center which, perhaps due to the limited entertainment areas, Pat also frequents, would it be okay if they've talked to each other in the past? I mean I'd find it pretty odd with Pat's personality not to have spoken with at least everyone in the place that isn't in an isolated room or something.
Also these footsteps, were they exclusively heard by Mya because she has heightened senses or was it loud enough for everyone in the building to hear as well?
@Alyssa: writing ideas. Keep in mind I'm suggesting these from looking at your CS so I'm sorry if I suggest something completely out of her character (and feel free to ignore them all, I don't mind).
-Since she seems to be the kind who enjoys books, perhaps start off with starting/continuing/ending a book/novel she's reading. Actually I'm not quite sure what genre she enjoys reading; stories tend to come in many different aspects, like does she enjoy action-packed adventure, or perhaps a romance? Or she might be content with sticking to non-fictitious adventures by great explorers or world-changers. Anyway write about it, show us what she sees while wandering the fantastical worlds written in words. There could also be a reflection of her personality into it; something like since in her situation she is so detached of her emotions that novels rich in emotion really draws her in or something
-As the current setting seems to be in the morning, just a little bit after the crack of dawn, waking up might be a decent opening. She could find herself sprawled on her bed using a book as a pillow which she read last night or something.
-Write about how she found herself with all the other test subjects watching the new batch come in. This could be anything from how she was rudely awakened by other test subjects excitedly, or perhaps apprehensively, moving about the sleeping quarters spreading news about the day. I mean this island seems like an awfully uneventful place save for the experiments so something like a boat docking might be more than enough for everyone to become excited, albeit negatively.
-If you don't want to touch on the subject of the newcomers coming in, I would've suggested entering the cafeteria or the training center or the library [though i forget if there even was a library in this place] or looking for a way to explore the abandoned city [because I believe that place is technically off-limits to the test subjects?] but I'm not too sure how that will tie in to her personality...
Hope that helps.