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About Chidori; don't you hate on my skill. I actually just shamelessly included that on her CS so she becomes as badass as Kakashi theres opportunity to create something from it's aspects, ICly. Shameless, I know.

Anyway, about everything else, let's go ay;

Originally she had 'great chakra resources', but I was told that having both chakra resources and great chakra control could make her far too strong, as it'd take a long while for her to burn her chakra resources, given she spends little chakra with each ability. So, I changed that, but forgot to edit the rest of the CS to take out any wording which was originally meant to match up with her chakra pool. Anyway, I re-worded some parts, but I strongly disagree that her last technique would be S ranked. Yes, the concept comes from a shrapnel granade, but making it "S" ranked merely because it's a 'thousand' doesn't sounds good. I made it A, because it's dangerous and can do masive damage to one or various targets. But it's not as if is an extremely complex technique which requires immense thought to avoid.

I really don't look at a technique's rank because of it's size. The Great Fireball Technique is a giant ball of fire and it's C, too (And by the way, it's despicted as massive orb of flames in the wikia). I rank it mostly depending on complexity and how easy/hard it is to avoid them. Basically, the 'massive spiralling ball' was just to intensify the fact that she gathered/focused a good portion of chakra there, before shooting it. I'd like to keep it at C, but if it is a really terrible problem, I can change it. I fixed it otherwise, is it good now?
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guys. why have you all left me! *cries* please come baaaack!
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Gero the following message is not meant to be taken in a negative manner whats so ever. I hate being the one who has to get near potential "combat/fights" with other people OOC but this kinda needs to be said.

In a way team Shinichi is locked in place. I refuse to post because logically from a roleplaying standpoint Kato would not go against his own plan and risk ruining it. Therefore, there is virtually no way Kato is going to move from his spot which also means that Im relying on someone else to post to give me something to post about other then waiting. Gowl has also mentioned that they don't want to move as stated by them saying that they don't want to make a post about "waiting" because they feel it would be terrible filler which I honestly do agree with. ForcedSmile has been afk for sometime now (I do realize people get busy but come-on, its been weeks and not even a very simple paragraph has been written) and a post from him is honestly the only thing me and Gowl can rely on to progress the story.

You have mentioned that Shinichi is basically "staying in place" or at least a clone of him is. This effectively leaves us with very few options. Option A would be to compromise the whole plan (which non of us want to do from a roleplay standpoint) by rather attacking from the shadows or send a clone out to attack Shinichi, etc. Option B would be have ForcedSmile's character fuck up the whole plan and attack Shinichi, however we are locked out from this option due to him effectively being AFK and a god-mod would be the only option to fix this if he doesn't post himself. Of course Option C would be Shinichi walking right into the ambush which he initially wanted us to set up anyway however your last post basically shows us that you don't want to do this which is kinda understandable.

I think the problem spawned from a misunderstanding at the beginning. I personally thought that when you asked to form a ambush your character meant for us to hide and then he would go ahead and simulate a group walking through the forest that is going to need jumped. I didn't think you mean form a "trap" which basically would have been an ambush that someone would have had to lead you in to. I can't speak for Gowl or the others but that was my understanding and apparently I was completely wrong making my plan not appropriate for the situation. You could argue that Kato could just "speak up" from the bushes but at the same time we now don't have those 5 minutes to formulate another plan plus we are all relatively far enough from each other that we'd need to speak relatively loudly for everyone to hear.

This message is not meant to start a whole war and I honestly don't even want a small conflict, I just wanted it to be know that me and Gowl feel basically "locked" in the situation. This is literally just a training session and it has taken over 3 or so weeks, nearly a month. I wouldn't be to pissed if this was a long, well thought out mini-campaign for our group but this is just a short training session that should have just been a "alright show me your skills. Cool now show me how you work as a team, Cool thats a wrap, now we're done for today so go ahead and walk around and talk to each other (lil breaking of the forth wall there teehee)." Im trying to send this message as respectfully as I can and Im posting it in the OOC incase Gowl wanted to contribute to it.

What should be taken away from this message? Basically we just need to find a compromise or something that will progress the story along. Roleplaying is suppose to be fun and enjoyable and being locked because both sides don't want to do what the other side does, and because someone has been AFK for a little bit, is simply just not fun. I hope you understand the need to figure this out and I also hope you don't take this in any negative manner.
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@Gamer
Next time pm me, way easier to reply then. I already got the word that something needs to be done about the situation. Right now, I just came from work and am only doing a small check on some stuff. Except a post later from me, tomorrow before I will head to work, about moving the team.

Further more : I am getting busy with my own personal life, so in regards to that, I am going to see if I can make my teams act without me in a way that they won't go out of their rank or such. Just simple things they could do as extra training or some simple missions for them.
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Any Hyuuga kids who want to plan something with me to post whenever we got a day off from our sensei(s)?
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@AlterNathan:

I have a very, very important question to ask you.

Is your username pronounced more similar to "alternating" or "alternative"? Like, the way it is enunciated.
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Name:Shiro Konton
Nickname/Alias: The Crimson Ninja
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth:13
Age Appearance: 16
Sexuality: Bisexual

Family:

  • Tamekaze Konton (Father - MIA)

  • Sheiko Konton (Mother - MIA)

  • Mira Konton (Grandmother)


Length and build 144.5 cm Average
Weight 35kg
Favorite weather and season Rain and Autumn



Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: Kirigakure

Clan/Bloodline: Konton
Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature:

Water Release (Suiton)



Appearance:




Personality:
One could liken Shiro to a Masochist, possibly because she doesn't mind cutting herself and using her abilities in a reckless way. Shiro would shrug and agree as she has little regard for the thoughts of others, she just wants to get the job done as quick as possible.

During battle Shiro's sadistic, masochist and bloodlust attitude could come from her clan's kekkei genkai, due to it needing the use of the users own blood in order to use her kekkei genkai. Shiro can be a real handful in general and enjoys winding people up and getting on people's nerves.

She can however be an excellent team mate when you can get over her passive aggressive personality. She will grudgingly come to the aid of her teammates but will show no sympathy if they get in her way.



History:

Shiro comes from the aggressive and rather withdrawn Konton clan. A clan that possesses the powerful blood release bloodline. It has given the known users of it infamy when used in battle due to its high cost but great impact on the battlefield.

Shiro was born in her clans home village of Kirigakure, here she was taught by her mother and father the way of the ninja. As most members of the Konton clan are home schooled in order to avoid corrupting their children from the true Konton and ninja way. Shiro was also lucky with her kekkei genkai developing at a young age allowing her parents to teach her how to use it efficiently in battle. However they were disappointed when she showed no true flair for wanting to fight.

Disappointed by their child lack of fighting spirit, they decided to put her in a situation where she would have to fight and possibly kill in order to survive. Bringing to an abandoned part of the village they left her there alone. Once her parents were out of sight two men attacked Shiro, in reality these men were hired thugs meant to scare Shiro and rob her. Her parents had hoped that this sudden threat should force Shiro’s killer instincts to the surface allowing her to use her Kekkei Genkai. They were right.

Shiro awoke the next day in her room remembering her sudden outburst of fear and anger the other day. Her parents told Shiro it was for the best and Shiro surprisingly couldn’t help but agree. The next couple of months Shiro was taught by her parents how to use her Kekkei Genkai more efficiently in battle, from this Shiro adapted her own unique fighting style that incorporated her Kekkei Genkai and her flair for Taijutsu.

Her training however was cut short abruptly by her parents leaving on a mission. She was left in the care of Shiro’s Grandmother a bitter old woman who was devoted to the clan. After three months away on her mission Shiro was handed devastating news, her parents had never reported in to their mission leader and were missing. Though Shiro does not show it she is incredibly worried for her parents well being and wants to get to the bottom of the mystery of their disappearance.

Theme Song:



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Skills/Abilities

  • Skilled Taijutsu

  • Good Chakra Control

  • Weak Genjutsu

  • Average Ninjutsu

  • Strong Close Combatant

  • Weak long range Combatant

  • Uses a Boxing like fighting Style

  • Flexible Body




Special Traits

  • High Pain Threshold

  • Blood Thirsty

  • Ruthless

  • Resilient (Can take quite a beating)

  • High Stamina Levels





Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai: Ketsu (Blood Release)
Clan: Konton
Description: The Konton clan are well known for their ability to warp their own blood into tools while in battle. A great battle was once won by one man as the more they cut into him the more blood they gave him to work with. Sadly he did not live to tell the tale of his victory.

Blood release allows the owner to control their own blood to a degree of making it boil, explode, or harden. They can only control their own blood and of other clan members. Owners of the Ketsu blood line are granted the ability to regenerate blood a lot faster than a normal person.

Most clan members are afflicted with the curse of blood lust while in battle causing them to dip more and more into their limited supply of blood. Due to the sacrificial nature of Blood Release most of the Konton clan have died, due to bleeding to death.



Jutsu:




Custom Jutsu



Summons

None
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@Nytefall

So far I only see some problems with the custom techniques.

1. She can harden her blood like steel? I think that is going too far, certainly for a genin. Lowering it would make it more acceptable. Keep in mind that harden your blood to the point of having the same strength as steel is likely A ranked. Also, a golden rule of Blood release is that you can't use the blood of your opponent. ("She can also use it on her opponents by covering them in her blood and hardening it.'')

If you mean however she can latch some blood on them and try to immobilze some movement, I not sure if I am also with it. It means that she can control her blood from some distance while the range is set on ''self''. Think that you need to look back at the jutsu and maybe form a more base version.

2. High speed is usually not that bad, but to crack concrete with a strong blow? I think that is going too far for a genin. In real physics, it can't really be done by a mere human. In Naruto physics, I assume it would take some good strength and the speed. Again, I would like to see it lowered down.

That is it for now.
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Heyy guys! wondering why its been so quiet. and um Fox, i think team 14's waiting for you to post.

like everyone was busy this weekend but me?
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I don't know bout everyone else here, but my weekend was VERY busy.
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Gerontis said
@NytefallSo far I only see some problems with the custom techniques.1. She can harden her blood like steel? I think that is going too far, certainly for a genin. Lowering it would make it more acceptable. Keep in mind that harden your blood to the point of having the same strength as steel is likely A ranked. Also, a golden rule of Blood release is that you can't use the blood of your opponent. ("She can also use it on her opponents by covering them in her blood and hardening it.'')If you mean however she can latch some blood on them and try to immobilze some movement, I not sure if I am also with it. It means that she can control her blood from some distance while the range is set on ''self''. Think that you need to look back at the jutsu and maybe form a more base version.2. High speed is usually not that bad, but to crack concrete with a strong blow? I think that is going too far for a genin. In real physics, it can't really be done by a mere human. In Naruto physics, I assume it would take some good strength and the speed. Again, I would like to see it lowered down.That is it for now.


right i'll make the changes now
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okay made the changes http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/15895/posts/ooc?page=28#post-886771
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Well...my first vehicle has basically stopped on me. I've put so much cash in it but I can't honestly justify putting another 2 grand in it. That same day I went ahead and bought a 2008 Honda Ridge line (I like Chevy more but oh well).

I must say...it kinda hurts knowing that your first vehicle is gonna be gone soon (were trading it in because I don't have the cash or space right now) I don't know how to explain it...just kinda sucks man, my Tahoe was like family to me and now its basically gone. Anyway that's basically why I didn't post today, was kinda busy feeling happy and sad at the same time.

You've served me well Tahoe and I hope your next owner treats you right.
Till then, cyah later.
*Dabs tears with sleeves*
I miss it already!!!
Why did you have to go!!?!?!
Why!?!?!?!?!
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*uses a hose to make a sad rain effect over gamer's head*
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@Nytefall
Looks solid to me now, I accept it!

@Shadow
Posting for him today.
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Accepted by me too Nytefall. I'll have to discuss with the rest of the GM's in which team to put you because of several inactivities. I'd probably be Team Shun.
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okay thank you :3
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No-one read my question yet?

j8cob said
@AlterNathan:I have a very, very important question to ask you.Is your username pronounced more similar to "alternating" or "alternative"? Like, the way it is enunciated.


very important? why?

Alter - like 'to change'
Nathan - like the name

if i would have to choose one of your options i would sat Alternative is closer to the pronunciation than Alternating.
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There aren't many Hyuuga's Nathan. You can always look on the (I realise now slightly outdated) clan roster to find more members of your clan. http://narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/30/clan-roster Masami seems to be your only option if you are looking for Hyuuga's, but she is with her team.
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GUYYYYSSSS! *shakes everyone* help! Alice is officially missing! I cant find her anywhere!! *cries*
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