The London Hero Alliance [High Casual]

[Lurking Shadow]

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No it's all good. You're fine. No need for healing, already had a backup plan ready for that.

@AngelofOctober

so any preference then?

[AngelofOctober]

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so any preference then?

@Lurking Shadow

None for you. So go ahead and put something up. :)

[Lurking Shadow]

Work in Progress, Gideon

Name: Gideon McNeal

Age: 22

Alias: The Super Name you go by

Tier: 4(?, maybe 3.5?)

Years Spent in LHA: 2

Appearance:

Gideon prefers to cover nearly his entire body due to his most notable physical trait, bioluminescent blood. This blood is luminescent enough to be able to see a dim yellow glow traced over his veins. Other than that, he has pale skin, stands at an even 6’ (~1.83m) and weighs 125lb (~56.7kg), and dark brown hair.

Personality: Gideon enjoys conversation, and his general knowledge of a variety of topics support this, and he could easily talk for hours depending on how interested he is in the topic at hand, he however is slow to talk about things of a personal nature. He shares little about his past and rarely asks about others besides the general pleasantries.

Gideon is an incredibly focused individual, and often finds a solution to many problems in his path though this often comes detrimental as any problem proven difficult can boarder on obsessive for him and usually forgoes other things to some extent such as sleeping or eating.

While he refutes being fazed by criticism or for lacking progress on anything, he is rather insecure and significant amounts of stress simply leads to him not thinking. When this happens, he simply acts on instinct for an amount of time before ‘snapping out’ of it.

Skills: A passive interest in learning a little about various things means he has some degree of knowledge of a variety of topics. While this tends to be of a trivial nature, some information he learned is actually useful however.

Basic medical care- Knows enough to do things like applying pressure and elevating wounds to slow blood loss

Logical- Causes always leads to effects, it’s just a matter of knowing what causes lead to what effects

Hobbies: Debating, Google-ing various subjects as it comes to mind, Armored Warfare in The Great War and WW2

Weapons: Not really, although anything in your hand can constitute a weapon if you know and are capable of doing damage with it.

Equipment: None

Fighting Style: Prefers sheer force over dexterity and agility.

Strength: Variable (See ability) but generally has the strength of up to 50 men

Endurance: Far more resilient to injury than most others, can withstand about 5 times the force of other humans before the skin is pierced or the bone breaks. If an injury is sustained, it can be healed rapidly (bones can fully reform in days, tissue reforms in hours, etc.) but only during extended periods of rest (the majority of energy expended in combat goes to the muscles and thus lives little for cellular regeneration and other functions). If enough trauma is caused, he will fall unconscious and eventually die if the opportunity to recover is not provided. Requires less sustenance and sleep than others and has gone nearly a week without sleep (to minimal negative effect) and regularly fasts for a day or two.

Willpower: Will almost never stop at accomplishing at any task before him, however he is mentally unstable to some degree and simply stop making conscious decisions if stressed enough. If this were to happen, Gideon will still attempt to accomplish his goal if possible, but may result in unwanted consequences due to accomplishing the goal taking absolute priority over anything else.

Speed: Is capable of sprinting about twice as fast as the average human due to being able to exert a disproportionate amount of force compared to body mass.

Reaction Speed: Slightly above a normal human’s speed.

Name of Ability: Rìastrad (Translates roughly to ‘Warp Spasm’)

Class: Physical

Character Theme: Incapacitation of hostiles through blunt force. No need for maneuvers or calculating tactics, just a fist to a face.

Ability Capabilities: Stress triggers a surge of various elements and chemicals that serve to enhance the strength similar to having a surge of adrenaline. While undergoing a Rìastrad, Gideons appearance changes slightly with the body distorting slightly and most notably with his blood glowing a brighter shade. The brighter his blood illuminates the stronger he becomes and coincidentally can serve as an indicator to his current state. At rest, the light emits at 6 lumens (about half light output of a candle and has been observed to emit up to 60 lumens and is theoretically capable of getting even brighter for an even greater increase to strength.

In addition, Gideon exhibits an unusually tough body structure. Close examination under a microscope shows a different cellular structure than other humans but, alone, is not enough to explain the structural integrity. While not capable of extraordinary regeneration in combat, he is capable of generating another mix of biological chemicals and compounds that promote bone density and cellular division among other miraculous properties and leads to vastly decreased time to recover from injuries sustained. Blood transfusions have not yet been able to show a similar affect in other individuals (In fact it seems to negatively impact the recovery of tested individuals) and so far only seems to work in Gideon’s body exclusively

Qualities of Ability: Simply put, he gains a disproportionate amount of force relative to his body mass. While one would think that an increase in strength would lead to an increase of muscular tissue or at the very least mass of some kind, that is not the case for Gideon.

Strengths of Ability: Like stated above, can punch really, really hard. Can take hard hits. Can regenerate outside of combat.

Weaknesses of Ability: Due to the variable strength, Gideon on occasion may use excessive force, or perhaps not enough. While repeated training and combat encounters has allowed him to develop a sort of sense for this, it is not refined enough for complete accuracy. While using not enough force can be easily resolved by getting angrier, for example, there have been several incidents where excessive force has caused what most describe as unnecessary collateral damage.

Limitations of Ability: Increased strength increases proportionately with stress, there are limits to how livid a sane individual can get. Due to his shaky mental stability, it is probable at some point he may ‘snap’ and reach higher levels of strength at the cost of acting more bestial, or according to instincts, than to morals.

Biograph: Instead of a History You Will have 3 Events that were presented in the News. Something that defines their heroics.

Quote:

Reputation: [what is their reputation with the community]

Theme Song:

[Argent]

I'm interested!

[AngelofOctober]

I'm interested!

@Argent

Welcome aboard

[Argent]

@AngelofOctober
So, what would you think about a character who's main ability is enhancing the abilities of others?

Not as in copying them, but as in- if she concentrates on another character, she can temporarily 'boost' their power a bit, or help control some of the side-effects of the more dangerous powers.

[AngelofOctober]

@AngelofOctober
So, what would you think about a character who's main ability is enhancing the abilities of others?

Not as in copying them, but as in- if she concentrates on another character, she can temporarily 'boost' their power a bit, or help control some of the side-effects of the more dangerous powers.

@Argent

Interesting I'd like to see what you come up with.

[rawkhawk64]

I'm trying to translate game mechanics to an RP like this. Never really tried this before, but I'd like to think I've done a decent job of it.

Giovanni

GENERAL

Name: Giovanni "Gio" De Luca

Age: 22

Alias: The Silent

Tier: 3

Years Spent in SYNBAD: 5 years

Appearance

Standard

Most people would describe him as average. Average height, average build, average-looking face. In terms of appearance, that suits him just fine. When dressing casually, he tends to stick to t-shirts (mostly ones themed around cards), and blue jeans. He wears sneakers, and the occasional ball cap.

Super

When out and about on official SYNBAD business, Giovanni dons the simple outfit of The Silent. A green cloak covers most of his body. His head remains uncovered, but he wears a huge animal skull over it, with the spine trailing down to the ground. This simple look is rather intimidating. He also wears bandages around his forearms.

Personality: Giovanni is a rather kind and open person. He likes making friends, and especially loves making others laugh. He can kind of come off as a bit of a comedian and a goofball, even if his humor shifts between normal, morbid, and sarcastic. However, when people get to know him, they'll see that he tends to be a bit of a realist, not having any idealistic tendencies about his expectations. He would rather not sugar-coat the truth of matters, even if the truth could traumatize someone. After all, fighting to survive in the wild for 10 years will do that to a person. It is because of his hardships that he would rather see everyone laugh. After all, laughter is the best medicine, is it not?

When it comes to interests is where most people see the most interesting face of Giovanni. After joining SYNBAD, he was diagnosed with Asperger's Syndrome. In conversations, he has issues picking up on body language, and will also be unable to control how loud he is at times. The best way to describe his social life is "active, but odd". He will occasionally go into a long-winded and one-sided speech on certain topics of given the chance.

Skills:
Quick Learner- Due to the unusal trait of his powers and his past, Gio is a quick learner, absorbing new concepts almost like a sponge takes in water.

Strategist- Gio is a very good strategist, capable of forming both long- and short-term plans. On top of that, he has learned to adapt his plans on the fly.

Improvisation- As stated before, Gio is able to improvise on-the-spot. This allows him to formulate loose plans that can accomdate for a variety of situations. However, extremely unexpected circumstances can catch him off-guard.

Hobbies:

Card Games- Perhaps as a direct side-effect of his power, Gio certainly loves card games. He especially loves TCG's, as they remind him of his own ability. He avidly plays, and attends tournaments when off-duty.

Reading- Gio loves books. Especially fantasy books. He is usually seen with a book in his hand when not on a mission.

COMBAT INFORMATION

Weapon: A simple dagger. It was gifted to him by his dad before he was killed by a pack of wolves. It seems to be magical, capable of channeling his powers into it.

Equipment:

Hider

Deck of Cards- A set of cards that Gio always carries on his person. These cards are special, in that they are magical. They can grant him special abilities.

Deck Box- A holster that contains a simple, but durable, leather box for his cards. It has two sections, for the Draw Pile and the Discard Pile.

Relics- Rare and powerful magical artifacts that grant Gio permanent abilities. These effects are usually good, but can occasionally be detrimental.

Relic Bag- A simple bag that holds his Relics.

Potions- Potions that he can occasionally find. These either give him buffs, or give his foes debuffs. One-time use only.

Potion Pouch- A pouch for holding his Potions. Can carry a max of 3.

Fighting Style
Gio's fighting style is reliant on what cards he draws. If he draws no attack cards, he cannot attack for a while [that current post]. If he draws no defense cards, he cannot block any incoming attacks.

Strength- His strength is limited at peak human level, although he has not attained that yet. However, he is certainly above the average when it comes to his strength.

Endurance- His ability to take a hit is quite surprising, given his stature. He can take most blows and come out just fine. However, he has nothing special granting him any particular armor or immunity (outside of his cards) to really strong people, or to weapons.

Willpower- 10 years of fending for himself in the wilderness has granted him an amazing ability to carry on despite the odds. When even his strength failed him, he kept going out of sheer determination and willpower. This has also granted him a resistance to mind-control. His mind is strong, and won't back down easily.

Speed- His worst physical trait. He barely ekes out average speed at best. While he has decent stamina, he won't be winning any running contests.

Reaction Speed- Thanks to having to think quickly on his feet, Gio has a rather respectable reaction speed. While the average person reacts to a visual stimulus in .25 seconds, he takes only about .15 seconds.

ABILITY INFORMATION

Name of Ability: Luck of the Draw

Classs: Magic- Card Magic (Relics and Potions are Magic- Equipment Usage)

Character Theme: Giovanni's first act is to always draw cards. From there, he begins to formulate strategies based on what he has drawn. This can range from an all-out offensive, to a purely defensive set of actions.

Ability Capabilities: With Luck of the Draw, Giovanni is capable of gaining several unique skills from his cards, Relics, and Potions. These abilities can be both beneficial and detrimental to him, or a mix of both.

Qualities of Ability-

• Gio is able to draw cards to use their effects in combat. This drawing action cannot be interrupted (except by card effects), and he doesn't even have to physically hold these cards.
• He can gain or upgrade cards by overcoming particularly tough trials, although he cannot exceed his maximum deck size.
• Deck Size can be increased after extreme hardships. In lieu of gaining new cards, Giovanni can also potentially gain a new Relic, which gives him passive abilities (good or bad).
• If he's lucky, minor trials may net him a Potion for his use.
• He draws 5 cards at a time, unless a card, Relic, or Potion lets him do otherwise
• Cards that he plays or discards go to his Discard Pile.
• When choosing cards, three random cards are selected. He can then choose to select one of them to add to his hand. Or, he can choose to not add any at all.

Strengths of Ability-

• His ability is very versatile, and can be used to great effect when the right card combinations are drawn. Relics can also grant him various boons, and Potions are great for sticky situations.
• He never runs out of cards. When his Draw Pile is empty, all the cards in his Discard Pile are shuffled back into his Draw Pile and cycle through again.
• His Cards can be upgraded. This allows them to either deal more damage, block more damage, grant more of an effect, or even cost less.

Weaknesses of Ability-

• His ability is completely random. He could draw exactly what he needs, or he could draw something he doesn't need.
• Some of his cards have certain keywords that make them situational. For example, Unplayable cards can't be played from his hand at all.
• Cards with the Exhaust keyword disappear for the rest of combat once played. Cards that are Ethereal disappear for the rest of combat if they aren't played.
• He can gain cards and Relics with negative effects. These are permanent, and cannot be removed.

Limitations of Ability

• The number of cards he can play is limited by his maximum Energy. If he runs out of Energy, he cannot play any more cards (except 0-cost cards), and must Discard the rest of his hand.
• What actions he can and cannot do (mostly attacking and blocking) are solely dependent on what cards he plays.

IMAGE AND PUBLIC PERCEPTION

Article- "Sleepy Town Mystery"

As the sun rose this morning on our sleepy town, the police found themselves with a mystery. A man who was identified as the one responsible for a rash of bank robberies was found trussed up like a turkey outside of the police station. After the man confessed his crimes, he was asked how he arrived there.

"All I know is I was getting ready to head out to my next heist. Suddenly, I find myself faced with this weirdo dressed in a green robe and wearing a skull. I drew my knife on him, but he had these card-looking things floating in front of him. He tackles me into my wall. However, when I try to hit him back, it seemed to mostly glance off of him. Next thing I know, I wake up bound in front of the station."

The police ask that anyone who has any information to call their anonymous tip line.

News Story- "Cardsharp Strikes Again!", BBC News

After the commercial, the TV's of several citizens went back to the image of the news anchor. "One of tonight's headlines is yet another incident of a criminal winding up outside a local police department. This time, the incident occurred in Lavenham. As before, the police found said criminal tied up and dumped in front of the station. After confessing, he gave a similar story to most. A mysterious stranger attacked him, tied him up, and left him in front of the station. Scotland Yard has taken a serious interest in the case, and they ask that citizens be on the lookout for any suspicious persons. If you see someone that looks like the Cardsharp, please contact Scotland Yard immediately. Now, for a look at our local forecast..."

Interview with The Silent, Oxford Times

After another successful SYNBAD operation, we managed to catch up with one of the key players. Simply called "The Silent", this New Breed was once known as "Cardsharp", a vigilante who helped reduce crime in small towns. While he seemed hesitant, he did agree to a few questions.

Oxford Times: "So, what is it that caused you to join SYNBAD in the first place?"
Silent: "For me, it's a matter of doing what's right. Even though I had to fend for myself, I still saw that there were those that couldn't protect themselves from the criminals running around. I decided to do something about it.

OT: A rather noble goal, isn't it?
S: Not to me. I'm not perfect. I've done things I regret. Yet, I've been given this... let's call it a 'gift'. I just figured that using it for good would net a better view from those who might otherwise look at me with distrust.

OT: One more question. What are your goals while in SYNBAD?
S: A seemingly simple question that is harder than it sounds. For now, I want to survive while helping those who can't help themselves. Other than that, who knows? The future works in mysterious ways.

After those brief questions, The Silent said he had to go. I don't know about you, but this reporter is curious to see where this particular New Breed winds up.

Theme Song: The Whims of Luck

Current Stats

Current Energy: 3
Deck Size: 12/15

Current Cards

• 5x Strike [1 Energy; Deal damage]
• 5x Defend [1 Energy; Reduce/Nullify damage]
• 2x Blade Dance [1 Energy; Add 2 Shivs to hand]

Misc.
Shiv[0 Energy; Deal Slight Damage, Exhaust]

Relics: 1
Ring of the Snake- Draw 2 additional cards at the start of combat

Potions: 0

[Burning Kitty]

Haven't finished reading it yet, will just had to make one observation.

London Hero Alliance (LHA) is worded wrong imo. It should be called Hero Alliance of London (HAL).

Just my

[AngelofOctober]

Haven't finished reading it yet, will just had to make one observation.

London Hero Alliance (LHA) is worded wrong imo. It should be called Hero Alliance of London (HAL).

Just my

@Burning Kitty

Probably true Hero doesn't even work for this RPs premise much either. Considering my plan was to make this more like a crime solving with supernatural powers and supernatural elements. With action peppered in. Because I get so sick and tired of the traditional hero RP. Beat the badguys up.

I need a name. Suggestions.

[Burning Kitty]

Could go with New Breed Police Department (or whatever they call it in Jolly ole England)

[AngelofOctober]

Could go with New Breed Police Department (or whatever they call it in Jolly ole England)

@Burning Kitty

Maybe.

[AngelofOctober]

@rawkhawk64

So far it is looking good and I like it;

Everybody we have a discord - discord.gg/6UYsBMN

This link shouldn't expire.

[Burning Kitty]

Removed

[AngelofOctober]

@Burning Kitty

Is this the final sheet?

The Assassin Ability seems more Psychic, with the Aura ability of it, than it does Physical. Is there something that makes it more Physical than Psychic?

[Burning Kitty]

It was a toss up between physical & psychic. I went with physical because of the invisibility but that could be psychic. It’s done-ish, little light in places but couldn’t think of anything else.

[AngelofOctober]

It was a toss up between physical & psychic. I went with physical because of the invisibility but that could be psychic. It’s done-ish, little light in places but couldn’t think of anything else.

@Burning Kitty

Okay. Well hit me up when the sheet is done.

[Burning Kitty]

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Okay. Well hit me up when the sheet is done.

@AngelofOctober

I wasn't planning on doing anything else to it unless you wanted me to.

[AngelofOctober]

@Burning Kitty

The personality is a non personality. I don’t know who she is as a person.

A true tactician and firm believer in the teachings of her father. She was also very reverent of her father. She planned her missions carefully and patiently, considering every angle to ensure the best chance of success. If necessary she would adopt jump into the situation without carefully and patiently planning her missions, when this was necessary she survived because she was very good at thinking on her feet.

True tactician, how? What are her father’s teaching? “Perception is reality” “An eye for an eye” Second sentences sounds more like a summary of her actions or what she does. She was very good at thinking on her feet? She isn’t now? This needs another lookout and needs to have more meat on its bones.

Skills: Blending, Eavesdropping, Freerunning, Interrogation, Lockpicking, Social Stealth, Swimming, Whistling

Skills are to be relatively non combat related, if they tie somehow into the mundane parts of their life, then you need to write in how. Like I put Viorel is a tactical thinker, but how it affects him in the mundane parts of his life. These skills need defining, because even they have limitations to their function. This is a list.

Hobbies: cats

What does this even mean? Is she a vet technician when not working for SYNBAD? Is she a cat breeder? Is she a crazy cat lady collector? Does she train cats?

Weapons: Throwing knives, dual gauntlets with built in brass knuckles and hidden blades, kukri

Equipment: smoke bombs, each gauntlet has a rope launcher

Fighting Style: Stealth elimination: the killing of a target without drawing attention of anyone who could pose a threat

Another list, but no explanation in how she uses it. And that fighting style makes absolutely no sense. I noticed the Baritsu. But Stealth Elimination? That is the vaguest explanation of a fighting style. How? What methods and techniques and the limitations? Etc.

Ability Information:
Name of Ability: Assassin’s Dogma

Class: Psychic

Character Theme: Stealth

Ability Capabilities & Qualities:
Assassin’s vision: able to instinctively sense how people and objects relate to them, which manifests as a colored glow, much like an aura. Red indicates enemies or spilled blood, blue indicates allies, white indicates sources of information or hiding spots, and gold indicates targets or objects of interest.

Invisibility

Healing

Strengths of Ability:
Assassin’s vision: grows more powerful with use. She can mark targets and see them through walls.

Invisibility: activated automatically

Healing: activated automatically

Weaknesses & Limitations of Ability:
Assassin’s Vision: it is not infallible, if someone presents as a friend completely hiding their true intentions they will not have a red aura. Cannot run while in use, if they run it turns off.

Invisibility: Only works when crouched and still and takes a few moments, automatically becomes visible when bumped into or when in motion

Healing: it takes time and only when not physically engaged in life or death scenarios.

This whole thing doesn’t relate to a Tier 5. Tier 3 or 4 more than likely and I’d go with Tier 3 to be perfectly honest with you. Invisibility and Healing would need some rework. How much time does Healing take a minute? What level of healing are we talking here? Major or minor wounds? What about severe wounds how would they affect her? You cannot just write down a sentence and expect this to be considered clearly defined for abilities.

Invisibility “works when crouched” sounds a bit silly like a video game and I’ll be honest it can be reworked that she has chameleon like skin and can sort of change her skin to the environment around here, but out in the open she cannot go invisible. I don’t make invisibility interesting because right now, it’s not. The only part of the abilities that I find actually clever and interesting is the Assassin eye and the ability to mark her targets with a psychic aura she can only see. I also said that powers are to be specialized into a branch. So how does Invisibility and Healing relate to the assassin eye?

This is not a world where a New Breed is Superman and gets super strength and Xray vision and frost breath and heat ray vision. Their mutations are specifically specialized in a focus or area that fits their theme.

Biography

Quote: there is no quote

Reputation: non-existent

Theme Song: there is no theme song

I get where you’re trying to go with this. But the biography comes off hokey and nonsensical. Quotes are still required and so is a theme song. I don’t mind the non existent reputation as much, but the other two things are needed.

What this character needs is a breakdown and some flesh to their character. They need to be plausible, breathable and more focused. I’ll be honest with some of the skills you could cut them down to about half. I don’t do power play. I ask for this level of detail so that way if someone explodes someone’s leg off, you can’t say “my leg heals” like magic.

[AngelofOctober]

@Bai Suzhen

I’d really like to throw it out there at I firstly love Morag. I think that it is a unique concept to give this kind of power often given to fat slovenous man to a beautiful attractive woman. Something about that really works for me and really appeals to me and I really want to accept Morag, but we need to work on somethings before I can even do that.

Tier: I'd suggest lowering her down to a Tier 3 due to her ability being so linearly focused with her metabolism.

Appearance, where did height and weight go? I need at least those. Though this section could use some polish, however, I am not going to force it upon you.

Personality:

A cross between playful and professional, ready with a quip but not about to let it get in the way of what needs to be done. Has something of a chip on her shoulder about New Breed discrimination, believing it to be why she was never accepted into the police. She likes to be prepared for situations.

I am going to say that this really undercuts the woman I have seen in the non canon RP. I’d like to see more personality in here because at this point this is really limiting on what the character could be. It’s sparse in details and frankly doesn’t give me a sense of a nuanced individual.

Skills: Training in criminology, forensics, investigation etc.

This is not acceptable in anyway. I don’t do list, especially when they add in etc. You need to define these skills more. How far her training in criminology was, her area of focus, how she performs this, etc. ←-see, etc. doesn’t belong in a skill section. These are ways to flesh out your characters knowledge and even these skills close to her non mundane existence and they don’t seem connected much to her mundane lifestyle. Where’s the “i like to fold laundry”.Once again this is where you can get creative and create the sense of a person.

Fighting Style: LHA-taught mixed martial arts. A simple but effective brawling style for those with enhanced abilities.

Who is teaching this? When? Viorel cannot teach martial arts. Most of the people in SYNBAD use their own set of enhancement of style to correlate with their fighting style. And even this description of the style is barebones and sparse and lacking detail. Hasn’t told us how it works, what are the techniques used, etc.

Strength: Above human - push a parked car or crack concrete with a kick

Endurance: Above human - Heals quickly, can shrug off punches that would KO a human, stamina further enhanced by ability.

Willpower: Good, but within human range.

Speed: Above human - Can sprint on par with a bicycle, and maintain for extended periods

Reaction Speed: Above human - can't catch a bullet, but has a decent chance of dodging if she can see the gun

First off, these belong in the Combat Information section per the sheet format was written. In this case it keeps things organized. The main meat of this, is that this isn’t necessarily good. Once again you don’t add the detail needed. Strength for example, she can push a car or crack concrete with a kick. But you don’t further define this. Probably I should have clarified more these categories though they seemed obvious. Strength isn’t about offense it’s about the physical defense. Endurance has a lot to do with stamina and sustainability as well as healing. But the taking a punch should be moved into Strength. Willpower needs further defining. The whole section needs more than single sentence to convey a range of function.

Character Theme:
Physical Enhancement

Ability Capabilities:
Extreme Metabolism/Internal Alchemy

As I defined in the character sheet, character theme is the gimmick they present. And it is the combination of all combat skills and abilities and how they combine it together that paint the picture of their theme.. So is her ability metabolism or is her ability physical enhancement? Because this is how this world works. Fire is fire, it cannot be water, and cannot make people wet as well as be fire. Ability Capabilities should read more like;

With her extreme metabolism she has an internal alchemy that allows her to do [insert whatever it is]

Qualities of Ability: Morag can metabolise anything. If she eats, breathes, injects or otherwise takes it into her body it is quickly and safely broken down to fuel her and her powers. Some things have more energy than others, so she can still become exhausted by extended activity, but consuming something rich in energy quickly refreshes her. She is capable of breathing underwater, enduring vacuum by snacking, and breaking down large foreign bodies such as bullets to heal without a scar.

Most of what Morag eats goes towards replenishing her energy, letting her go all out for extended periods, which is often misinterpreted as a 'Popeye's spinach' effect.

Morag's mouth is much stronger than the rest of her. She can bite through a reinforced rod she struggled to bend with her hands and comfortably drink acids that would have burned her skin. The explanation for this is currently classified as 'magic' as tests haven't discovered anything abnormal in her saliva etc.

As a side effect, she is immune to poisons, drugs and alcohol, and enjoys the taste of things that would leave a human gagging. She'll drink bleach for fun.

Morag's powers manifested when she was a baby, and would leave bite marks in her crib. Her enhanced physical attributes have also been slowly increasing, from being an exceptionally athletic child through a mildly superhuman tween, to reach her current level. She is still growing at a slow and steady rate, and will likely be exceptionally long-lived, as much as anything about a New Breed power can be predicted.

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Same comment as I made above. I gave you the categories to plug this in, because right now I cannot follow what is a strength or weakness. My categories give me an ability to organize information and categorize it appropriately. With that said, I did state above, I want to know directly how her metabolism affects her to give her physical enhancement? Is it only after she eats things, etc? And if that’s the case then her combat information would need to be reworked. Though I’ll be honest and say without the categories I am having trouble following along.

Before SYNBAD Morag got a minor mention in a local newspaper for having a part-time job at a dump, eating non-recyclable waste. It still shows up if you google her.

Morag's first job with LHA to make the news was a 'silly season' headline in which she foiled a villainous bomber's scheme by eating the explosives. To her dismay, this was all the paper focused on and not her investigative work tracking him down, or even her soundbites about being a part of LHA. To make things worse, it was before she had picked a codename, and the journalists took this as an opportunity to get creative. The name 'Snack Attack' still follows her around, despite being officially 'Foundry'.

One thing Morag brought to LHA when she moved in was her childhood stuffed animal. Kevlar Kevin is a stuffed bear made of kevlar, and stuffed with ball bearings. It was specially ordered by her parents, and was one of the few toys Morag couldn't accidentally destroy or eat with her powers at the time.

From a gossip magazine: Star Spotters! Sharon from Peckham sent in this pic of local heroine Foundry out for a snack attack with a smoking stranger! Is London's caped crimebuster club recruiting, or is this the start of a romantic relationship? (Pictured is Morag at a Priceo Coffee with another Newbreed made of smoke. The article ended up killing their fledgling romance, as the smoke-girl was not prepared for the increased scrutiny)

I’m going to be extremely blunt and straightforward, but this comes off very lazy. You didn’t write any of the actual interviews, which I think they help define the character and give them more personability. And while I asked you to get these clips up, I didn’t necessarily mean rush the Biography. Just meant to get them up.

All in all I see potential in Morag and want her to be the best she can be. I really want her in this RP. Super bad, but these glaring spots I cannot ignore.