Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago
Zeroth Post
Raw
Zeroth

Discord Server Link

The Carnival arrived, much fanfare indeed.

Along with The Circus, in a time of need...

Your days have been dark ones of late. Months and months go by, and things have been stagnant or decaying around you. The factory hums, people collect paychecks, but... there's something in the air about your town. The cracks in the sidewalk loom wider. The mood of your neighbors turns darker. And your baby sister seems to be losing that spark of hope and innocence she always had. But what can you do in this world to change it? You've got bills to pay, a job to get to, and it leaves you too bone tired to do anything else except subsist.

But tonight, something changed. Tonight you left work and headed home like usual, only to see something you had never seen before in this town. The city park had been overtaken by a forest of tents, and uniquely decorated booths only belonging to a carnival, all ringed by a wrought iron fence, its bars warped into the shapes of birds in flight, dragons battling knights, and other fanciful images.

The tents themselves had no uniformity of look. They all came in black, white, emerald, scarlet, purple, and a hundred other hues you've seen but cannot name. Drawn by this strange happening, you approach the ticket booth along with a growing throng of individuals. It is not free to enter, but you are shocked by how cheap it is to buy a ticket. Surely they mean to milk you dry for games of chance or prizes.

But you find none of these. As the sun sets, the circus tents come alive with supernatural, and stupendous acts. You are not charged a dime for any of these, but some ask for strange things- for you to kiss your own palm upon entering, the name of your favorite toy as a child, or the last name of your first love.

A fortune teller knows your name, that your birthday is in two weeks, and advises you to call your mother promptly tomorrow at noon. When you do, you find that you reached her just in time to help her with a medical emergency, saving her life. But that will come later.

The knife thrower volunteers you for her act. Her blades will buzz close to your skin, sheering off your hair. When you step away, it looks professionally cut, and Michael Bellikoff, your crush, compliments you when he sees you later on.

But the strangest thing comes as you're eating caramel popcorn, taking a shortcut between tents. Two performers are whispering around a corner. They plot about hunting a "rooted demon" in the town, how "its' corruption has only begun taking root" and how they will speak to the Circus Masters about "leading a hunt" for the beast. This puzzles you, but you've seen a theater tent earlier. No doubt this part is just an act.
In the morning, the carnival - the circus - is gone. And the shadows cast about town are strangely lighter than before...





In times gone by, battles between creatures of Order and Chaos played out among humans in the every day. The Powers-That-Be have since... mellowed out a bit, and declared a truce. No more cities laid waste by fire and ash, no more beasts running rampant in the streets devouring innocents. And for a while, the truce held.

But the forces of Chaos were never trusted, and rightfully so. They sneak and skulk through the human world, infesting towns and cities with their insidious presence, claiming earth and souls alike for the dark powers. The creatures of Order know that to call them out on this behavior would tear the treaty asunder. Millions would die from the destruction unleashed by the Powers-That-Be going to war on the mortal plane.

And so, they themselves did something remarkable. They cheated.

One of their numbers voluntarily Fell, was cast down to Earth, and forfeited most of it's power. But, in exchange, it was given the strength to empower others in the quest to root out the daemons of chaos to new, mythical heights. These performers form a pact with the Being, called "The Ringmaster", to forfeit their souls in exchange for some measure of power. For 7 years, their lives are forfeited to the Circus. And they may renew the contract for another 7 years after it expires, again and again until they perish in battle or grow tired of the fight.

The Ringmaster and the Circus move from town to town, city to city, as a traveling troupe of a city-sized-circus. To the citizens of its latest stop, it is a place of respite and wonder. A lure to draw in all those cast in the shadows of daemons. And while the people are distracted by the glorious acts before them, teams of mystical performers-turned-warriors have one night to hunt the daemon of the city. To tarry too long in one place is to invite the ire and hunger of the daemon hordes...




1x Like Like
Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by Majoraa
Raw
GM
Avatar of Majoraa

Majoraa yeh

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

(Saved for GM purposes)

Woo!
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Jaredthefox92
Raw
Avatar of Jaredthefox92

Jaredthefox92

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

What type of supernatural species can one be?
Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by Majoraa
Raw
GM
Avatar of Majoraa

Majoraa yeh

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

@Jaredthefox92

One of the performers might be a good demon (key word: might) , but other than that, the characters are only human.

Unless you have an idea you wanna share with me, i might not concider having other supernatural species in the circus.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Jaredthefox92
Raw
Avatar of Jaredthefox92

Jaredthefox92

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@Jaredthefox92

One of the performers might be a good demon (key word: might) , but other than that, the characters are only human.


Okay well then, nevermind.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Sightseer
Raw
Avatar of Sightseer

Sightseer Story Seeker

Member Seen 6 yrs ago

A motley pair:




As I mentioned in the interest check, Perigot is just an NPC I wrote up because it felt fun, but if someone else desires to write up a strongman, I'll happily change his act.
1x Like Like
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Majoraa
Raw
GM
Avatar of Majoraa

Majoraa yeh

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

@Sightseer

Glad to see these two again, they're accepted!
1x Thank Thank
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Jaredthefox92
Raw
Avatar of Jaredthefox92

Jaredthefox92

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@Jaredthefox92

One of the performers might be a good demon (key word: might) , but other than that, the characters are only human.

Unless you have an idea you wanna share with me, i might not concider having other supernatural species in the circus.


Question: Why can't our own characters be supernatural as well? Being a human every time is sort of boring.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Majoraa
Raw
GM
Avatar of Majoraa

Majoraa yeh

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

@Jaredthefox92

I said unless you have an idea you want to share with me. I might concider it.
Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by Jaredthefox92
Raw
Avatar of Jaredthefox92

Jaredthefox92

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@Jaredthefox92

I said unless you have an idea you want to share with me. I might concider it.


I had idea for a vampire, a beastman, and even some Nurgle cutlists. Papa Nurgle love the circus.

Opps, and I actually do have a "good" demonette. She's also great with acrobatics.

Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Majoraa
Raw
GM
Avatar of Majoraa

Majoraa yeh

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

<Snipped quote by Majoras End>

I had idea for a vampire, a beastman, and even some Nurgle cutlists. Papa Nurgle love the circus.


Oh, well, whichever idea you choose, I look forward to seeing the character's cs.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Jaredthefox92
Raw
Avatar of Jaredthefox92

Jaredthefox92

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by Jaredthefox92>

Oh, well, whichever idea you choose, I look forward to seeing the character's cs.


Okay, I could try my "good", (not really all that evil) demon character Lilian. She's great for acrobatic acts and performances that require movement.

Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Majoraa
Raw
GM
Avatar of Majoraa

Majoraa yeh

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

@Jaredthefox92 you do you, dood.

Note and this goes for anyone that any non-human characters have to have a disguise when it comes to performing infront of normal humans.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Jaredthefox92
Raw
Avatar of Jaredthefox92

Jaredthefox92

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@Jaredthefox92 you do you, dood.

Note and this goes for anyone that any non-human characters have to have a disguise when it comes to performing infront of normal humans.


A mask perhaps? Maybe my character can ornate their horns to look as if they're wearing a costume? I've remembered there was once a movie where a real supernatural character tried to hide the fact they were real by dressing up to make themselves appear to be wearing a costume. Perhaps I can go with that idea?
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Majoraa
Raw
GM
Avatar of Majoraa

Majoraa yeh

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

@Jaredthefox92

Okay, don't expect me to try and soften any criticisms I have for Lillian.

1.) You moved her over to the Character tab before I could accept her. You should know to submit her here so I can review her.

2.) There has to be a reason why the ringleader would spare her, but keep her dad locked up in a cursed spellbook.

3.) Connections, Just connections. Not personality. Hell, you could've waited till more characters are accepted to work on it, and i'd be fine with it.

4.) There's no separate section in her CS that says what her powers are. Just the compulsion. That leads to my fifth and main concern.

5.) The audition section of the CS is supposed to be like a sample post, yet you used it to explain her abilites. Ignoring it's original purpose entirely.

The rules say that, the only thing not up for debate is the Audition. If you do not follow the Audition instructions, I will have to reject your CS immediately.

So tl:dr, I can't accept Lillian.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Jaredthefox92
Raw
Avatar of Jaredthefox92

Jaredthefox92

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@Jaredthefox92

Okay, don't expect me to try and soften any criticisms I have for Lillian.

1.) You moved her over to the Character tab before I could accept her. You should know to submit her here so I can review her.

2.) There has to be a reason why the ringleader would spare her, but keep her dad locked up in a cursed spellbook.

3.) Connections, Just connections. Not personality. Hell, you could've waited till more characters are accepted to work on it, and i'd be fine with it.

4.) There's no separate section in her CS that says what her powers are. Just the compulsion. That leads to my fifth and main concern.

5.) The audition section of the CS is supposed to be like a sample post, yet you used it to explain her abilites. Ignoring it's original purpose entirely.

The rules say that, the only thing not up for debate is the Audition. If you do not follow the Audition instructions, I will have to reject your CS immediately.

So tl:dr, I can't accept Lillian.


Well, I tried. Be stubborn then. *Shrugs*
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Temporary
Raw
coGM
Avatar of Temporary

Temporary You See Nothing

Member Seen 17 days ago

@Jaredthefox92 You obviously didn't try. If that's what you call trying, your brand of it is some half arsed shit. Not only do you blatantly ignore both common courtesy of the site and the very rules of the roleplay, but you then have the audacity to blame the GM for your God awful character sheet. Is that what we call trying these days? Your sheet lacks the quality expected for the Casual section, and your attitude clearly isn't one suited to this level. Why don't you go and try the Free section, I'm sure they'll welcome you with open arms. That's where your trying will get you. Cause it certainly won't get you anywhere here.
3x Laugh Laugh
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Jaredthefox92
Raw
Avatar of Jaredthefox92

Jaredthefox92

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@Jaredthefox92 You obviously didn't try. If that's what you call trying, your brand of it is some half arsed shit. Not only do you blatantly ignore both common courtesy of the site and the very rules of the roleplay, but you then have the audacity to blame the GM for your God awful character sheet. Is that what we call trying these days? Your sheet lacks the quality expected for the Casual section, and your attitude clearly isn't one suited to this level. Why don't you go and try the Free section, I'm sure they'll welcome you with open arms. That's where your trying will get you. Cause it certainly won't get you anywhere here.


Ah, the whiteknight brigade comes forth for damage control.

Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Temporary
Raw
coGM
Avatar of Temporary

Temporary You See Nothing

Member Seen 17 days ago

@Jaredthefox92 I'm not going to argue with you. If you can't own up to the poor quality you put out and instead blame others, you clearly aren't worth my time, nor the time of any other player here. If calling someone a "White knight" is the greatest reply you can muster, which considering the quality of your writing isn't hard to imagine, then quite frankly your own attitude speaks volumes. Having standards for characters is common. You should know that, as a Veteran, right?

In short, if all you can do is throw out petty insults without attempting to correct your work, you might as well leave. Every GM puts hard work into making a roleplay enjoyable. It's not a case of defending just one person, it is defending the standards of writing as a whole - standards which I don't think you can even comprehend, let alone meet.

Feel free to leave. If you want to continue making a big deal of things, the RPG has a ban feature on threads that will be used if necessary.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Jaredthefox92
Raw
Avatar of Jaredthefox92

Jaredthefox92

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@Jaredthefox92 I'm not going to argue with you. If you can't own up to the poor quality you put out and instead blame others, you clearly aren't worth my time, nor the time of any other player here. If calling someone a "White knight" is the greatest reply you can muster, which considering the quality of your writing isn't hard to imagine, then quite frankly your own attitude speaks volumes. Having standards for characters is common. You should know that, as a Veteran, right?

In short, if all you can do is throw out petty insults without attempting to correct your work, you might as well leave. Every GM puts hard work into making a roleplay enjoyable. It's not a case of defending just one person, it is defending the standards of writing as a whole - standards which I don't think you can even comprehend, let alone meet.

Feel free to leave. If you want to continue making a big deal of things, the RPG has a ban feature on threads that will be used if necessary.


Nah, I'm good. You don't know me, I need not worry about the words of a complete stranger. I'm done here anyways, have fun with your echo chamber.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by mercenarius
Raw
Avatar of mercenarius

mercenarius Good Bot

Member Seen 6 mos ago

Just posting to confirm my interest in this, working on my CS now although it's going to be a little slow-going since I'm out of state for a family thing.

I'm thinking some kind of fortune teller, with maybe some light time-manipulation powers if that's okay

Edit: damn autocorrect
1x Like Like
↑ Top
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet