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Is there anything I'm missing or should add!!??
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Nope, you're good! I'll add your character! ^_^
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Alright! The first post of the IC is up!

~LET THE ROLEPLAYING BEGIN!! ^_^ ~
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Yay, it's up. I wonder how many of us are still around though.

The first post tends to be the longest post, I guess. I bet my posts will decline as we continueQQ.
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Oh that's alright. I'm the same way with RP's ^_^''
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Sorry for the long post! I got a little carried away.

Glad this has finally begun though!
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I snickered at 'Testies' after reading it out loud, I'm a derp.

How many characters do we have again, EDIT: I'm stupid, it's been so long that I forgot this thread listed all the characters on page one.

I'm not sure if i should wait a bit more before posting or not.
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I thought that given the age of our characters, "Testies" was appropriate slang.

I think you should go ahead and reply. There has been plenty of opportunity for opening posts and there have been two since your own so I think you're good.
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Oh I'm not saying it wasn't appropriate, I was trying to make a positive comment about it but obviously failed.

I'll probably post after dinner then~

Edit: Oh snap I just realized how similar pat is to mya... I really should've checked her CS beforehand...
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Don't worry, I wasn't offended at all. Totally understood ya'. Cheers to misunderstandings!

I'm sure you the OP wouldn't mind if you changed things around a little. I don't think it is too late, given that you're only one post in.
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Really? I don't think so, Pat's fine how he is, to be honest, I don't think he needs to be changed at all, but if you want to you can, I just don't see a reason in doing so :3

I'm sorry if I'm not quick to reply for anything, most of the time I have access to the Internet I use my phone... I'll respond to the RP tomorrow; you don't have to wait for me though! ^_^'
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Ok now that I've seen some OPs I feel my writers block disappearing. My first IC post will be up later today.
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Naveah said
Really? I don't think so, Pat's fine how he is, to be honest, I don't think he needs to be changed at all
Okay, I refrained from changing before hearing your opinion about it and good thing that I did.

Yay hopefully everyone will join in soon~
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Is anyone going to reply?
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writers block still in affect. And ideas or inspiration!!??
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@defineunique - I just replied! Sorry I took so long ^_^''

@Emma - I don't know if you saw, but at the end of the first post on the IC I have a few options for starters if you want to take one of those?
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Is anyone going to reply?


Sorry had a Viola lesson. Will work on it now, though might take a good five hours since I tend to rewrite my posts a few times before posting //and even then i edit a lot.
EDIT: I'm done with my post but kinda need Mya's input of whether what she heard was loud enough for Pat to hear or not... sob.

@Mya: seeing as how she was at AISE for a while and she frequents the training center which, perhaps due to the limited entertainment areas, Pat also frequents, would it be okay if they've talked to each other in the past? I mean I'd find it pretty odd with Pat's personality not to have spoken with at least everyone in the place that isn't in an isolated room or something.

Also these footsteps, were they exclusively heard by Mya because she has heightened senses or was it loud enough for everyone in the building to hear as well?

@Alyssa: writing ideas. Keep in mind I'm suggesting these from looking at your CS so I'm sorry if I suggest something completely out of her character (and feel free to ignore them all, I don't mind).

-Since she seems to be the kind who enjoys books, perhaps start off with starting/continuing/ending a book/novel she's reading. Actually I'm not quite sure what genre she enjoys reading; stories tend to come in many different aspects, like does she enjoy action-packed adventure, or perhaps a romance? Or she might be content with sticking to non-fictitious adventures by great explorers or world-changers. Anyway write about it, show us what she sees while wandering the fantastical worlds written in words. There could also be a reflection of her personality into it; something like since in her situation she is so detached of her emotions that novels rich in emotion really draws her in or something

-As the current setting seems to be in the morning, just a little bit after the crack of dawn, waking up might be a decent opening. She could find herself sprawled on her bed using a book as a pillow which she read last night or something.

-Write about how she found herself with all the other test subjects watching the new batch come in. This could be anything from how she was rudely awakened by other test subjects excitedly, or perhaps apprehensively, moving about the sleeping quarters spreading news about the day. I mean this island seems like an awfully uneventful place save for the experiments so something like a boat docking might be more than enough for everyone to become excited, albeit negatively.

-If you don't want to touch on the subject of the newcomers coming in, I would've suggested entering the cafeteria or the training center or the library [though i forget if there even was a library in this place] or looking for a way to explore the abandoned city [because I believe that place is technically off-limits to the test subjects?] but I'm not too sure how that will tie in to her personality...

Hope that helps.
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Oh! That's a good question, and the answer is yes, the footsteps were loud enough to be heard, but probably not with the same clerity and volume as Mya had heard it, this only because of her enhanced abilities to sense things exclusively in a better way than other subjects who don't have a similar ability.
I actually really like that idea, that they have spoken before, I just wasn't sure because these are sort of the first few posts? Haha so yes we could have had them speak to each other before.

About the Library: there isn't exactly a library, but there are textbooks, documents, "poetry"(I put this in quotes because though they are taught many things, they aren't really taught how to use creativity in writing), and there are classic novels and novellas, all in the schooling area, the large building that's attached to the dining hall (bottom-left section of the map of the island). I hope this clarified any questions you might have had about where any books can be found ^_^
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I'll hold off replying until someone else replies, that way others have a chance to have their characters interact a bit before my character moves the story along again.
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Well, since the RP is moving so slowly due to lack of people being online at the same time, I'm sure that if you wanted to add another post that it would be alright with everyone else if that was what you were worried about ^_^ I'm just interested in getting the RP going at this point haha
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