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Here's my unfinished WIP:

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Very interesting and very funny lol, the only thing I really see at this stage, is with the Hero outfit, Since it is made to be tailored to their quirk, it could do something like help regulate her body temperature as a suggestion, even if she doesn't specify anything the U.A. Department of Support likes to go overboard a lot.
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It is a pretty strong Quirk, can very easily be used to mess others up, so it is a lot better than simply support. Since there is a lot of quirks that is close range, and they wont be able to get close while having enough poster to attack, while it can't directly attack that can be compensated by Hero weapons. Aka the various weapons made and used by heroes.
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That and by, for instance, increasing the friction on others, Usagi can make a simple punch hit pretty hard. Or by decreasing her own, she can make attacks from even a sword slide off her. I think it should even be nerfed a bit, as I can't really discover a weakness except for as example Frin's heat as that is energy transfer and not force, and even then she can singlehandedly win by keeping him at a distance, making him practicly useless.

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I like her! (And that's not just because she is weak against Frin's heat) She even seems almost finished except for maybe a better Hero Outfit like @olcharlieboi said. The tiger theme seems pretty good, fitting her more 'primal' appearance, so maybe work with that some more.
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So what you're saying is to limit it down to just Usagi herself? I can do that no problemo (=w=)b
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Not necessarily, just some kind of limit somehow. Maybe she can only use it with a very short range, or she has a limit of how much friction she can change.
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Oh I definitely planned to limit it. Unlimited friction control would also entail flat-out intangibility, which was definitely something I wanted to avoid. A very short range (a couple feet maybe? within arm's reach would probably work) seems perfectly doable.
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Like an example is how Ochako Uraraka who has an incredibly powerful quirk of Zero Gravity, can't use it on herself, and has a limit on how much weight she can make float before getting extremely nauseated along with headaches. If she goes past her limit she straight up will puke. as an example.

so could do like Nightmare suggests by limiting range or how much she can do, and could also have it where it's possible to go past that limit for a massive drawback.
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Probably another Manga to Anime change: She actually can use it on herself.


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Planning to limit the range and give her side-effects for going over it yeah. In other news, after a bit of research, the force I'm thinking of is probably momentum, not friction. Friction wouldn't let a person run up a wall since the collision between a foot and a wall creates momentum moving away from it (think when you throw a tennis ball at a wall and it bounces off), and preventing the collision (what friction does) would essentially mean nothing is keeping her foot on the wall, so to speak. Which, after a few steps, she'd get pulled back down by gravity. I'm gonna sit down and figure out exactly which part of physics I'm fucking around with here, then rewrite the Quirk once I've got that figured out.
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We got a total of 8 people, not counting me, who is applying.. .very nice lol, I also changed stuff on my own character's quirk to try make him a lot better balanced, as well as it's name.. since that guy from the Festival's quirk is actually called Copy Cat.
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I am also interested, will probably go with wind quirk like Inasa from hero License arc
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That and by, for instance, increasing the friction on others, Usagi can make a simple punch hit pretty hard. Or by decreasing her own, she can make attacks from even a sword slide off her. I think it should even be nerfed a bit, as I can't really discover a weakness except for as example Frin's heat as that is energy transfer and not force, and even then she can singlehandedly win by keeping him at a distance, making him practicly useless.

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I like her! (And that's not just because she is weak against Frin's heat) She even seems almost finished except for maybe a better Hero Outfit like @olcharlieboi said. The tiger theme seems pretty good, fitting her more 'primal' appearance, so maybe work with that some more.


Actually the tiger thing was a common visual theme for oni since... shit, forever, I guess. They're always depicted as wearing tiger-skin loincloths xD
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Redid Usagi's Quirk. I was definitely thinking of momentum. I'm an RPer not a scientist.
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Well oni and Ogres both lol. the Japanese legends like Tiger and big being together lol. Frankly as soon as you make the outfit more then simply clothes your character will be accepted.

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No one is expected to know everything after all, so basically she can control Kinetic energy to a degree in her area. It is an interesting ability and can be pretty decent in many situations, pretty good against villains, and disaster recovery. Let us know when you get the rest finished so we can give it's final review.
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Done. Personality and most of the bio was basically copypasta'd then tweaked to fit this setting (hence why it's so long), so if something seems off don't hesitate to bring it up.
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I don't see really much wrong with it, I had planned to start the roleplay though with the Practical Exam, skipping the written for obvious reasons. Though it may be better to skip the opening exam entirely. Not to sure now I will emit, will decide that bit later after thinking about it.
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O snap, should I dial Usagi's age back to just entering high school then? Or does U.A. accept people starting on whatever year or what's the deal there? Also out of curiosity since I don't recall it being brought up in the animu (I'm a filthy casual who doesn't like reading when I can help it) does U.A. have dorms or some similar arrangement or is it more of a "'Kay school day's over go home" type deal?
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Later in the Manga after a lot of trouble, wont say specifically what because of massive spoilers, a dorm is created for the students to live at. Otherwise they normally still live at home like always, Since I have yet to finalize some ideas I could be introducing the dorm as a permanent thing or just as a special story thing later on. As for the aging thing, there is a reason why I stated an Age range, as long as it's in that range it's fine. I am taking half american half Japanese approach to this system. I love Japanese class system though American's school system is more forgiving in some ways. There is no specifics as to when someone age wise should truly be in school, just a society norm. thus why I said 14-17, anything in that age range is fine for me.

This is suppose to be their story of them on their journey to becoming heroes, thus why we are starting on their first year of U.A. at the very least. When thinking about it probably will just begin the story with them on their first day of class, and do the same as the anime for the first day, the various tests for showing off reasons.
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