[OOC] Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

[Fieryfly]

@Agent: I will assign you to squad 2 (Shun). I would put on the roster but I cant at the moment. Just make sure you put your chara in the CS Bin and stalk Chrome who will be your sensei.

[ChromeHound]

Fieryfly said
@Agent: I will assign you to squad 2 (Shun). I would put on the roster but I cant at the moment. Just make sure you put your chara in the CS Bin and stalk Chrome who will be your sensei.

(Fiery, I'm filled up already xD) I mean, I always love to have more, but I've got you, Nytefall and Nicias who are still on my team. Both of them are still active, I am in collabs with them at the moment, they've just been on a brief hiatus due to exams, work and such. Buuuuuuut, once we finish up our collabs both should be fully active. That being said, if there are no other available spots in Kiri, I could always have a fourth! :p

*Glances around with shifty eyes...* I will horde all of the genin...

[Agent B52]

@Chrome:
No place in your squad? In that case the village roster needs to be updated, as that says you still have two places left.

[Mr Nim]

Edit: Gonna talk about this with other people first.

[AlterNathan]

Shadow, Takeshi and Haruhi... i don't know what its gonna be about, but we should do a collab ;)

[GlitchyBugger]

Solok, Nathan, you guys carry on hunting the Panther down and I'll be sat here talking to myself :D

[ChromeHound]

Agent B52 said
@Chrome:No place in your squad? In that case the village roster needs to be updated, as that says you still have two places left.

Unfortunately that was a little bit of a misunderstanding yes. We are in the process of working it out though, and hopefully we'll have you up and posting in no time! ^^

[Shadowcatcher]

@AlterNathan

im up for it. i'll pm you and we can do a bit of brainstorming. though i dont think it has to be too serious. filler posts are fun to write and read ^^

[Gamer geek]

I've said it once and I'll say it again...
Niji knows! She must be...delt with...

[Fieryfly]

@Agent: Okay after a lot of discussion (xD) we decided that your Genin will still go to Team Shun until another Jounin has been made. We'll just be a happy team of four until then.

[AlterNathan]

Do i hear a request for a jounin there? i can throw in my other jounin idea after some alterations if you like

[Agent B52]

Most excellent! So, how will this be spun IC? Kichiro passed the exams at an unusual time? Or he did he just happen on something worthy of immediate promotion like what Naruto pulled off during the Mizuki incident?

[GlitchyBugger]

I'd suggest that maybe due to a previous (NPC) Jounin being unable to teach (by dying or something), you've been put into another team despite the fullness of it?

[Fieryfly]

^ That sounds pretty good to me. And I am totally for meeting up because my character Nami has yet to be introduced as well.

[Agent B52]

Fieryfly, you wish to meet up with me? I'm going to crash now, would mind it terribly if we did it tomorrow at, say, 16:00 on skype?

[Eklispe]

My genin is ready for grading also i made some small changes to his history and ya go look please. :)

[LillyDove]

Hey, I'm still waiting for someone to (hopefully) give my Kumo Anbus second approval..... Sooo yeah ^_^

Katsumi Fūryoku

[Gerontis]

It looks good, but you should remove the Beast Wave Palm technique. Seeing it can cut through anything, that is a bit too much. The Blade of Wind Technique is already a better technique than the Beast Wave.

As for the custom techniques, I am pondering on the first custom technique. It is saying it pulls the victim/target into striking distance. But how is that limited? With the target having less strength, so that it will become kind of pulling between the user and target? Is sight on the target required? It does remind me of some auto-hit, as I would like to know how it is one custom technique while it has two kind of techniques : The push and pull and then the lightning.

I also think you need to look at this :
J8's review

[Gerontis]

@Eklispe

The CS looks good, save for it from the custom technique.

''Covers the body of the user in water which slows down any impact before it can reach the skin, This technique lowers the speed of the user but essential enables then to react to any attack before it lands.''

Before any attack lands? That sounds quite odd. It lowers the speed, but yet enables to react on any attack? You should likely take that out. As for weakness, I think you need to say that it lowers the speed and lightning. Fire is actually the thing that a water armor would be useful against, but would be suicide against a lightning release user.

[LillyDove]

Gerontis said
It looks good, but you should remove the Beast Wave Palm technique. Seeing it can cut through anything, that is a bit too much. The Blade of Wind Technique is already a better technique than the Beast Wave. As for the custom techniques, I am pondering on the first custom technique. It is saying it pulls the victim/target into striking distance. But how is that limited? With the target having less strength, so that it will become kind of pulling between the user and target? Is sight on the target required? It does remind me of some auto-hit, as I would like to know how it is one custom technique while it has two kind of techniques : The push and pull and then the lightning.I also think you need to look at this :

The first technique has limits I just forgot to write them up, the target has to be with in five meters or less of the user to be able to efficiently to be able to get the user in striking distance. It's mostly used to prevent the target from having any time to escape the small distance. As for the two techniques, pulling requires the wind release and the lightning is the push (charge palm Jutsu), it was just included in the first.

I looked at and made the required changes along with adding details to the four swords tracking seal that included, adding the second and third stage dependent on each other as well as weaknesses.

I will remove the Beast Wave Jutsu.