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Ehhh pretty much in my book. Sure you can look at someone and think they're good looking but in the very first post of a story, it comes off really...bad. Not to mention it's usually in the context of the other partner wanting things to get physical right away. I've cut out those weirdos real quick.

Pfft we're awesome. You better get to writing or get to napping lol
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If they freaked you out that fast, then they must've been REALLY weird about it. Like, "I wonder what her toes smell like?" weird or some shit xD

Whoa, that goes double for you, missy. I'll hit you up later.
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It was creepy and uncalled for given the intro I gave them was a real serious piece. They then controlled my character, got freaky and I backed away silently. >__>

Hey I am writing. XP
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LOL WAS THIS HERE OR ON THAT OTHER SITE?
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Reddit, yo. I have found good writers there but some...some you can tell...-shakes head-
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I was ALMOST hoping it was here so I could guess who the hell it was. If you could tell, why did you agree? Boredom?
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It was Harry and Hermione and I wanted some, needless to say I don't really want any at the moment lol
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HOW THE FUCK DO YOU MAKE HARRY POTTER THAT MUCH OF A CREEP?
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I don't even know man. He went from depressed to suddenly horny and then upset when Hermione wouldn't play ball. I should probably just tell that guy we're not gonna work out. Sometimes it does make me laugh to see bad writers cause I have to imagine they're way better at math and science than me. Maybe...
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Maybe he wasn't BAD, bad... maybe he was just CONFUSED at how he thought this was going to play out. Harry likes girls but I don't think he'd be super forward about it. Wasn't he a total mess about Cho for the longest time in the books and couldn't even talk to her normally, much less make any sort of move without having a near heart attack?

Hermione's so easy to appeal to. Just study in front of her.

"Oi, Harry, want to cause mischief or some shit?"
"No thanks Ron. I actually want to study for our Potions class tonight. You know how that mean old professor Snape gets. If only there were SOMEONE, SOMEONE WHO BELIEVES HOUSE ELVES DESERVE A VOICE, TO STUDY WITH~~~"

Boom, she's wet.
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XD Harry and Hermione were so perf together. Like fuck. Both grew up in muggle homes, both rather quiet kids. Well Harry gets to be super athletic and shit but he's not overly outgoing. He saves Hermione's life after Ron verbally shits all over her for being friendless even though Ron knows the issues of making friends since he only has Harry fucking Potter. >__> Urgh I love them so much. Hermione should have made the moves on Harry. I'm so mad. -cries endlessly- But yeah at least Harry doesn't abuse Hermione's brain. I still don't see how Hermione and Ron ever had sex, let alone got married...ewww.
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LOL Ron's just all, "At least I'm not a know-it-all!" when knowledge equals power in the wizarding world. I guess the idea of someone actually taking to spell books and studying was new to him, and he never seemed to have a GREAT opinion of girls to begin with. I'm not calling him sexist, but I always had this feeling that he never saw them like Harry did. It's hard to explain. Yo Goblet of Fire was such fan service. Didn't Harry try saving Hermione before Ginny or was that just in the film?

Yo, Ron probably cried afterwards. Real talk. Like a minute and a half later he's just crying or some shit.
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Goblet of Fire was ass. Such ass. Ron was awful to not only Hermione but Harry. Ron can fangirl over Krum but when Hermione goes to the ball with him, he acts like an entitled little shit, craps on Hermione's night and makes her cry. Like if Ron couldn't have Hermione no one should. >__> I think in the fifth book they're in the Department of Mysteries and Hermione creates a barrier as they're fighting and she and Harry end up on one side and Ron on the other? I don't remember much about Ginny in the books to be honest. But yeah Ron grew up in a magical home so the wonder to study wasn't there. Plus he was kind of a jerk to Percy and Charlie who I think were kind of bookworms, maybe before the house got hella populated with ginger kids. I do see what you mean though, I think Ron kinda feels superior to Hermione or something or women, I dunno.

You're being generous. I'd say 45 seconds tops, then he's crying and Hermione goes off to give herself some satisfaction. Like I can't imagine them teaching kids at Hogwarts about sex but they gotta right?
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"Hey Hermione, YOU'RE a girl."

HOW DID HE EXPECT THAT TO PLAY OUT TO HER? How did you grow up with a non-abusive family like that and not know how to talk to a girl? Mrs. Weasley would have lost her shit at that, I swear. I think Ron's insecurity was huge and that was why he had these serious wtf moments of being an asshole. He's hanging out with the smartest girl in Hogwarts, The Boy Who Lived, and meanwhile he's just the ginger kid with nothing special about him other than being their friends. That's gotta sting somewhere on a subconscious level. However, no excuse to think Hermione was some kind of possession that only he could make use of as he saw fit. Guy was a dickhead when he wanted to be. P.S. Fuck Ginny, was never interesting.

Maybe it was in Muggle Studies? LOL since the Wizarding World has kids start their education at like 10 rather than earlier like Muggles, I think J.K. was relying on the parents to do that?

GEN I HATE MAKO LMAO THIS IS TAKING SO LONG BECAUSE I CANNOT POSSIBLY JUSTIFY ANYTHING HE'S GOING TO DO.
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So so awful. Hermione should have punched his lights out for that one. You're right, his mother would have gone fucking ape shit. I mean if some guy talked to Ginny like that...well actually his reaction might be to laugh and shrug it off. I mean didn't Ron get weird when Harry took an interest in Ginny? I don't even care to remember. Ginny was a fangirl and I think I read that Rowling forgot about her until Harry needed a gf or something. You're right though, Ron has gotta have some inferiority complex or something but he actually was kinda smart in the books but him being a dick was just enough for me not to care about him. The fact he got Hermione Granger in the end is like...sooo messed up.

Eww I don't wanna imagine the Dursleys telling Harry about the birds and the bees. Poor Harry. :|

Well if anything he could just be there, kinda asking about Korra's intentions with Bolin maybe? Maybe accusing her of trying to make him jealous? You think the word "Asami" is even gonna come across Mako's mind? We all know Korra is just being selfish so that's not too hard to write yeah?
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I feel like it was just a whatever-decision on her end to have it end like that. Hermione and Ron could barely be friends, and I didn't see any real chemistry between Harry and Ginny. But then again I wasn't reading for a pairing back then, so people hunting for justification could probably find it.

You know what's even worse? Harry had to imagine Mr. and Mrs. Dursley since they were the only 'adult figures' he was super familiar with during that explanation. Good lord.

No no no as far as writing the post, I got what I wanna do down. The problem is that I just hate Mako and Korra so much for this stupid shit that its hard to continue xD I can't write any of this and find it sensible that he confronts her and she fucks with him knowing he has a girlfriend, when she looked super guilty when Bolin came back in the show after kissing Mako.
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They were all sort of on rocky terms with Ron I think. Though I read book one and thought Harry and Hermione would end up together, from the very beginning. Needless to say I was so pissed at the end. I grew up thinking best friends could totally be awesome lovers. Nooooope. The idiot gets the smart girl and the charming guy gets the girl with zero personalty.

Harry could have been so much more fucked up, considering how he was abused growing up. The fact he treats people with decency is a fucking miracle. I feel so bad for him, and he gets the boring wife/fangirl. I get he wanted a big family but it just seems so weird to marry your best mate's kid sister.

They are quite terrible. Mako should have walked away and talked to Bolin about Korra or something. But no go confront the girl and hope she doesn't make a move. Oh wait...lol Hopefully Mako find redemption though, I dunno about Korra, Tenzin needs to give her some lessons in dealing with people socially.
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That kind of odd ending appears to be popular in anime, too. Naruto ended with shitty pairings as well.

It wasn't WEIRD to me so much as it was random. They went a long stretch of time without even talking regularly, then he randomly kissed her in one of the books which felt extremely forced. Rowling seemed like she was trying to bring their relationship back to life when they weren't even really friends. A one-sided crush doesn't make for much development, and Ginny got over it by Azkaban.

My predicament is that I'm writing two people full of shit and cringing my ass off. I'll get it done though.
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I think even in the movies as Ron and Harry were whining about dates for the Yule Ball, Snape was pissed. Like he knows these little shits have a great girl but they'll make the mistake of not asking her out. Even Snape probably knew what was up. :/

God, Harry and Hermione just deserved so much better. I mean if my boyfriend ditched me in the wilderness (I know part of it was a Horcux talking but he could have come back the next morning) I wouldn't keep dating him, much less marry the dick.

Hmm hopefully this is the cringeist post for you and then it'll be smooth...er sailing.
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I hope so, I hope so. Just a warning that I MAY cut some corners to get through it quicker. Just less detail and more dialogue after a certain point, which will be made up for in the future since it's only one couple we're really worrying about.
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