It's fine, so long as it's updated faster than once or twice a week. Since I'm rather really attached my other character, I'm gonna base my new one on him.
Name: Ayame "Aya" Denzan
Code Name: Discharge
Age: 23
Gender: Female
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Powers: Classed as an Alpha 3 mutant, Aya Denzan possesses electrokinesis, or the ability to generate, manipulate, or become electricity. This can be as arcs, blasts, pulses, waves, beams, balls, etc. Note: Aya's electrical attacks range in power from being flicked to punching fist-sized craters in solid concrete, however the voltage never raises higher than very nasty static shocks (not enough to stun like a tazer, but enough to leave a burn). This is a subconscious block. Without it even she isn't sure what would happen. But she can taze your ass by making skin-to-skin contact, dropping the target like a twitchy sack of potatoes, and in extreme cases can act as a defibrillator. As a side-effect, her relfexes are slightly higher than normal, and she heals faster. Not Wolverine fast, but minor wounds are gone in about an hour and normally fatal injuries tend to just leave scars. Aya can hover by emitting small pulses under her body, but she can't move from that position very much unless she turns into electricity and "teleports" (she's just moving very fast) up to 30 feet in a straight line as long as she can see her destination (don't wanna run into a wall). However, she can't change her flight path unless she turns solid first. So semi-flight is possible, but difficult to control. However she CAN travel through things that have a current (like power lines) al a Electro. Also due to her ability of shifting into electricity and back to solid, her mind is in constant flux, giving her some degree of protection against psionic attacks, but not enough to heavily rely on. Just enough to prevent surprise attacks. Lastly, Aya can absorb electricty from outside sources to re-charge her energy reserves.
Weaknesses - Water. Just straight up water. Shorts out her powers and in large quantities (lakes, oceans, rivers) can turn them against herself, possibly even killing her. Oddly enough, however rain is just fine. She sparks a little, but it's nothing lethal or even dangerous. It just tingles a bit. Anything that won't conduct electricity is capable of knocking her out of her electric state.
Personality: Remember that bit about her mind being in constant flux? Yeah, that has a side effect. She's a little... unstable... kinda... cuckoo. Yeah, cuckoo. She's ridiculously shy around strangers, but once she opens up...? She's constantly happy (even when she shouldn't be) and can get hyper-active when she's excited. But with a little provocation she can switch to downright furious. Or even worse. Emotionless. At this point, just run. To find out what she's really feeling, look into her eyes. They always speak the truth. Oh, yeah, she's also a lesbian with a massive crush on X-23.
History: Aya's earliest memories of her past start from when she 15. She woke up in a hospital, and in her panic used her mutant powers to escape through a nearby current, not that she had any clue what the hell was going on. With no clue where she was or even who she was, aside from her name, she ran. Eventually she figured out she was in Columbus, Ohio. Doing whatever was required to survive she wandered the city, quickly finding out she was some kinda monster and that monsters were to be feared. She fled the city, and while hitchhiking on the freeway, she was kidnapped. She was sold off at an auction to some... sleazy men. Forced into making... "special" videos, as well as mutant snuff films, Aya quickly learned how to use her powers in vicious ways. Anything to stay alive. But after being forced to kill a fellow... well, slave, really, who happened to be her girlfriend, Aya lost control of her powers and decimated the facility she was trapped in, seemingly killing everyone. She was horrified and ran as far as she could, ending up in New York. When confronted by some muggers, she discovered that her powers were no where near the levels they once were. But her ecstasy didn't last as she was arrested by nearby cops who saw her using her power. But, she didn't have to sit long. Not long after her arrest, a man came to visit her, named Charles. He invited her to come to his school for mutants, where she would be safe and could learn to use her powers for the greater good. At first suspicious, Charles proved he was a mutant as well, and asked her to just try it. She didn't have to stay if she didn't want to. Able to tell he was sincere, Aya agreed, deciding to take a chance. And it was the best decision of her life. Not only did she feel at home for the first time in 7 years, but she received grief consoling from Professor Xavier to help her finally come to terms with all the shit she had been through. And... she met the most GORGEOUS woman she'd ever seen in her life. Not that Aya stood a chance, but hot damn! Laura was beautiful! And strong. And sexy. And the attitude... it's a bit of a turn-on.
Howzat? Anything I need to change? Need more weakness?