[OOC] Slay the Spire

[Dark Cloud]

--PERCIVAL, THE DUNGEONEER--

Character Archetype
Rogue

Personality
Percival has an unquenchable thirst for adventure that can only be sated by wandering the labyrinthian network of winding halls and often random layout of the Spire. After many failed attempts to ascend the spire alone he began to fancy himself an expert when it came to exploring the lowest reaches of the Spire and so he proclaimed himself the Dungeoneer.

Percival hopes to one day explore the furthest reach of the Spire in order to someday map out its layout to help others in their endeavor to escape the Spire although he is doomed to fail.
Blessings
Percival isn't blessed by mystical or magical means, but he is quite the charmer.
Curses
Dangerous Dalliance: The Dungeoneer often finds himself getting the short end of the stick when it comes to chance, as fate usually chooses him to bear the worst of things like spells, traps or angry packs of gremlins.

Relics
Enchanted Map: The Dungeoneer own's an old scroll of blank parchment that fills it's blank space with the locations that he has visited as he traverses the Spire as well as hidden areas that would not normally be known by other climbers, but it becomes blank upon resurrection in the inevitable event that it's owner perishs.
Gold
--50--

@Whoami Done finally.

[Whoami]

Things will be of the doing tonight.

EDIT: Super enjoying the characters as they come in! I'll be giving my points out as well tonight!

[Whoami]

Alright, time to get something rolling here! Everyone's characters are one the right track! I don't have anything that is going to majorly change the characters, just some smaller points to bring things in line. Some of this stuff might be a bit nitpicky. At this moment, nobody who's posted a CS is denied! So that's great!

@Dog

Magharmaw

The ogre was a huge a blindside after hearing mumbles of dwarves and blacksmiths. Seeing a hider with the title 'The Great Devourer' had be scratching my head. So when I was graced with the picture of a terrifying ogre threating to bite my face off, I definitely had a 'O.o' look on my face. I have one very superficial point to make, mainly because my OCD will nag at me. Those double-dashes (--) are meant to be deleted, as they're just there to highlight what is supposed to be replaced with your own text. No need to have 'em around.

On another note, your character sheet hasn't highlighted the current gold he is starting with. It seems rather trivial, but I have plans and machinations with gold... So being with that range of 50 - 150, please choose how much gold your glutton is carrying in his... er... flesh pockets? Anyways, once those two small things are rectified, I don't have any issues approving your character.

@Tellukka

Vittore

Not much to gripe about with Vittore. He's a very cut and dry fighter. If you're content with him, so am I. But I would encourage and say that you can feel free to be a bit more wild with him! I'm not sure how much his burning tattoo is going to play into his character development, so maybe that's where the wildness is going to come from. Unless you want to add more to Vittore, I have no problem APPROVING him. If he's where you want him, then feel free to add him to the Character's tab. I low key love the idea of 'Just a dude who doesn't want to be there'.

@DracoLunaris

Luna

Alright, Luna is awesome. With the pendant, I'm not entirely on the same page as to how exactly it helps Luna. The way I'm interpreting it, it seems like a tool used for some foresight? I imagine I will have a lot of agency on how relic behaves. I'm imagining it being used at crossroads and diverging paths where, if one path is looked down, Luna is shown very quick flashes of her own future down that path, along with all the physical sensations of what she would feel, hear, smell, and taste, down that path. Perhaps the other climbers are completely absent in the images even if they are there, so she can't divine how the fate of her fellow climbers will unfold. Perhaps the pendant will always show flashes of what must be done, or what will happen, in order for the BEST outcome to be achieved down that path.

@Dark Cloud

Percival

Dat name and title tho... Very fresh. Looks great. I'm curious how his curse functions exactly? Mainly just because I'm curious if it is something I'll need to be considering as I move the plot along. I mainly am tentative on the curse because that has the potential to lead to a lot of action and not a lot of room for slower character driven moments. Just shed some light on that, or maybe tone it down so it isn't WHEREVER he goes. Perhaps it can be spun in such a way where if there is an event that would pick a character randomly, Percival is always the one to get the shitty end of the stick? Just suggestions. Considering that the Spire is extremely dangerous to every climber, the fact that danger is always on the heels Percival specifically is kind of moot.

As for the map, I already really like it. I would add that perhaps it shows hidden paths that would not normally be known to climbers.

So with those aside, Percival is another character I like and will gladly approve once the curse mumbo-jumbo is sorted out!

[Lucky]

@Whoami How you holdin' up?

[Whoami]

@Lucky Straight vibin'

EDIT: ... In other words, I'm feeling fine lol

[Lucky]

Good! lol

I've always been meaning to ask: is it pronounced Who-Amee or Whoa-Me?

[Whoami]

I've always been meaning to ask: is it pronounced Who-Amee or Whoa-Me?

@Lucky

WHAT IF- and here me out for a moment... WHAT IF I told you, that it is simply 'Who Am I'?

[Lucky]

Eh, lowercase i tells me that your theory isn't right. Clearly it's one of the two choices I presented.

[Dog]

Insert Text Here

@Whoami

It has been done.

[Dark Cloud]

<Snipped quote by Lucky>

WHAT IF- and here me out for a moment... WHAT IF I told you, that it is simply 'Who Am I'?

@Whoami

HOLYSHITBALLSREALLY? jk

[DracoLunaris]

Alright, Luna is awesome. With the pendant, I'm not entirely on the same page as to how exactly it helps Luna. The way I'm interpreting it, it seems like a tool used for some foresight? I imagine I will have a lot of agency on how relic behaves. I'm imagining it being used at crossroads and diverging paths where, if one path is looked down, Luna is shown very quick flashes of her own future down that path, along with all the physical sensations of what she would feel, hear, smell, and taste, down that path. Perhaps the other climbers are completely absent in the images even if they are there, so she can't divine how the fate of her fellow climbers will unfold. Perhaps the pendant will always show flashes of what must be done, or what will happen, in order for the BEST outcome to be achieved down that path.

@Whoami

Yeah basically anything talking about gods or other worldly powers mechanically means you. Though I reserve the right to fuck Luna over for dramatic "oh no, a power stopped working in the middle of a fight, oh god why, what have I done to displease you?" purposes or just as narrative flavor added on top of however we're going to be doing the new blessings/remembering past skills thing.

As for the pendant, I was mainly thinking it would be a glowing compass kind of thing that would point to which tunnel at the crossroad she should go to go up, but all it would be doing is verifying that it wasn't a dead end and not that it was in any way the best. Your idea of confusing and cryptic sensation overload precognition visions is way better IMO, though it does sound like more of a workload on your end. If your down to do that I am completely onboard as well.

[LSJ Rose]

Alright, time to get something rolling here! Everyone's characters are one the right track! I don't have anything that is going to majorly change the characters, just some smaller points to bring things in line. Some of this stuff might be a bit nitpicky. At this moment, nobody who's posted a CS is denied! So that's great!

@Dog

Magharmaw

The ogre was a huge a blindside after hearing mumbles of dwarves and blacksmiths. Seeing a hider with the title 'The Great Devourer' had be scratching my head. So when I was graced with the picture of a terrifying ogre threating to bite my face off, I definitely had a 'O.o' look on my face. I have one very superficial point to make, mainly because my OCD will nag at me. Those double-dashes (--) are meant to be deleted, as they're just there to highlight what is supposed to be replaced with your own text. No need to have 'em around.

On another note, your character sheet hasn't highlighted the current gold he is starting with. It seems rather trivial, but I have plans and machinations with gold... So being with that range of 50 - 150, please choose how much gold your glutton is carrying in his... er... flesh pockets? Anyways, once those two small things are rectified, I don't have any issues approving your character.

@Tellukka

Vittore

Not much to gripe about with Vittore. He's a very cut and dry fighter. If you're content with him, so am I. But I would encourage and say that you can feel free to be a bit more wild with him! I'm not sure how much his burning tattoo is going to play into his character development, so maybe that's where the wildness is going to come from. Unless you want to add more to Vittore, I have no problem APPROVING him. If he's where you want him, then feel free to add him to the Character's tab. I low key love the idea of 'Just a dude who doesn't want to be there'.

@DracoLunaris

Luna

Alright, Luna is awesome. With the pendant, I'm not entirely on the same page as to how exactly it helps Luna. The way I'm interpreting it, it seems like a tool used for some foresight? I imagine I will have a lot of agency on how relic behaves. I'm imagining it being used at crossroads and diverging paths where, if one path is looked down, Luna is shown very quick flashes of her own future down that path, along with all the physical sensations of what she would feel, hear, smell, and taste, down that path. Perhaps the other climbers are completely absent in the images even if they are there, so she can't divine how the fate of her fellow climbers will unfold. Perhaps the pendant will always show flashes of what must be done, or what will happen, in order for the BEST outcome to be achieved down that path.

@Dark Cloud

Percival

Dat name and title tho... Very fresh. Looks great. I'm curious how his curse functions exactly? Mainly just because I'm curious if it is something I'll need to be considering as I move the plot along. I mainly am tentative on the curse because that has the potential to lead to a lot of action and not a lot of room for slower character driven moments. Just shed some light on that, or maybe tone it down so it isn't WHEREVER he goes. Perhaps it can be spun in such a way where if there is an event that would pick a character randomly, Percival is always the one to get the shitty end of the stick? Just suggestions. Considering that the Spire is extremely dangerous to every climber, the fact that danger is always on the heels Percival specifically is kind of moot.

As for the map, I already really like it. I would add that perhaps it shows hidden paths that would not normally be known to climbers.

So with those aside, Percival is another character I like and will gladly approve once the curse mumbo-jumbo is sorted out!

@Whoami

does that mean mine is okay?

[Whoami]

@LSJ Rose I'm having a weird sensation. I could have sworn I talked about your character in this! Strange that I guess I didn't? I'm sorry! I'll get to doing a review on your character a bit later today! Same shtick though! I like her, just a few things to mention!

[Dark Cloud]

@Whoami I fixed my curse.

[LSJ Rose]

@LSJ Rose I'm having a weird sensation. I could have sworn I talked about your character in this! Strange that I guess I didn't? I'm sorry! I'll get to doing a review on your character a bit later today! Same shtick though! I like her, just a few things to mention!

@Whoami

it's alright!

[Whoami]

@LSJ Rose

Sarina

Alright! So Lucky pretty much already covered a lot of what I would have originally said. So I'd say definitely refer to his points! If you're happy with the changes made, then I'm comfortable APPROVING Sarina! You can move her to the characters tab when you see fit!

@Dark Cloud
And with those edits made, I also APPROVE Percival!

[LSJ Rose]

@LSJ Rose

Sarina

Alright! So Lucky pretty much already covered a lot of what I would have originally said. So I'd say definitely refer to his points! If you're happy with the changes made, then I'm comfortable APPROVING Sarina! You can move her to the characters tab when you see fit!

@Whoami

Thanks! :D

[Dark Cloud]

@Whoami Can you do me a solid and copy/paste him in the CS section. I can't do that.

[Dog]

What about my app?

[Whoami]

What about my app?

@Dog

It's there