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[Fabricant451]

Oh did the thing I planted a flag on win? Finna make that rival

[Cello]

@Raijinslayer That would be good. I was sad we never got to play around with those characters more.

[Raijinslayer]

@Leslie HallNice, so send me a PM and we can work out the details for the new version. Might as well add Masaki as well since she expressed an interest in it.

[Cello]

@Raijinslayer I'm cool with that. I have to go to work in 20 minutes tho so I'll have to hold off on the pm. At least until I'm on break.

[Masaki Haruna]

Thanks guys.

I guess I can put up a plot about Senju DNA drugs sold in the black market. Just an idea. Other than that, my purpose with Leslie is to judge sheets so we can exploit more ideas of world building and character interaction.

NOTE: Not everyone is from Konoha but rival-chan is. I plan having a team of mixed villages.

[AdmrlStalfos19]

So... kinda stuck between 3 character ideas. I'll put them all here in this post and go with whichever of the three seems the most popular

The first character is Eari Uzumaki. She has the very same shade of red hair that the Uzumaki Clan is known for and has yellow eyes, but wears a rainbow colored attire. Eari shares certain personality traits with her most notable descendants in Naruto and Boruto, but unlike either of them, she can't fire off Ransengans or deploy Shadow Clones, among other things. This is because Eari actually has no affinity for ninjutsu whatsoever, and must rely solely on taijutsu and genjutsu to triumph over her enemies. Eari's most prominent technique is a variation of Uzumaki Barrage that uses her genjutsu to achieve the things the Shadow Clones would achieve for Naruto's Uzumaki Barrage. She has a medium level of chakra available, but burns through it worryingly quickly due to poor chakra control.

Second char is ShinriKiyaru Aburame, whose first name his teammates tend to shorten to Shinri. He wears a kimino and has an androgynous appearance to him, with shoulder length black hair and fading white eyes. Shinri is physically blind, but his heightened hearing and sense of touch provide him a good understanding of his surrounding, as do the insects that are housed in his body as per the Aburame Clan tradition. These specific insects are aquatic in nature, which support the possibility that Shinri will have an affinity for Water Release Jutsu. His battle style has a balance of offense and defense to it, and he seems capable of analyzing his opposition on the fly and adapting accordingly. His vast level of chakra control is more than enough to mask the scarcity of his total reserves.

Finally, Shika Nara. Her brown hair is tied in a single ponytail, and she has emerald green eyes. Her breasts are relatively large for someone her age; they're even comparable in size to those of fully grown women, which is something that Shika takes particular pride in. Aside from the coveted Shadow Imitation Jutsu, Shika has access to a handful of powerful Jutsu that were passed down from her sensei, who was particularly known for the utilization of Fire Release Jutsu. Shika is an arrogant kunoichi, who can also sadistic towards other battling shinobi, but at the same time, she feels as though she has a lot to prove; not just to Konoha, but to all five Great Nations. Shika has a massive pool of chakra, and her level of control is satisfactory for her purposes.

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So yeah, those are the three character ideas I have: two Reds in Eari and Shinri, and a Rival in Shika. Which one sounds best to you guys?

[Raijinslayer]

@AdmrlStalfos19I like the second, because Aburame is a clan that is so cool in concept that you can always use more of them in a Naruto RP, and the last one, because that's some good rival material and she seems like a funny character

[Masaki Haruna]

I think I'm gonna say. I don't care about an Ino Shika Cho combo anymore.

All your characters can fit the Neo Team 7 equation except Aburame which is a cool stand alone.

I can't decide between Shinri and Shika.

[AdmrlStalfos19]

I think I'm gonna say. I don't care about an Ino Shika Cho combo anymore.

@Masaki Haruna

Fair enough. We already see at least two generations of Ino Shika Cho in the anime itself, if not all three (I myself haven't seen Chocho, Shikadai or... the other Ino whose exact name I've forgotten already, but I imagine they all fight in the same manner as Choji, Shikamura and Ino do and as their parents do because children). So I understand a disinterest in seeing yet another Ino Shika Cho team

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But yeah, that's two people that don't mind seeing either Shinri or Shika... and no support for Eari :/

Tempted to go with the Shika here since I have her fleshed out in my mind more than I have Shinri fleshed out atm. But I might wait and see who else has a say about any of my three char ideas before I fully decide

[Masaki Haruna]

Waiting for @Fabricant451 to finish Rival-chan.

You guys wanna be the so called Neo Team 7? Just for the classic feels lol, it's just the team number xD

I can't decide between Shinri nor Shika it's like asking me to choose Gal Gadot or Scarlet Johanson.

I expect dem world building to flourish too.

[AdmrlStalfos19]

@Masaki Haruna I might actually start my apps for both Shinri and Shika, and either plant them here or PM them to you so you can compare which of the two ultimately turns out better. I don't know how much time I can spare since I still feel the need to prepare for NaNoWriMo, but I'll be sure to get them done (to the standard I'm familiar with anyway) before it begins.

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Oh, and I'll try not to go ham with the personalities, but you guys should know that I normally write no less than 3 paragraphs for personality in general. It's become a force of habit for me this year in particular :/

[Masaki Haruna]

It's okay. I don't need much description in personality, show everything you got in IC.

My standards:

I don't want to see a good character sheet, good hype but in IC it is poor execution and does not live to the description.

[Fabricant451]

@Masaki Haruna You want me to drop a CS here or just like plant a concept

[Masaki Haruna]

@Masaki Haruna You want me to drop a CS here or just like plant a concept

@Fabricant451

Concept plant and a mini cs, no jutsus in the meantime. Re-read the premise of the RP again, it might give you ideas.

[Fabricant451]

Well my initial concept was of a girl that isn't directly related to any of the more well known clans or characters or any of that stuff. She's an outcast in her family not because she's brooding or mean or edgy but because of her low chakra and difficulty in using ninjutsu. It's seen as an insult by her grandparents and siblings that she has to use Kote to compete with others who have a more natural affinity and ability. She's come to dislike using it as well but realizes that it's integral to her position. With her resentment comes more focus on taijutsu (or bukijutsu, undecided) using the Kote to enhance it. She's taken what she and her family sees as a handicap and attempted to turn it into a strength. Her resentment/rivalry of the hero or whomever stems from a predisposition to disliking people who flaunt their ability - assuming of course the rival is someone that DOES that.

That's sort of a rough initial concept but I can sleep on it and maybe drum up others.

[Masaki Haruna]

@Fabricant451 Standing Ovation!
You may make the sheet.

I have now a plot idea related to your oc. I'll tell you as soon as you finish your CS.

Hint: Some villains in the RP are gonna be Kote users.

You blew my expectations away so far, this exceeded everything that I imagined. This isn't the generic rival who gets the candy store of OP'd abilities. Background wise, it is unique in my standards. I can't say much not until I see the sheet though.

I assume she can take on an Uchiha effortlessly.

I will release the OOC this weekend.

[AdmrlStalfos19]

Hmm...

Could Aburame Clan insects possibly be treated as a tool, by any chance? Having trouble deciding what to class Shinri's bugs as atm :/

[Masaki Haruna]

@AdmrlStalfos19 Yes. IDC what bugs SHinri should use. Take note of Kariya from Fate Zero.

[AdmrlStalfos19]

Can't say I'm familiar with the Fate franchise. I mean, I've heard of it, but know nothing about its premise or anything :/

[Masaki Haruna]

@AdmrlStalfos19Just use a variety of insects.