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Hello friends! I'm making a thread here to see if anyone would be interested in reading the visual novel I've been working on for the last year. It's nearly finished and in desperate need of avid readers and creative minds!

Welcome to the proper thread for Aquae ~Crystal Clear Waters~
a fantasy/adventure visual novel.



Completely free to play as was the original though now with a much more vivid and expanded world to explore. Still mostly kinetic though now with the ability to change certain course of events through the player's actions and choices. While romance isn't a main focus, it is now an option.

The original story was broken up into three separate arcs.

Presently, Arc 1 is sitting at 18.5k words and 1.5-2hrs read time.
zweit.itch.io/aquae-crystal-clear-waters

The entire script itself is clocking in at 56,761 words and counting.

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The winds of fate rush in with the summer breeze.Travelers the land over come to take part in the annual festival and celebrate the lasting time of peace after previous years of war and strife. As paper lanterns begin decorating the coastlines above, there surges a troubling shift of tides through the underwater haven of the nerida below.

Join Kaizarel - the wayward prince of the isles - as he embarks on an exciting night at the summer festival. Where he meets friends both new and old, including a mysterious stranger with rare purple eyes just like his own. In his attempts to discover the connection he and this strange visitor have in common, Kaizarel instead finds himself embroiled in both the politics of land and sea, as well as unearthing family secrets long buried beneath the sands.

Will history be re-written, as waves upon the sand?
Or will bloodshed remain?















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Updating with screenshots and a link to the first arc!
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Polishing things up in Arc 2, so still looking for some enterprising readers to give me feedback and critique for Arc 1!
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I've had this bookmarked for a good while now! How/where can I play?
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I've had this bookmarked for a good while now! How/where can I play?


Oh nice! :D
So you can find downloads for the first Arc on my itch.io page --> zweit.itch.io/aquae-crystal-clear-waters <-- Here! There are downloads for Windows, Linux, and Android.

I'm excited to see some interest on here! I'll definitely be eager to hear what you think.
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Just on the surface, the art is really pretty! Who drew it?
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Just on the surface, the art is really pretty! Who drew it?


You're looking at 'em ;D

I was trying to find a happy medium between my personal style and the more anime one me and my friends had when we originally made the story back in high school. I'm gonna refine it a little as I work, but I'm happy with how the style came out for the most part.

I've done everything in the project except for the music and background images. Coding, art, graphics, script. All yours truly.
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Nice.
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Still lookin for some readers to give me feedback and critique.
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Trying to find motivation to get back to work on this monster of ambition. If there exists any potential readers, I'm always happy to hear opinions and feedback.
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I noticed there was a good handful of downloads from folks on this forum! If any of you readers have feedback, comments, or critique of your experience I would love to hear it!
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