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Welcome to our organization gentlemen, and ladies. This is a place where we of more...variable mindsets come together to work for ourselves rather than the general public. The Heroes of this world? Corrupt. The goody two shoes? They don't get the big picture. That's why I've come to the conclusion that all of us don't need to really play this game. We can run this world how we want because if anyone should be the big shots...its us. Japan especially is the place where heroes are common. That's why we're starting here. If we break down the walls here then every other nation will know that we're the big guys on top. I've recruited you for this express purpose of allowing me to reach the top. Once I do you all will get your reward. I promise you as a villain of my word. Some of us still believe in professional pride after all...

With that being said here's the deal you all will do what villains do...burn, pillage, and destroy when I say so, or when you feel it might benefit us. Hell do if it might benefit you in the short run. Just remember...you're a part of a family now...a big family...a strong family. And family don't like rats. Rats ruin a good household after all. We all know what happens to rats right? I hope so. Now that is out of the way I want you to understand that people around you, the normal everyday people, are expendable trash. Don't worry about them unless the incident will bring hell down on us. Keep your eyes out for heroes...and once again Welcome to our family tree kids....

"Yours truly, The Blackened."

That was the letter given to every member of the criminal organization run by the dark man who signed that very letter. A personal welcome to a union of villains set in Musutafu, Japan. A group that is set out to take over the world...or simply make the life of heroes, and peoples everyday life a living hell. What's the point in making a life when it benefits others more than you? Ambition is what separates sheep from the everyday people. When we reach our goals we will either be in the darkest of hells, or the brightest of heavens we will rule, or we will fail. Let's not make it the latter...

This specific group is situated out of a bar, also known as The Stray Sheep, in the back alleys of the city. Run by an villain renown as 'Shade Walker', the famous ex-hero 'Captain East' who turned to crime after a violent mishap that involved his wife, and best friends which left them dead by his own hands; the group is setting out to make their world there's and though they aren't a prime group just yet they will be one day...
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I don't know if i am allowed back into the role play, But i would like to give this one another shot.
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If you want to give it another shot go ahead. Arguably you were the most chill out of the last group.
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@vancexentan

Okay thanks here is my character sheet form last time.



I will edit it to match the appropriate character sheet either today or tomorrow. Sorry, Thank you and i make a habit of not pissing off GMs.

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Just try not to do what happened last time not that it was your fault what happened entirely i was partially to blame as well. I'll wait for adjustments you want to make b4 grading it I'd personally make a fresh character but if you want to reuse him go ahead.
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Of course, It will be the last time i take suggestions from other players. Naoto will be a good boy.
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So, I made these. The Brain is intended to never go on the field and instead do her research while The Brawn is intended to be the field agent extension of her and an *advertisement*. I just kind of went with this as it was the first idea to pop in my head for this RP. Any and all problems you have can be discussed / fixed.
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@ShardSo to make this clear his power can be used a medium range, and acts like a pseudo more biological burn like effect where it just rots away things? Also when it comes to necromancy I believe due to the nature of his quirk physical based powers of people with quirks that they should be lessened, and if there should be a cut off point where his ability to use his necromantic powers should fail to work on a dead body.

@AmpharosBoyThe brains is fine but I'm not sure how they'd factor into Shade Walker's group. They're meant to be an active agent cell meant to go on missions actively to spread the organization's influence. There are other groups like the aforementioned White Skull who specializes in certain fields like hers. Unless you purely intend for her to be some sort of agent, or really side character I'm not sure how to properly implement her. And Keiko's ability is fine up until the point where they start to fail to distinguish friend from foe. That leads into a huge liability aspect to the character. Shade Walker would have had to accept the fact that he is allowing a possible actually feral villain into his active strike force team.

@Eviledd1984 Alright well just inform me if you intend on keeping him as is, or editing him. I'm still of the opinion he isn't exactly strike team material but his quirk has its uses. Not everyone has to be of blunt force, or elemental power houses.
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@AmpharosBoyThe brains is fine but I'm not sure how they'd factor into Shade Walker's group. They're meant to be an active agent cell meant to go on missions actively to spread the organization's influence. There are other groups like the aforementioned White Skull who specializes in certain fields like hers. Unless you purely intend for her to be some sort of agent, or really side character I'm not sure how to properly implement her. And Keiko's ability is fine up until the point where they start to fail to distinguish friend from foe. That leads into a huge liability aspect to the character. Shade Walker would have had to accept the fact that he is allowing a possible actually feral villain into his active strike force team.


Brains is more of a side character (I think I had this mentioned in the hider in the character sheet PM I made but I seemingly removed it in the transfer.) She probably won't mean much to the main group but she does very often monitor Keiko's activities, especially in the field. Her inclusion in your plans is definitely not necessary, unless there's really something relevant we think of down the line. Keiko is the one really involved, though he follows a lot of input that Chikako herself provides.

One theme I wanted for Keiko was to regain his independence, which can be a natural progression I can make over time as the RP continues. Chikako isn't important to anyone else in the immediate area, honestly. Unless someone has a problem with Keiko himself, as in some eyes he's probably more or less a tool more than a person.

As for for the Quirk problem, I agree with this. The entirety of both of these are first drafts, so changes can definitely be made. I will remove full-on blind bloodlust and simply keep the enhancement and infection abilities with perhaps just increased aggression towards intended targets. Would this suffice?

I'll be gone for awhile today, but I will make edits sometime today for sure.
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@AmpharosBoyAlright feel free to tell me when you're done. As for the quirk edit that sounds fair to me.
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That is pretty accurate yes, and that's fine.
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@vancexentan

Most likely I will edit my sheet today and I will let you know when I'm finished with that, Like I said in the last forum that Naoto's quirk would be mostly used for stealth and not direct force.
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I can work on a CS tonight possibly. The quirk I'm planning is to induce bad luck? Causing machines to fail, structures to weaken, chance to play out poorly, that sort of thing. To rein it in I figure it'll work on a mostly line of sight basis, and has no direct effect on living things.
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In the hider below, changes are marked with bold within the quotes.

I think this solves the Quirk problem good enough.






EDIT: Accidentally left a very minor personality edit out. Fixed now tho.
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So I decided to make a new character, which I will have done hopefully today or tomorrow.
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@Dead CruiserAlright fair game I suppose I'm not sure if a quirk like that would work naturally in a world like my hero but its literally going to be based off a coin flip and more or less reliant on me as a gm. If you're fine with that go ahead.

@Eviledd1984Alright tell me if you need help or whatever. I had nothing against Naoto its just that I found him to be lacking in a rp of this setting.
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@AmpharosBoyAlright one more edit I'd like to make after thinking about it in case it wasn't already there and I'm missing some context in my stressed state atm is that the effects shouldn't be instantaneous it is a virus, albeit a strong one but a hero just turning feral seems to be a bit much.

@ShardAlright well could you add what the level of decay he can bring back is in? I think I can accept it after that.
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@vancexentan I would rather not have my quirk be made totally unreliable if no one else is going to be gimped the same way. If you'd like I can try and explain it in more detail as to how it works, before trying to come up with something different.
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Its whole mechanic is based on bad luck, or rather inducing it. That's a rather black cat coin toss way of doing things. I'd recommend explaining it in better details, or just have it so that you can disrupt mechanic things with electronic signals. Because that is a tangible thing I can play with.
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