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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Fieryfly
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Did you do this with the consent of a GM? Because if so I would like to hear their reason.

Water Clone is vastly different than Shadow Clone so this is denied by me, meaning you will also want to keep your nature if you want to keep this technique.

Only thing I can recommend for names is find a site with names. There are a lot on the internet with great descriptions of what the names mean.
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I'll change shadow back to water clone and my nature to suiton then :(
It's not that i have a problem with thinking of names, but i need the names to be in sync with the clan history

I did change all the stuff to clarify my CS and to be more in sync with the villages preferable techniques (example: konoha - shadow clones)
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AlterNathan said
I'll change shadow back to water clone and my nature to suiton then :(It's not that i have a problem with thinking of names, but i need the names to be in sync with the clan historyI did change all the stuff to clarify my CS and to be more in sync with the villages preferable techniques (example: konoha - shadow clones)


The Shadow clones aren't a Konoha technique. There are only a few techniques that are 'claimed', but most are just wide-spread.
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Okay I think I have the basics of a character worked out. In around six hours would someone be so kind as to give me a hand so that I won't horribly screw up the backstory?
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I should be online around that time. You can add me on skype: fieryfly1, that will make discussing this way easier.
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Agent, I will be around too, so you can also send me a pm and we could continue everything from a pad or on Skype: mrnimnom If you want.
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nimmie! you're up to post
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@Fieryfly
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So... the both of you then?
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Fieryfly
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Yup ^^
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I am here :D

Also, posted with Kakashi the Panther.
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Name: Kichiro Kakurenbo
Nickname/Alias: MITSUO
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 13 years old, born on 14th of May
Age Appearance: 14
Sexuality: Hetero

Parents: Saburo Kakurenbo (father) X Masami Oda
Length and build 178, toned build
Weight 70 kg
Favorite weather and season Sunny late summer



Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: Kirigakure Shinobi Corps

Clan/Bloodline: None

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Water



Appearance:
Seen here Kichiro is dressed for a local play, the sword is a stage prop that he does not actually use. He possesses several outfits that are as baggy as this to hide what hand-seals he makes underneath the sleeves or to otherwise obscure what he is doing.



Personality: Absolutely FABULOUS. He copied a lot of the more dramatic flair that his mother usually displays on stage, though he tries to behave around strangers. When he believes he can get away with it Kichiro will do his poses and tends to articulate certain words with EMPHASIS and EMOTION. Said emotion may or may not be fake, as smoke and mirrors is an integral part of his identity. On the whole he prefers STYLE over substance.

Where possible Kichiro takes a moment to assess situations before responding to anything, and prefers to come in from unexpected angles to take his 'audience' by surprise. This extends to his every day life, as life itself is one grand play that demands the very best of it's actors at all hours.

In combat he prefers to distract and misdirect his opponents and blind them with flashy and suggestive movements before going in for the kill. His fluid taijutsu borrows elements of various dances to misdirect those who try to read his body language. On top of regular taijutsu he likes to throw in illusions mid-combat to throw his opponents off balance even further. Even in defeat Kichiro leaves those who face him with at the very least a lasting headache.

An avid taijutsu enthusiast Kichiro can often be found on the training fields outside the academy to improve his style. Other hobbies include going to the theatre and, oddly enough, cooking.



History: At the heart of it his parents marriage was unexpected for all involved. An offspring of a successful family of spies, Saburo was on a mission in the land of Hotsprings when he fell head over heels for the charming lead actress Masami. An exciting story of forbidden romance, high speed chases and epic ninja action followed, and eventually concluded with Kichiro's birth in the Hidden Mist. With his father still on active duty, Kichiro was mostly raised by his mother and initially thought about following in her footsteps.

Kichiro's relationship with his father is markedly cooler. They have respect for one another, but between his father's long absences as well as the fact his mother raised him on more romantic idealistic stories means they just don't really understand each other. Saburo frequently had to deal with the worst parts of human nature in the game of shadows, such as betrayal and deceit. Kichiro on the other hand still believed in fairy tales for most of his youth.

In the midsts of the uprising of 470 the vicious fighting led to his mother being severly injured. While she survived, the incident transformed Kichiro and turned his ambitions on their head. No longer content to be an actor, instead the boy dreamed to become strong enough to protect his family. While his father ostensibly supported the move Saburo did not truly believe his son had it in him to become a ninja.

Initially ridiculed for his flair for the dramatic, Kichiro persevered. He worked long and hard to prove himself. Even when it was discovered he had an extremely low chakra capacity he simply plowed on determined to focus on what he could accomplish. He freely admits that without the support of his mother he would likely have failed, however anyone who calls him a momma's boy will soon be reminded that Kichiro was among the best in taijutsu for a good reason.

During his time in the academy he adapted his dance lessons to taijutsu training and added a slightly more fluid touch to the standard style. Of course as he is a mere genin the emphasis on 'slightly' cannot be enough, however Kichiro is confident that given time something will grow from it.

Theme Song: Ping pong circulate



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Skills/Abilities
Kichiro is remarkably apt at taijutsu and genjutsu, however he does not have a great amount of talent for ninjutsu. His skills outside of his areas of expertise are merely adequate for a fresh genin.
Excellent chakra control



Special Traitsl
Low chakra reserves (they are mediocre by academy student standards)


Kekkei Genkai: None



Jutsu:



Custom Jutsu
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Maria 127
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u used inuyasha's pic
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But it looks cool XD(Don't smite me >.<)

On a more relevant note how would i link to my modified CS, would i just do the webpage or something more specific?
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@Eklispe: right click on the "permalink" thing on your post. Copy the shortcut from that.

@Agent: I approve. Kinda surprised we don't have any "dancers" already, but someone had to do it. XD
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@Agent

me: oh em geeeeeeee! you made a Kiri genin! more friends for Haru.

Haru: idiot. my only friends are my sensei's.

me: well i didn't wanna be the one to admit it. maybe you should get out more.

Haru: hmph i have no time for such things.

me: your always either crying, eating, or training.

Haru: whos fault is that!?

me: *shrugs* ..... i blame Alice.

★★anyway! welcomeeee!★★
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Michio should be good now.(i hope)
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Maria 127 said
u used inuyasha's pic


Indeed I did, is it already taken? I could not help myself because he wears such a grandiose red robe.

j8cob said
@Eklispe: right click on the "permalink" thing on your post. Copy the shortcut from that.

@Agent: I approve. Kinda surprised we don't have any "dancers" already, but someone had to do it. XD


Excellent, this means Kichiro is accepted right? I recall approval of two GM's was needed, and fieryfly already gave her go-ahead during the creation process.

Shadowcatcher said
@Agentme: oh em geeeeeeee! you made a Kiri genin! more friends for Haru.

Haru: idiot. my only friends are my sensei's.

me: well i didn't wanna be the one to admit it. maybe you should get out more.

Haru: hmph i have no time for such things.

me: your always either crying, eating, or training.

Haru: whos fault is that!?

me: *shrugs* ..... i blame Alice.

★★anyway! welcomeeee!★★


Kichiro: I will do my best to bring in maximum HAM and make a good friend. At least food and the consumption thereof is a noble endeavour that I can get behind, someone to appreciate my culinary arts is always welcome.

Me: That said I do wonder how exactly this is supposed to go, I assume Kichiro is to be assigned to a squad before I can start posting? Also, as stated I'm aiming for maximum HAM here, hope I am succeeding.
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You still need one more GM acceptance. Kinda surprised no other GMs have responded. Signs of laziness...

Or they're all busy.

Either way, you will be assigned a squad and then you can start posting, correct. Introductions can be awkward but once that's out of the way the possibilities become much greater and more fun. Really, you can work together with someone for an intro too and make it even better.
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Ah, I accept Kichiro. I love your genjutsu by the way xD
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Grade Eklispe's genin too, Roro, since you're here. :p
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