@Boerd - Since LeeRoy went to sleep; For now, sort out the formatting. Make the ship itself a clear part of the profile, as right now it´s hard to tell what´s part of the ship, and what is not. I don´t know if you´ve described the physical appearance of the ship (which sounds more like a fighter, if I understood things correctly), but if you haven´t, please do. Remember to note where each weapon and utility is located on the craft, as that will without doubt come into play if the ship is used in a fight. Also, how fast can it fly? Does it maneouver in the same way as other aerial/space crafts? More detail on most of the ships weapons would be prefered as well, as most of them does not mention the destructive capacity they carry. Describe the extent of which they affect their potential targets.
The character himself seems fine, as long as you note him as a low-tier. You might consider adding a bit more detail on his physical appearance; What colour is his uniform? What does it look like? Does he have any visible weapons or armor on him? Etc.