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"Come on, just a little farther." A tear slid down the young girl's cheek as she ran, bare feet pounding against the frost bitten earth. Her breaths escaped her lips in small, milky tufts, hair raised on her arms betraying the chill she felt. But she couldn't stop moving... She wouldn't. A terrible shriek broke the silence, echoing in the forest behind her, urging her to run faster than she had ever done before. Her heartbeat matched her footsteps; quick but steady. It was fear that shone in her green eyes, fear that could be heard in her voice, but ultimately it was her determination that pushed her onward, running farther and farther into the night.

A luminescence around her neck caught her attention briefly as she pressed on. A black stone tethered to a silver chain had sprung to life, tendrils of a glowing green mist twirled around the object signaling the beginning of something much larger. The girl's steps did not falter even at this as she forced every ounce of her strength into a final burst of speed. A few more paces and she had all but reached her destination, crashing through the final lining of trees into an unusually rounded and even clearing. The moon, quite full in its current cycle, shone down unobstructed, bathing the girl in its light. As she neared the center of the clearing, she lifted her chin to gaze up at it, inhaling deeply and releasing a sad sigh.

By this point the mist had spread from the stone, surrounding the girl's body as she prepared herself for what was to come. The shrieks grew ever closer, glowing eyes seeming to appear from all sides, boxing her in to her current location. Creatures of darkeness surrounded her though they hesitated at the edge of the clearing, mindful of the light that would weaken their strength.

"You have me outnumbered, scores of you to one of me... Do you fear me that much that you would waste your chance now, when victory is all but yours?" She yelled out, addressing each and every one of the creatures that hunted her. Despite the fear that gripped her heart, she would not falter now. She would not give them the satisfaction. "It matters not, you will lose in the end. Just as you have now." As the words left her, nightmarish creatures charged at her from all sides, drawn in by her taunt. But all was in vain as the girl clasped a hand around the black stone, her eyes now mirroring the glowing green that had begun to fill the space surrounding her. "Éveiller!" In that instant, the mist appeared to ignite, causing the stone to rapidly expand. Any creature that had closed in met their end, the stone devouring each one it came into contact with as it grew. It planted itself into the ground, expanding outward some, but mostly growing taller until it had become a misshapen monolith. The same shrieks as before filled the air, now fueled with anger at having lost their prey; a girl they now assumed to be just as dead as their fallen comrades.

Responding to an unheard call, the remaining hunters drew back, returning to their masters so that they may await their next targets. Though it would be quite some time before the darkness would awaken, it seems their opportunity draws ever nearer.











All in all, I want this to be a fun and unique small group adventure. Casual, maybe even semi-advance when we feel like it... But as much as this is my baby, I do value the input and ideas of my RP partners so... If you think you might be interested in this general concept, but think of something that might add to its cool factor, then by all means please share. ^.^ I will also be hanging around (or will respond ASAP) to any questions about my current thought process on it, as well as details about the previous attempts.

Greatly looking forward to working with you, and touching up something that has been with me almost my entire writing career.
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I might be interested.

What kind of magical abilities and physical enhancements are we talking about?
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@Skwint

Well, hopefully I'll be able to clear up any confusion for you. Each of the main five characters would be the bearer of a crystal that represented their affinity for a particular element. It is that element that will determine what kind of magic they can learn/use. There will be some kinds of spells that are shared between them (either exactly the same or with the elemental twist on it... I have not yet determined) too... Those would be things like protective shields, unlocking doors, and illusion (though this one might vary in strength or specialty depending on the element as well).

Physical enhancements will work similarly to the spells. Each of them are stronger, faster, and bear more stamina than the average person. Depending on their affinity, they will also gain specific abilities. I've copied over the list from the previous version, although looking back through it... definitely going to need do retouches to even them out.



As per usual with elements you have your obvious ones... Fire, Water, Earth, and Air. For this RP I also added two others. Aether and Nether. Aether is definitely going to get a redo. My current thinking is that Aether will now be a conjuring type magic user. Whereas Nether is going to be a version of what I have written down to be Aether in the above hider.
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Would losing their crystal keep them from using their abilities? Or would it just dampen them?
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@Skwint

Oooh that's a good one. Something of that nature has never actually come up before, however I can see it making some good subplot points or twists. My answer to that is it will dampen their abilities.

For the version where the kids have grown up knowing about their destiny... Loss or separation from their crystal will only dampen their control. They will no longer have the same level of control over elemental magic as they did before (regular shared magic as mentioned before will remain untouched). Power is determined by their own spirit. So in theory, they might still possess the same level of power... But can no longer control their magic. Which might cause them to mistakenly injure their comrades or themselves in the process.

For the version where they are from our world, and stumble across their destiny... That will be a dampening across the board. Since they are not from a world with a lot of magic, the stone pretty much fuel everything. They will retain some level of control over their abilities but the power will not be as great. The farther they are from the stone, the weaker they become. This will include their physical inheritances as well.
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Count me in

I've always liked the idea of isekai, the another world sort of thing.
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@WeepingLiberty

This seems like it could potentially be interesting.

I'll throw my hat in the ring, if you'll have me~
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@WeepingLiberty

Expressing interest as well! From the old descriptions of the elements, I'm most grabbed by Earth. Definitely not married to the idea, especially since you mention wanting to change them up a bit, but figured it was worth a shout.
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This sounds intriguing! I'm particularly interested in the Aether element from the description above, although Fire would be a close second.
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@Skyrte

Would be glad to have you.

@Rune_Alchemist

RUUUUUUUUUUUNE!!!! How have you been? ^3^ You are very much welcome to any of my RPs, you know that.

@Riegal

Love to have you. You are correct, I do have plans to face lift them a tad although I don't forsee the main elements being changed too drastically. Hmm, I might actually end up doing that tonight that way any of you guys that are interested can take a look at what I've changed and see what still calls to you then.

@TaliPaendrag

Ahh, fire is feisty. Aether quite interesting. As I mentioned before, the concept for Aether might be changing from what it was originally designed for. I'll be sure to let you see the changes before you lock into one in particular, however your interest in either of those elements has been noted. ^.^
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Why do you have the create things that interest me???? I’m trying to pace myself!!!
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Mehehehe I am evil genius. You have fallen into the trap I designed specifically for you. Mwahahahaha
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Okay, here we go. I've gone through and done some tweaking. Some major, others not so much. I decided to include Nether just so you could see the comparisons and breakdown, however that is not one of the available elements. Everything else is up for grabs though. I urge taking a look through even if you are certain you want a particular element, just in case you want to swap to something else.



@Skwint@Skyrte@Rune_Alchemist@Riegal@TaliPaendrag

You were the first ones here, so if you are interested in this concept and would like to claim an element... You would have first pick.

@Ellion

Love you dearly, and you are always welcome in my RPs. However, there are only 5 available elements for the 'chosen children' soooo.... We can work you into the plot another way, or if you want you can wait to see if an element goes unclaimed too. Up to you toasty friend.
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Just saying, you got the 4 elements and life..maybe add death as a sixth element into the mix?

Read the previous post where you only cited 5.
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I like this a lot, they pretty much all interest me. Earth is definitely still my #1 pick though, mainly because I've got the skeleton of a character I've been feeling like playing that would fit into Earth best.

In the interest of making sure everyone gets an element they want, I'll also mention that Fire and Air would be my second and third picks that I'd still be happy to play.
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I think I would prefer air over the other elements.
Nevermind, I gave it a bit of thought and I think I'd pick water as my first choice.
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@WeepingLiberty That’s okay love. If something opens up I’ll be back. But I really do need to pace myself and I dare say you’ve gotten my hands full enough lol.

If you do modify the plot I may also be back lol
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RUUUUUUUUUUUNE!!!! How have you been? ^3^ You are very much welcome to any of my RPs, you know that.


Liiiiiiiibbby!~

It's been a long time.

long enough for me to forget you who you were Whoops.
I mean what.

Annnyways, I'm particularly interested in the Fire element, though Air is a good second.
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While I really like the descriptions for each of the elements, I think that I'm still most interested in Aether, with Fire as a close second. :3
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Just saying, you got the 4 elements and life..maybe add death as a sixth element into the mix?

Read the previous post where you only cited 5.


Smooooooth. Hahaha

@Riegal

Well unless one of the others is a super die hard earth fan that can't possibly live without playing an earth aligned character... I don't see why you can't have that element. Hahaha. I'll mark it down as yours for now, and am greatly looking forward to what you do with it.

@Skyrte

Water it is. Not a bad choice. Not set in stone until CS time, so if you change your mind again just let me know. I'll have you marked down for that element for now though.

@Ellion

Hehehe indeed I do. I'll keep you updated on what's going on so if you wanna hop in you may. Don't push yourself too hard though. We've got lots of work to do. ^.^

@Rune_Alchemist

T^T Y-y-you forgotted me? Waaaaaaaaaah.

Weeeell, I have been away for a year so I can't say I'm all that surprised. I had to double take on your name as well, worried that it sounded familiar but that I didn't actually know the person behind it. But, that matters not. You remember me now. XD

I'll put you down for Fire for now then. Trying to keep everyone with their first choices as best as possible. Depending on what happens with Skwint (if they develop further interest or not) we might shuffle around? Seems like everyone has a fairly unique first choice... or at least fine with what was left available when picking. As stated before, not set in stone so if you find yourself wanting to swap with someone, that's okay as long as both of you are alright with that change.

@TaliPaendrag

I tried my best to make each of them as unique as possible, give the elements themselves life outside of just being a classification. ^.^

Marking you down for Aether then. It'll be quite interesting to see what you do with it, and how it will ultimately end up interacting with the Nether character.
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