@PhoenixSorry I haven't posted in a while, I've been trying to catch up on IRL issues, but I should have something up soon.
@Xan the G I was thinking in terms of NPCs, what he would find out discover as per his hiring. Normally I'd just add it ICly, but I'm sure you'd like to get to everyone else's time.
Well, I feel as a side arc to all of the pokemon main games is that there is some criminal organisation that gets taken down. With Jin's character being what it is, I would ultimately want Jin to discover a means of taking down a similar organisation in this version of Hoenn, whether that be team Aqua/Magma or something else.
@c3p-0h I found it neither "uninteresting" nor "short." But I won't criticize your personal standards. xP
However, I'm not sure if there's discontinuity here. @Prints Avoid seemed to describe that Joy was already there when Haven would have entered and that Haven would have seen Diego and his Scyther as well as the stranger.
I'd like to clarify something else, as well: Did you intend to have "found" Sapphire (Diego was wondering where she was as she hadn't returned)?