[OOC] Stars at War (Galactic-scale Military Nation RP)

[o0V0o]

Yes, it is detecting a random ship... Sorry again for the confusion...

[OfWindAndRain]

@o0V0o
No, it's fine, it's just hard to tell what's going on because your entire post is one big thing. You need to cut it up, separate it, so it's easier to tell what's going on. Each part, each chapter, each section is a short story, a scene, a particular perspective or two: When you have your leader talking to your commander, that's one scene. Then cut it so we know it changes, and describe it.

I had so much trouble with that last post because it was one big long ramble that didn't specify anything for me. Okay, so some random utility ship detected one of mine, and identified it. Where? How far away was it from the edge of my space, or your space? More to that, it was difficult to know who was speaking because all your dialogue was all over the place, with two or three different people talking, and only some of it being sorta labelled.

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This is just friendly criticism, so that we can all write a post, and not have to ask anyone about it, because we understood it perfectly. That being said, if anything I say is confusing, please tell me.

[Luna_Maria]

hey @o0V0o and @datadogie, are you two gonna respond? if not, i'm going to post without knowing what you two did

[BingTheWing]

This still open?

[Luna_Maria]

@BingTheWing yes, it's always open. new players welcome!

[datadogie]

@Luna_Maria Sorry, last night was a little busy. I'm the event coordinator for an Arma group, and we have three events per weekend. I'm also part of the mod development for that same group, so I was trying to add some more factions onto my mod.
But yes, I'll respond.

[AbysmalDemon]

@Luna_Maria@OfWindAndRain

Sorry for recent inactivity, will have a post up later today Wind.

And Luna, @CowboyCommando has permission to use my nation in their CS. We've been PMing.

[datadogie]

And Luna, @CowboyCommando has permission to use my nation in their CS. We've been PMing.

@AbysmalDemon

I was wondering why he kept stalking the thread. XD

[Klomster]

@datadogie Ooooh, Arma.

Used to be in a semi serious group for a while. Problem is i don't like having all these realism and radio mods so i grew tired of it. Then the group died as it changed into a super serious group.

[Luna_Maria]

sorry guys for not posting. i've been having family related stresses

[CowboyCommando]

So anyone want to do collaborations with me? PS yes my sheet is super WIP still. Just been enjoying working on this 24/7. For an idea how detailed the military will be, look at FMMC Equipment and vehicles, and PDF Vehicles.

[Luna_Maria]

@OfWindAndRain @datadogie

So sorry for taking so long to post guys, i've been having writer's block as well as family troubles.

@CowboyCommando

I'm a little too overburdened right now to start any new collaboration threads. I'm already interacting with three people.

[Klomster]

@CowboyCommando I am making my start with @datadogie, so i'm a bit centered where i can be.

Edit: Lol, checking your CS, my roommate is from Östersund :P

[CowboyCommando]

@CowboyCommando I am making my start with @datadogie, so i'm a bit centered where i can be.

Edit: Lol, checking your CS, my roommate is from Östersund :P

@Klomster

XD, I was using a more surreal naming system for things, always fun. Also I should've known it was the Swede who would be power hungry and create a tech level 1. :P

[Hostile]

Damn, I totally forgot I signed up for this.

[OfWindAndRain]

So can we expect a post from anyone anytime soon?

I wont br able to post for a while, but i can certainly watch.

[CowboyCommando]

I can, once I tear myself from world building. I'll try to get something out today. But more introductory than anything since no one can collab right now XD.

[Knight Solaire]

So can I just? Jump in?

[OfWindAndRain]

@Knight Solaire
The entire OP repeats "Write a nation, post it, and jump in."

[OfWindAndRain]

Update: if no one posts, I'll make something of my 3rd fleet coming in and blowing shit up.