[OOC] Pokémon: Hoenn - Make a Wish

[Phoenix]

@Prints Avoid Definitely noted. I can absolutely edit that part to be "She brought him clothes but he was already changed" and take out the reaction part. It's definitely what Joy would do, that adorably awkward creature xP.
Another idea is "she took her pack with all his clothes and assumed he didn't have any other sets of clothes ('cause, you know, that'd be rational) and gave him a change of clothes and is never the wiser that she was a huge boob. Then he can just change into what he normally would and then she'd be so confused as to how he got clothes that fit him..."
But I wasn't thinking and I didn't think to ask ('cause, you know, that'd be rational)

Again, I'm still new to this "power-playing" thing, so thank you for letting me know. I admit, I got carried away. I apologize.

I was just thinking "oh, this is nothing of consequence," but it's definitely something to show the personality of your character that I took away from you, and for that, I apologize. If you'd like, feel free to PM me and give so I can make sure it works for both of us...well, you...the only thing I wanted was the knock on the window...

Speaking of which, yes, it's intended to imply that it was Diego's. However, because I'm a vague motherfu(ker, it's almost impossible to decipher. Those line breaks are supposed to indicate a break in focus from character. But, since I'm the King of Structure (sarcasm), It was a "break in time" rather than a "break in character focus."
I'd go into how my brain rationalized that structure, but no one would either care or (probably) understand it...
So, yeah, my error, again. xP
I'll fix it for my own sake and the fact that I feel guilty (and embarrassed). :)

[Phoenix]

@Prints Avoid I made a few edits to your particular section. Let me know if I rectified your concerns or not. If there's anything else you're dissatisfied or uncomfortable with, let me know. :D

[Phoenix]

And, to everyone (I'm sick of mentioning right now D:):
If you're interested in how battles could take place or are interested in the rhythm/pace of fighting Pokemon, you're free to reference this thread for an idea of what I was thinking. If anyone has any questions/comments/suggestions/etc. I'd be happy to describe more about it.

However, there's one error (a very big error that changes the continuity of the whole thing) is that I thought Metal Sound lowered Sp. Atk, not Sp. Def.
But if I were to correct it, I would just make a new move that lowers Sp. Atk that's (either) Steel-type (or Rock/Normal/possibly Dark or Ground-type).

EDIT: ...wow...do I like to triple-post or what?
And, can I just say, "I guess I like to bathe everyone" *eyes that last post*

[Prints Avoid]

@Prints Avoid I made a few edits to your particular section. Let me know if I rectified your concerns or not. If there's anything else you're dissatisfied or uncomfortable with, let me know. :D

@Phoenix

Nah, we good. The edits definitely made a good post 100 times better. And no worries, I get this is a format we still need to play with and figure out. As long as we keep communication open there shouldn't be anything that can't be quickly resolved.

[c3p-0h]

I exist. Somehow. A post will happen.

[Kymera]

@Phoenix Working on a post now, but I do want to clarify that the interaction in the Marketplace happened between a couple of random people, yeah? Or did it actually involve my character? I'm good with either, I just wanted to make sure!

[Phoenix]

@Kymera t'was randos. ;P

@c3p-0h I get that feeling ;)
Don't feel rushed, though. ^^

[Prints Avoid]

Writing up my post while I try not to think about the election.
Post should be up tonight

[Prints Avoid]

Despite my best efforts, I got distracted by the election. But hey, I got my post done

[Phoenix]

@Prints Avoid Hey,don't worry about it. Great post!
Just remember that NPCs aren't so "off-limits." You could have taken it further if you cared to (if you really didn't want to, that's fine as well). ^^

[Prints Avoid]

Makes sense. I mostly stayed away from doing too much with the NPCs only because Ms James is busy with Haven, and I wasn't sure if you already had some personality and behavior in mind for the guy. I'd rather not do too much without knowing what they're like. In the future though, I guess it would make sense to just ask lol

[Phoenix]

@Prints Avoid Well, they're only developed as far as I've written. Their personalities can be fluid enough. xP
Well see when we get to it. I like taking from other people's introduce and going with it. ^^

And, so everyone has an idea, @Kymera's post is close to the admit of gore that *may take place in this RP. >)

[Kymera]

*Glances about shiftily*

[Phoenix]

I'm going to be working on getting a post up for Sunday at the latest. If you'd like more time, let me know.

[Prints Avoid]

He knew Kye would be somewhere on the ground, but a pokemon without a trainer was a lot less suspicious than a trainer without his pokemon.

@Kymera

I gotta say, I'm not sure I agree :P

[Kymera]

*shrug* Lone wandering pokémon=wild or lost

Meanwhile you've got someone decked out in trainer gear, but doesn't have a pokémon with them. Felt like THAT would be the more difficult one to explain.

@Prints Avoid That being said I see your point. I think I realized how long that post was getting to be and worded all of that pretty poorly. I might go back in when I get time and edit that to at least read better/make more sense.

[c3p-0h]

Hey is it cool if you push the gm post back to Monday or Tuesday? I'm restricted to my phone until my new laptop charger arrives in the mail... my puppy chewed through my old one and my laptop is out of battery...

[Phoenix]

@c3p-0h Yeah, sure. I can do that. ^^

[Phoenix]

I'm going to work on getting a post up tomorrow. ^^

[Kymera]

I'm going to work on getting a post up tomorrow. ^^

@Phoenix

Yay!!