[OOC] Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

[AlterNathan]

Edited

Arisaka Namine
(once again, I'm sorry that it's already in the bin)

[Fieryfly]

Fieryfly said
I would like to point out to Nathan that you wrote KumAgakure instead of KumO. Though a village hidden in bears sounds hilarious you should probably change that. :p

Psst Nathan ;)

[AlterNathan]

fix'd

(lets to a hidden bear collab sometime)

[Fieryfly]

Hell yes. Gero must join. This is where Ger is from x3

[AlterNathan]

Name: Shishi Natsu
Nickname/Alias:
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 11, april 16th
Age Appearance: 13
Sexuality: Straight

Parents: Shishi Kobu & Shishi Anami
Length and build 5 feer
Weight 46 kg
Favorite weather and season A dry day in autumn



Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: Kirigakure Military forces

Clan/Bloodline: Shishi

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Doton (Earth release) (Affinity)



Appearance:
credit to xDaisukeMisorax


Personality:
Natsu is a bold and very outgoing person. Always boasting about the great power he has, while that is not all that impressive. He talks down on most of the people and even more on those he likes while he is very formal and kind to his higher ups. Natsu Holds an obsession for all kinds of animals and would love a summon but on the other hand he thinks he too good for them.


History: ---WIP---
Natsu was born in the outskirts of Kirigakure. He had a kind of rough childhood always getting into fights with other kids around his age. mainly because he was a huge showoff, and he always lost the fights. this all changed when he got into the shinobi academy and could show the other kids the skills he was boasting about. Now that he is graduated he wants to show everyone he is the best.

Theme Song:



Weapons/Items[u][/u]:

Weapons or Items

Name of Weapon or Item:
Standard Shinobi equipment
Description:
Shuriken, Kunai, Smoke bombs, Exploding tags etc.



Name of Weapon or Item:
Goggles
Description:
Normal goggles too keep things out of his eyes
Appearance:
See character appearance

Skills/Abilities
Average chakra reserve
Little bit above average chakra control
Below average Edurance
Below average strenght
Below average stamina



Special Traits
Talented in Ninjutsu
Bad at Taijutsu and Kenjutsu


Kekkei Genkai:

N/A



Jutsu:

Cannon Jutsu

Doton: Shinjū Zanshu no Jutsu
Doton: Retsudo Tenshō

Custom Jutsu

Custom Jutsu

Name of Technique:
Doton: Aasu Supaiku (earth spike)
Type of Jutsu:
Offensive
Rank:
C
Range:
Short to mid
Nature Type:
Earth
Handseals:
Bird, Dragon, Dog
Description:
A spike raises up form the ground trying to impale the target
Weakness:
The spike rises relatively slow and can thus be avoided easily

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Name of Technique:
Doton: Mega chousuupaa yama (Mega ultra super mountain)
Type of Jutsu:
Showoff
Rank:
D
Range:
Short
Nature Type:
Earth
Handseals:
Hare, Snake, Boar, Tiger, Boar, Snake, Hare, clasp
Description:
Basically rises a huge lump of earth up form the ground
Weakness:
It doesnt really do anything and takes up a lot of chakra

Summons

Summoning(s)

N/A

[Cuco]

AlterNathan said
Doton: Aasu Supaiku (earth spike)

My mind went somewhere bad with this X3

[Fieryfly]

... same Cuco. I am also slightly wondering if we have room in Kiri for another genin but wifi hates me and wont let me open the backup site. GM's?

[Little Alice]

We do. Fox dropped Rai, so I have room fit for another student. And Alternathan, mind changing the Ninjutsu expert with something that comes down to the line of that he has a talent/knack for it? A starting genin that is a ninjutsu expert may be a bit off.

Once that is changed, I accept it.

[Eklispe]

Just making sure nobody forgets i exsist. :D

[Gamer geek]

Eklispe said
Just making sure nobody forgets i exsist. :D

Who are you? Did anyone else hear a voice?

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BTW I'll try to post soon enough.

[ChromeHound]

@AlterNathan, I would accept it, but I feel like I should give you a heads up before I do so. Doton: Shinjū Zanshu no Jutsu (Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique) is unusable unless you also have a technique for getting underground, such as the Hiding Like a Mole Technique. Seeing as you currently only have four techniques, you could probably just add the Hiding Like a Mole Technique and make everything a little easier, but keep in mind that it is also a C-ranked technique and you currently have two at that rank already. If you have any questions just let me know, but once you make those changes I will also accept it.

[AlterNathan]

two questions:

1 - Is namine accepted? if so:
Gero, want to collab?

2 - Does adding 'hiding like a mole' to Natsu make him accepted? if so:
Alice, want to collab?

[j8cob]

The history section says WIP.

Finish the history before any of the acceptances count. Incomplete sheets aren't acceptable.

[ChromeHound]

@AlterNathan, as per what J8cob has said, I cannot accept it until the history is finished. Sorry I didn't notice it last night, I suppose that's what I get for trying to review after 3am xD sorry, and thank you J8 for catching that. Also, AlterNathan, you can add Hiding Like a Mole but you will need to remove one of your other C-Ranked techniques as Genin can only start with two. Make those changes and I will look again.

[Lesli]

AlterNathan said
two questions: 1 - Is namine accepted? if so: Gero, want to collab?2 - Does adding 'hiding like a mole' to Natsu make him accepted? if so:Alice, want to collab?

Chrome politely pointed out that he has already two C ranked techniques. Adding Hiding like a Mole, makes three? So that won't be accepted. Best would be to remove the spike custom technique. It is better replaced with the Hiding like a Mole technique in my opinion. I would also like to have a more expanded history. Two or (I really prefer a lot more) three paragraphs would do it.

[AlterNathan]

I will make the edits to Natsu-kun

that leaves me with Q1, what about Namine-chan?

[Fieryfly]

Eklispe said
Just making sure nobody forgets i exsist. :D

I didn't forget! I added Michio to team Hayate (Little Alice) so find her and attack her about the team. I don't know if I gave you an official welcome, but welcome! Sorry for all the delay and mess.

@Nytefal: I am absolutely incapable of finding your CS anywhere. Could you perhaps link me? Because then I can link her in the Roster.

[Eklispe]

Little Alice i have been told to attack you about my being on the team, *Commences attack*

@fieryfly thanks for the welcome!

[ChromeHound]

Fieryfly said
I didn't forget! I added Michio to team Hayate (Little Alice) so find her and attack her about the team.

Why did you call it Team Hayate?? XD It's Team Hayashi, unless Mika went through a name change... :p

[Fieryfly]

I love Hayate so much obviously.

Or you and Alice just collab so much that you have become one entity in my mind or something.