Review of Ariska Namine :
I will keep it in a more summarized version for now.
A. ) A bit strange that they have an ANBU from Takigakure. From what I know and remember is that Kumogakure's influence isn't near that place. Even when she had to leave the place, it would make more sense if she would be from the Frost or Sky country. A small change that would make more sense in my opinion. I will keep my personal opinion on the further history however as I am a bit doubtful about it.
B. ) Just a pet peeve, but what is the affinity? Fire or lightning chakra nature?
C. ) Some extra equipment for het jutsu
Explain this please? What kind of extra equipment?
D. ) Some traits and skills are kind of swapped?
I also am not sure about the heightened senses. Though ANBU are elite shinobi, I kind of think that should be removed or be compromised with lowering the other traits/skills.
E. )
- Hidden: Maito Yoshito (righteous might)
Kind of OP. It all just suggest that it will be a beam that it is capable of dealing massive damage. But how is the lightning generated? How is the attack formed? If it just a beam that is being launched after the streak of handsignals, I want to see more handsignals and a more balanced weakness. Kind of not want to accept a custom technique that is like that. Else I would suggest to look at False Darkness, which is kind of the same idea.
-Chakra Nageru (chakra hurl)
I am not sure if you know, but a blade enhanced by a generic lighting chakra nature, is able to pierce through rock and material like that. To parry it would mean that the person needs to use a chakra flow technique of equal or better power in order to deflect it. I kind of advise to put more thoughts/detail in your custom techniques cause I kind of get the idea that they are rushed.
F. ) The summoning ;
-Fly and high speed? I kind of not accept that. Even for short distances, how far is a ''short'' distance? Fifty meters?
- Dream Weaver, how is the genjutsu cast? Touch, breathing in a fume or what? What does the peacock use to get the person in a genjutsu? And I think that the traditional way of breaking out of her genjutsu is quite possible. Else it would be instantly A or S ranked in my opinion.
- Wind Release: Whirlwind, is Gale windpalm? Why not just put that there?
- Multiple Mirage, weakness? And again : how does the peacock put one in a genjutsu?
I would advise to overlook the CS and edit it to make things more cleared out on how and such.
