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As the missiles started their bombardment against the gate, it was only a matter of a few
minutes before the cracks starts to materialize on the gate. Spreading, until the horde stops pouring into our world. Until it happened, the gate imploded sending shockwaves to everyone, catching them off guard as the force of the was enough to send orc and men a like flying, shattering glass from a mile away and even sending a few nearby vehicles to the air.
Mankind raising their weapons up the air, cheering their first victory against these unknown monsters. Faraway, the sound of tanks and armored vehicles began to emerge from the nearby streets, crushing bones of both men and beasts, and causing cracks upon the paved road. The sound of nearby combat of humans against the remaining beasts can sometimes be heard echoing throughout the ruined city. And the President and the Counselors are now being evacuated to an unknown place, where they could be well-protected from these barbaric beasts. Suddenly, a few dozens of black trucks pulled up to nearby corpses of the unknown beast. Men and women in their yellow hazmat suit began to perform a small perimeter to collect the data from the beasts. And almost none of them noticing about a few Super Soldier that joined the group, preparing for whatever that come next. They are armed with a small machine gun, a flamethrower at their back, and a blade cling to their thigh. Their protective suit was also thicker, seem to be heavier as the black color allow them to blend in easier in this wreckage.
The remaining orcs have scattered around the ruined city, mostly under the rubber as they set up booby traps and ambushes and it seems that the goblins have taken up camp in what was once the underground railroads and tunnels that connect the city with nearby cities.
With the destruction of the gate, the fantasy creatures were cut off from their reinforcements and have dropped their previous tactics, which was to charge at the enemies with all their might. and due to foresight or desperation, have come up and degraded to using guerrilla style fighting.
The energy fluctuations that previously surrounded the gate have ceased to exist. As the gate consumed itself and the energy needed to maintain it. and the legacy structure that once stood besides it was no more. It was calm as most of the fighting was put to a stop.
Meanwhile, on the ground level.
The USEA soldiers tried their best to save those that lied in what once a twenty floors high. The sound of people calling, crying, and begging for help echoing under the mountain of concrete. And those that are lucky survive after the destruction were desperate. Some families had lost their children, others had lose their parents. And some desperately digging through the debris, trying to scavenge what had lost. And the Super Soldier stand there, watching the civilian as they are digging to found their loves one. Some ask them for help, only to be replied with silence. Others ask them for support, only to receive a stern glare from these big being. And somehow, because of these soldiers, there weren’t chaos. People aren’t trying stealing others, or mocking each other. No, they just dig, and dig until there hand bleed red and dust covered their face. Some lose their hope and went to the nearby medical station. They were waiting in line and remain intact, yet all of them seem to lose something. They no longer weep, or clench their fists like what those character do when seeing another suffer. No, the survivor bows their head, looking small holes beneath their feet. And farther away are multiple military trucks waiting in line, carrying puppets that has shattered its precious coat to a safer place, separated them from this broken world. And those soldier, now gathered in lines, watching the ruin of the battlefield. They hold their guns tight, afraid if they stop holding the trigger then they will become one of them, buried in this mountain of debris. They afraid that they could no longer return to their family. It had been hours since the last time they can contact with their loves one. And as anyone trying to dial any number, the only sound they could hear of the other side is an infinite beeping sound, signaling there aren't any signal. They had heard from their Sergeant. That they will have three lines: one is to the artillery, second is the general, and third is the air force. And he told them to be in line, the Sergeant said, that these beasts shall bleed. Yet, it seems so futile for them. But what do they know? They are only soldiers that are going to defend this nation. Following the military trucks, the troops evacuated from their battlefield along with an endless line of civilian. Nearby, multiple plumes of smoke rises to the sky, welcoming the new day on this broken world. Or at least, to this ruined city.
The peace didn’t last long as a huge pillar of light slammed straight through the location of the gate rubble, cars, and people alike melted in a matter of seconds as the pillar begins to burrow into the earth. Soon, the remaining orcs revealed themselves as they charge into unsuspecting civilians that were desperately digging in the rubble, and without remorse ripped their victims piece by piece with their huge arms.
Soon, the peace dissolved into chaos as arms, legs, and bodies started flying. As the orcs effortly dismembered their victims regardless if they had weapons or not. hiding in the rubble to protect themselves from the bullets of their enemies.
And then, they met the supersoldiers. One of the chieftains that survive and a handful of his personal guards stare at the strange men. “Worthy enemies.” The chieftains said as he points his halberd at the giants. “Get ready!” he commanded, smiling at the opportunity as they charge into the group.
Stream of light coming out from the Super Soldiers right hand as their attached minigun are starting to heat up. They successfully halt the coming green skin for a moment, creating a temporary defensive line for the civilians to back up and the join the army. Some normal of the soldiers had also joined the battlefield, helping the Super Soldiers to safely pull back. But the coming waves of green skin seem endless as those beast rushing over their allies corpse, only to be pierced by a maelstrom of bullets. But everything needed an end, as the both the Super Soldier and the normal ones began to run out of bullets. So, the normal one began to switch to their Glock-17 handguns and the Super Soldier to begin setting the place ablaze with their flamethrower. The distance between these green skins and the human became so near when one was almost able to kill one of them, only to receive three bullets in the head. Suddenly, there comes a huge noise, with multiple green skins at their back lines to be blown up. And they were not the only one, as many more is being blown up, or shredded by another maelstrom of bullets coming from the back of the solders. Realizing they are being backed up by their armored vehicles and tanks, the normal and Super Soldiers ran, joining the line. The tanks and armored vehicles also began to fall back, with their turrets are constantly blasting the unknown monster. And in the front lines, the soldier with nearby helicopters are shooting those bird-likes in the skies. They are still 26 km from the nearest encampment, and 50 km away from their designated point. And it seems, the USEA going to remember this day for a long time. A day when their power is stronger than the enemies, yet it felt so futile as they failed to protect the citizen of USEA.
As the initial waves dies off in the hundreds, The gate begins to starts to materializes from the pillar, absorbing the energy from it, as it becomes larger and larger. The opening was so different from the last one, as surges of electricity violently exits from the gate cleaving straight through anything that straight in its way. Orcs, Humans, and even the Avians were like butter. severing limbs in an instant before the user gets to react.
“CHARGE!!!” The chieftain commands as rows of orcs pushes a giant rubble as they advances while supported by dozen orc archers that were accurately picking off dozens of soldiers that were trying to stop them. “Reinforcements will enter the gate just endure!” The orc said as they push what was once the piece of a skyscraper nearing where the tanks of the enemy were parked.
The gate was almost complete as its ends starts to connect with one another releasing tremendous amounts of shock waves that can rip through orc and men alike like an invisible blade. But, the orcs stand strong trying to defend the gate, the last stand as they desperately hold against the armor and air support their enemy was using against them.
But, in the end they prevailed, as the humans tucked tail and run, leaving behind those who cannot keep up. Tanks, Soldiers, Supplies, and Civilians were scattered around the city as they get cut off from the rest of the military. Leaving them at the mercy of the invaders, as tanks gets pounded by large humanoid creatures, civilians and soldiers alike were mercilessly killed, and with it the city of Ha Noi fell.
minutes before the cracks starts to materialize on the gate. Spreading, until the horde stops pouring into our world. Until it happened, the gate imploded sending shockwaves to everyone, catching them off guard as the force of the was enough to send orc and men a like flying, shattering glass from a mile away and even sending a few nearby vehicles to the air.
Mankind raising their weapons up the air, cheering their first victory against these unknown monsters. Faraway, the sound of tanks and armored vehicles began to emerge from the nearby streets, crushing bones of both men and beasts, and causing cracks upon the paved road. The sound of nearby combat of humans against the remaining beasts can sometimes be heard echoing throughout the ruined city. And the President and the Counselors are now being evacuated to an unknown place, where they could be well-protected from these barbaric beasts. Suddenly, a few dozens of black trucks pulled up to nearby corpses of the unknown beast. Men and women in their yellow hazmat suit began to perform a small perimeter to collect the data from the beasts. And almost none of them noticing about a few Super Soldier that joined the group, preparing for whatever that come next. They are armed with a small machine gun, a flamethrower at their back, and a blade cling to their thigh. Their protective suit was also thicker, seem to be heavier as the black color allow them to blend in easier in this wreckage.
The remaining orcs have scattered around the ruined city, mostly under the rubber as they set up booby traps and ambushes and it seems that the goblins have taken up camp in what was once the underground railroads and tunnels that connect the city with nearby cities.
With the destruction of the gate, the fantasy creatures were cut off from their reinforcements and have dropped their previous tactics, which was to charge at the enemies with all their might. and due to foresight or desperation, have come up and degraded to using guerrilla style fighting.
The energy fluctuations that previously surrounded the gate have ceased to exist. As the gate consumed itself and the energy needed to maintain it. and the legacy structure that once stood besides it was no more. It was calm as most of the fighting was put to a stop.
Meanwhile, on the ground level.
The USEA soldiers tried their best to save those that lied in what once a twenty floors high. The sound of people calling, crying, and begging for help echoing under the mountain of concrete. And those that are lucky survive after the destruction were desperate. Some families had lost their children, others had lose their parents. And some desperately digging through the debris, trying to scavenge what had lost. And the Super Soldier stand there, watching the civilian as they are digging to found their loves one. Some ask them for help, only to be replied with silence. Others ask them for support, only to receive a stern glare from these big being. And somehow, because of these soldiers, there weren’t chaos. People aren’t trying stealing others, or mocking each other. No, they just dig, and dig until there hand bleed red and dust covered their face. Some lose their hope and went to the nearby medical station. They were waiting in line and remain intact, yet all of them seem to lose something. They no longer weep, or clench their fists like what those character do when seeing another suffer. No, the survivor bows their head, looking small holes beneath their feet. And farther away are multiple military trucks waiting in line, carrying puppets that has shattered its precious coat to a safer place, separated them from this broken world. And those soldier, now gathered in lines, watching the ruin of the battlefield. They hold their guns tight, afraid if they stop holding the trigger then they will become one of them, buried in this mountain of debris. They afraid that they could no longer return to their family. It had been hours since the last time they can contact with their loves one. And as anyone trying to dial any number, the only sound they could hear of the other side is an infinite beeping sound, signaling there aren't any signal. They had heard from their Sergeant. That they will have three lines: one is to the artillery, second is the general, and third is the air force. And he told them to be in line, the Sergeant said, that these beasts shall bleed. Yet, it seems so futile for them. But what do they know? They are only soldiers that are going to defend this nation. Following the military trucks, the troops evacuated from their battlefield along with an endless line of civilian. Nearby, multiple plumes of smoke rises to the sky, welcoming the new day on this broken world. Or at least, to this ruined city.
The peace didn’t last long as a huge pillar of light slammed straight through the location of the gate rubble, cars, and people alike melted in a matter of seconds as the pillar begins to burrow into the earth. Soon, the remaining orcs revealed themselves as they charge into unsuspecting civilians that were desperately digging in the rubble, and without remorse ripped their victims piece by piece with their huge arms.
Soon, the peace dissolved into chaos as arms, legs, and bodies started flying. As the orcs effortly dismembered their victims regardless if they had weapons or not. hiding in the rubble to protect themselves from the bullets of their enemies.
And then, they met the supersoldiers. One of the chieftains that survive and a handful of his personal guards stare at the strange men. “Worthy enemies.” The chieftains said as he points his halberd at the giants. “Get ready!” he commanded, smiling at the opportunity as they charge into the group.
Stream of light coming out from the Super Soldiers right hand as their attached minigun are starting to heat up. They successfully halt the coming green skin for a moment, creating a temporary defensive line for the civilians to back up and the join the army. Some normal of the soldiers had also joined the battlefield, helping the Super Soldiers to safely pull back. But the coming waves of green skin seem endless as those beast rushing over their allies corpse, only to be pierced by a maelstrom of bullets. But everything needed an end, as the both the Super Soldier and the normal ones began to run out of bullets. So, the normal one began to switch to their Glock-17 handguns and the Super Soldier to begin setting the place ablaze with their flamethrower. The distance between these green skins and the human became so near when one was almost able to kill one of them, only to receive three bullets in the head. Suddenly, there comes a huge noise, with multiple green skins at their back lines to be blown up. And they were not the only one, as many more is being blown up, or shredded by another maelstrom of bullets coming from the back of the solders. Realizing they are being backed up by their armored vehicles and tanks, the normal and Super Soldiers ran, joining the line. The tanks and armored vehicles also began to fall back, with their turrets are constantly blasting the unknown monster. And in the front lines, the soldier with nearby helicopters are shooting those bird-likes in the skies. They are still 26 km from the nearest encampment, and 50 km away from their designated point. And it seems, the USEA going to remember this day for a long time. A day when their power is stronger than the enemies, yet it felt so futile as they failed to protect the citizen of USEA.
As the initial waves dies off in the hundreds, The gate begins to starts to materializes from the pillar, absorbing the energy from it, as it becomes larger and larger. The opening was so different from the last one, as surges of electricity violently exits from the gate cleaving straight through anything that straight in its way. Orcs, Humans, and even the Avians were like butter. severing limbs in an instant before the user gets to react.
“CHARGE!!!” The chieftain commands as rows of orcs pushes a giant rubble as they advances while supported by dozen orc archers that were accurately picking off dozens of soldiers that were trying to stop them. “Reinforcements will enter the gate just endure!” The orc said as they push what was once the piece of a skyscraper nearing where the tanks of the enemy were parked.
The gate was almost complete as its ends starts to connect with one another releasing tremendous amounts of shock waves that can rip through orc and men alike like an invisible blade. But, the orcs stand strong trying to defend the gate, the last stand as they desperately hold against the armor and air support their enemy was using against them.
But, in the end they prevailed, as the humans tucked tail and run, leaving behind those who cannot keep up. Tanks, Soldiers, Supplies, and Civilians were scattered around the city as they get cut off from the rest of the military. Leaving them at the mercy of the invaders, as tanks gets pounded by large humanoid creatures, civilians and soldiers alike were mercilessly killed, and with it the city of Ha Noi fell.
