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Hi guys... I came to this forum to figure out that the whole thing was wiped out. Haven't been on for a long time though, thank God, which means my last RP died a long time ago before this happened ha (or heh... :( depending). Anyway, I have an idea for a slightly different character from the rest :) Enjoy! Or not :D

Here's the sample post: Valentina was terrified. She had been tugged and pulled by the human current flowing down the street, and it was getting late. Worse of all, she'd lost her family. Together, the Vetrovs had figured to celebrate the the preview of 'Sharks Below the Line', Valentina's film debut, by shopping around before entering the grand cinema. They were walking past and looking over several stores when the crowd grew thick and before she knew it, she'd lost sight of her family.

Running and squeezing past the crowd, she'd tried looking for them, but they were nowhere to be found, as if the Fairy Godmother had taken them back - unbeknownst to her, she had gone past them, her sight blocked by the river of people. Valentina had gone downstream when her parents and siblings were standing by a store, waiting for her. For the first time in a long time, fear gripped the young girl as she ran quicker, and faster, afraid that she might be falling behind quickly, faster, and that she might lose her family, and happiness forever.

For the first time in a long time, tears were falling down her cheeks as she could not wake from this living nightmare, the fear in her refusing to abate, reminding her of her experience with the bully, Billy - except this time there was no big brother Vertov to chase the demon away. Store after store, building after building flew past her as she searched desperately, crying and wailing. Her cream-coloured dress came slightly askew, a strap falling off her shoulder. She crouched in a corner by a store display window, the shop unabashedly already prepared for Christmas, selling happiness bottled in all forms, unaware at all of Valentina's plight.

Several curious onlookers turned their head her way, but moved along, as dead as the store Valentina sat beside. Tortured by the absence of her family, the lighthouse of her life, the girl cried without stopping, covering her face in a quagmire of sadness and yet shame for having lost her family and found herself in such a predicament - and on the day of her movie preview, no less. Then came a hand which cupped her shoulder, a strong hand. In her mind, the idea of Jesus coming to the rescue came briefly to her, no doubt a seed of faith planted by her time in church, then her father himself.

Valentina whirled around, elated that it might all be over, only to find a stranger in trenchcoat and office wear. "Valentina? Valentina Vetrov was it?" The stranger asked even though he already knew he was right. The girl could not help but to wonder how he knew her name, and it was as if the stranger could read her mind, "I'm your biggest fan! Saw the trailers and everything! Oh, and your parents are looking for you." He extended a hand, and Valentina took it, reminding her of princesses and princes for some reason.

Pushing against the current of people which Valentina was beginning to hate for separating her from her family, she and her knight in shining armour went past several shops, shops that she had previously walked past. Above the sound of heavy footsteps and chatter, faint, familiar voices caught her attention, voices calling out her name, voices that brought a different kind of tears to her eyes. As the crowd falls away, she saw him - her Daddy, in his mighty, greying beard, thick coat and boots. She ran up to him and embraced him before he knew to look down. It was over. The nightmare was over.

"Thanks, friend." The father said, shaking the hand of the stranger who assisted him, "I vould like to know the name of ze stranger who saved my daughter..."

"I'm Adam. Adam Sandler." The stranger introduced himself. "I know how it feels like, having kids of my own."

"Tell you vhat, ve have free entry passes into the grand theatre just down the road. It's my daughter's movie, see-"

"What a coincidence! I'm heading there myself..." Valentina stopped listening to the conversation between the adults. All she cared in the world was her father, and her family. It's over, and it won't happen again - she promised herself - I will never lose my family again....

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Oh? I was commenting on the picture objectively. No personal interest, I assure you.
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Suuuuuure. Let's go with that, Celest. :P And.... a gradeschool student. Shit. Now Will's gonna end up with the big brother complex when they meet.
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AnriuSB - I prefer riding the lightening. "Riding the Chicken" sounds like a bestial sexual act that could land me in jail in many countries. Az don't get down like that.

JKeyes - All looks well. Let me know if you want me to post the CS, or hold off a bit.

Anima - the only thing I thought that needed to be changed was what I PMed you about. All is well after that. Also let me know if you want me to post of hold off a bit for any editing.

Zach - what a cliche, almost cheesy combo, but in a pretty awesome way. Anyway, all looks good. I'll give a more thorough read, but assuming all is well (which it should be since you've RPed the SL before) let me know if you want me to post.
Also, bonus points for using Megatron as a char pic.

Oh, Anima, in regards to checking out the chicks good. It's ok. "You ain't gotta lie to kick it!"

Darkraven - The CS looks good. Please read the first 3 posts in this OOC threads (they're acting as "stickies) for information and expectations. Once you read that and get me the necessary information and all is good, I'll post you CS. Or if you decide not to RP after reading them, let me know also.

Thanks all.

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Oh, you mean the Mackery Report and the Readme thing at the bottom too? Yeah, I've read them before considering, and I like the looks of it. Just gimme an hour or two to polish my CS up and I'll be good :)
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Darkraven - On the THIRD post, the last part of it there is an UPDATE/INFORMATION post. The last update there has a "read this" hider.

Read it please.

Note, capitalization above is for emphasis only, and because I LOVE MYSELF THE SHIT OUT OF SOME MR TORGUE!!!!

EXPLOOOOSIONS!!!

AZ!!!!
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Yeah, that's the readme thing I was referring to. I guess I forgot it was called the Read This. I've read it, don't worry about it, along with everything in the first three posts and then some. Trying to get to know the other characters.
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Az. I need you to calm down, okay? Now listen very carefully. In exactly fifteen minutes and thirty seven seconds post completion of reading this text, you will blink. When you do so, someone in Mexico will fart. This will cause a chain reaction of people waving their hands in front of their faces with disgusted looks, thereby causing some of the more humorous people in earshot to laugh while making the same gesture. From there, people will give the obnoxious crowd strange looks, warily pulling shirts up over their noses. None of this is related to the wrecking ball that will crash through your wall. You must duck exactly six seconds after you blink and the Mexican farts. All debris and the wrecking ball itself will miss you, excluding a single shard of glass, which will cut your cheek, starting the standard action movie wound accumulation. Once the debris settles, you will jump out of the hole in the wall, landing on the crane. When you land, you will respond to this post, asking for further instructions, whilst I observe from a space-bound camera.
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I'm still working on the sample scenario though. :( But it's getting late.
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So I read a bit, stopped, and didn't get to the part that says "you must duck at exactly six seconds." So I got fucked up pretty good.

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Darkraven - no rush, this RP isn't starting in like, the next few days.

Just pay attention to #5.

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Oh. See, this is what you get for not listening to the action movie voice on the other end of your forum.
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Alright, gotcha. I'll probably tuck in after I get a good read on most of the characters. They're interesting enough that I must read them before sleeping. I'll get the sample up tomorrow.
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Fuck the action voice, it's all about MR TORGUE! F*** YEAH MOTHER F*****S!!!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=goc8dN_huNs Learn about it.

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I'm assuming it's so quiet in here because everyone is in complete awe of Mr Torgue's Badassitude.

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I swear. I was not ogling or anything. Total objectivity.

Az, if that's the case, the changes have been made. Everything other than that time piece, I'm absolutely fine with.
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AnriuSB - I prefer riding the lightening. "Riding the Chicken" sounds like a bestial sexual act that could land me in jail in many countries. Az don't get down like that.JKeyes - All looks well. Let me know if you want me to post the CS, or hold off a bit.Anima - the only thing I thought that needed to be changed was what I PMed you about. All is well after that. Also let me know if you want me to post of hold off a bit for any editing.Zach - what a cliche, almost cheesy combo, but in a pretty awesome way. Anyway, all looks good. I'll give a more thorough read, but assuming all is well (which it should be since you've RPed the SL before) let me know if you want me to post. Also, bonus points for using Megatron as a char pic. Oh, Anima, in regards to checking out the chicks good. It's ok. "You ain't gotta lie to kick it!"Darkraven - The CS looks good. Please read the first 3 posts in this OOC threads (they're acting as "stickies) for information and expectations. Once you read that and get me the necessary information and all is good, I'll post you CS. Or if you decide not to RP after reading them, let me know also.Thanks all.Az


Sorry hold off for what?
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Posting your CS in the thread I'll be posting all accepted CSs.

Az
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Did I post my CS!?!?
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Drummer, and I guess everyone.

Once CS's are approved by me, and complete by YOU, I'm going to post them MYSELF in the SECOND POST of the OOC thread. Please check there so you see what I mean.

A CS is NOT OFFICIAL until I post it there.

Thanks.

Az
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CELESTIAL ... did nay realise that you had changed your name and were here all along! Good to see you back
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