[OOC] Starkissed

[Shadow Daedalus]

@Mae Just a matter of phrasing... What do you mean by 'Hook' if aquaintences?

[Mae]

@Shadow DaedalusHook, prompt. If you rolled on the aquiantance table. If you didn't, remove it :D

[BlackPanther]

Ill try but I probably won't be able to really get into the relations sheet for awhile

[Sarcelle Renard]

@Mae By "Character Quote," you mean something our character would say about them/their relationship, correct?

[Shadow Daedalus]

@MaeAh, ok. I haven't used the acquaintance sheet at all, so I wouldn't know

[Mae]

@Sarcelle Renardyep!

[Sarcelle Renard]

@Mae Groovy, I'll start working on it as soon as I can.

[Angel Eyes]

ignore lol

[Mae]

OMG A UNICORN. YES. YES. YES. YES.

-hyperventilates-

*ahem* ok let me just check the sheet xD

[Mae]

@Angel Eyesok so, I absolutely LOVE the concept, in case that isn't clear xD

As it is there are a few adjustments that need to be made to powers, or some moving around of things. I hope you won't be disheartened by this, I love the sheet so far, it just needs a couple mechanical changes, which I understand is hard to gauge! :D

Purify/Healing Abilities are definitely a Moderate Ability, given the nature of the roleplay. Examples of Level 1 abilities: making a suggestion that people are inclined positively too, putting people into a light sleep, detecting lies, ect.

Child self is really cool and I like it ;D

Boundaries is a high Moderate ability or potentially even Highest level ability. Being able to instantly dispel damage over multiple people is pretty powerful.

Pray: I love the concept of praying for boons :D The issue I have with it is the power scale - fireflies helping lead you to safety is alot different then instakilling a big beastie by opening up the ground. So maybe have a think about it's scale of effect and let me know how you imagine it?

Walk with me: You could probably bump this down from the Moderate Potency 3 slot to the 2nd one, since you have more powerful things you might want to put in there, and I believe there are other characters with simple beast summons in the Potency 2 slot. But this is excluding it's heal ability. My issue with it though is the heal being more powerful then purify - which makes me understand this slot choice - but you'll have to explain how to imagine that working for me to get a good idea about it. Anyway, I know this is a WIP so far, so I understand this stuff isn't complete :D

Awashed in White: Wouldn't be able to heal as above. Five smaller horses with the ability to heal severe wounds.. as well as a bigger horse, because we only have four baddies + NPC baddies, is super strong xD But there's no way you could know that :3 But yeah, this is a tragedy roleplay, so odds will be stacked against characters, and that's kind of how I want the rp to feel.

Boundaries: hmm. Large scale negates are usually a potency 3 ability.

Unconditional Sacrifice: I need to think on how this effect would play out xD If it did res someone it would be with either half or lower lifeforce.

The issue is we only have four baddies right now, so I have to keep that in mind while overviewing player characters that there is a high bias to the good guys, in a roleplay built around the concept of tragedy. So, being able to entirely negate something someone or the environment in an AOE is extremely powerful, and has a high potential to unbalance things as well as turn the feel of this roleplay from tragedy to typical fantasy style. Coupled with the heals... nothing bad would ever happen to anyone, kind of :P

Anyway, I love how it's coming along, and I hope I haven't put you off! I understand that you've made this CS in like, a day or two, so getting a gauge on powers is pretty hard when you're really rushing to push it out :D

So really good job so far, and I'm happy to help you out with things if you need it. As Isaid this is your first whack at the sheet in record time, so I hope you won't interpret my comments harshly, I don't mean them that way at all <3

[Angel Eyes]

@Angel Eyesok so, I absolutely LOVE the concept, in case that isn't clear xD

As it is there are a few adjustments that need to be made to powers, or some moving around of things. I hope you won't be disheartened by this, I love the sheet so far, it just needs a couple mechanical changes, which I understand is hard to gauge! :D

Purify/Healing Abilities are definitely a Moderate Ability, given the nature of the roleplay. Examples of Level 1 abilities: making a suggestion that people are inclined positively too, putting people into a light sleep, detecting lies, ect.

Child self is really cool and I like it ;D

Boundaries is a high Moderate ability or potentially even Highest level ability. Being able to instantly dispel damage over multiple people is pretty powerful.

Pray: I love the concept of praying for boons :D The issue I have with it is the power scale - fireflies helping lead you to safety is alot different then instakilling a big beastie by opening up the ground. So maybe have a think about it's scale of effect and let me know how you imagine it?

Walk with me: You could probably bump this down from the Moderate Potency 3 slot to the 2nd one, since you have more powerful things you might want to put in there, and I believe there are other characters with simple beast summons in the Potency 2 slot. But this is excluding it's heal ability. My issue with it though is the heal being more powerful then purify - which makes me understand this slot choice - but you'll have to explain how to imagine that working for me to get a good idea about it. Anyway, I know this is a WIP so far, so I understand this stuff isn't complete :D

Awashed in White: Wouldn't be able to heal as above. Five smaller horses with the ability to heal severe wounds.. as well as a bigger horse, because we only have four baddies + NPC baddies, is super strong xD But there's no way you could know that :3 But yeah, this is a tragedy roleplay, so odds will be stacked against characters, and that's kind of how I want the rp to feel.

Boundaries: hmm. Large scale negates are usually a potency 3 ability.

Unconditional Sacrifice: I need to think on how this effect would play out xD If it did res someone it would be with either half or lower lifeforce.

The issue is we only have four baddies right now, so I have to keep that in mind while overviewing player characters that there is a high bias to the good guys, in a roleplay built around the concept of tragedy. So, being able to entirely negate something someone or the environment in an AOE is extremely powerful, and has a high potential to unbalance things as well as turn the feel of this roleplay from tragedy to typical fantasy style. Coupled with the heals... nothing bad would ever happen to anyone, kind of :P

Anyway, I love how it's coming along, and I hope I haven't put you off! I understand that you've made this CS in like, a day or two, so getting a gauge on powers is pretty hard when you're really rushing to push it out :D

So really good job so far, and I'm happy to help you out with things if you need it. As Isaid this is your first whack at the sheet in record time, so I hope you won't interpret my comments harshly, I don't mean them that way at all <3

@Mae

Phew! That was ALOT to read! LOL But actually, I don't think any of the points you made were unfair at all! I REALLY was unsure about how the power scaling works in this RP so I know about what would be deemed too strong or too much. Honestly tho, I don't mind making a villain(Dark God) since the good vs bad ratio is soooooo skewed! If I had known I would have helped out and just made a villain. Personally, I like playing villains too cause its always more fun to be evil. :P Obviously, I wouldn't be able to use a Unicorn concept for a villain, but if you need me to, I can make a Dark God instead. I've already got a concept for it too. I'll probably just need another day or two. Or three. I REALLY DON'T MIND! Otherwise, if you just want me to stick to the unicorn, I can make all the edits u mentioned and continue being a goodie goodie. Haha Your call though! I'm game for whatever!

[BlackPanther]

@Angel Eyes
Two words

Dark unicorn

[Angel Eyes]

@Angel Eyes
Two words

Dark unicorn

@BlackPanther

BAHAHAHA! That gave me a good chuckle! Dark Unicorn? I never thought of that. It's possible...But I'd still essentially have to re-do the entire Character sheet either way and a dark unicorn...idk...im not completely sold on an evil pony. lol Besides, I've already kind of thought up a new Dark God concept anyways! I'd just need a few more days to finish it if thats what Mae wants me to do.

[BlackPanther]

@Angel Eyes
....there's a story on it

The last unicorn book...at least I believe that was the title

There's a solid black evil unicorn in it

Or you could always go a different route
Maybe a Kirin which is a Japanese unicorn

Edit: no pressure though especially if you've already got an idea :3

[Write]

@Angel Eyes

If you can you should join the discord chat! I'll find a link for you if you need it, but it's a great way to brainstorm and just generally speak about the RP with anyone whose got a hot minute.

[Angel Eyes]

@BlackPanther
Haha I appreciate the thought man, but I've got an idea so I think I'll past. Though I am familiar with the Kirin.

@Write
Oh u guys have a discord chat? I'd like that please. Thanks!

[Write]

@Angel Eyes

Of course! Here you go:

discord.gg/NuwvGgE

I believe that is it!

[Angel Eyes]

@Write Thanks for that!

[Ashevelendar]

@Write Please reroll Alexis Hunter , any relationship is better than love for her. Please ^_^

[Write]

@Ashevelendar

It was already rerolled. All good.