Alarieth said
Uhm, so the collision in total involved three people?
Umm, I pm'd theNewGirl and she said she lost interest due to not liking some characters or something and she's dropping.
Weird.
Alarieth said
Uhm, so the collision in total involved three people?
nrtashi said
Umm, I pm'd theNewGirl and she said she lost interest due to not liking some characters or something and she's dropping. Weird.
ERode said
Superpowers...that are just imagined. XD
TheNewGirl said
Not exactly weird. I told you why.
nrtashi said
Yeah, but I didn't want to fingerpoint cause I don't like drama. Not my place to do that, either.
ERode said
Hm, let's see then...His dreams are lucid, so he basically just makes up a story while he sleeps. Narcoleptics go into REM (dream sleep) really quickly, so that's basically how the 'other reality' works for him.That whole bit about him 'running through the past' was basically just him turning his wristwatch five minutes into the past. So he can pretend that he went five minutes into the past. He reset his watch to 'normal' time afterwards though, because he still wants his watch to be accurate with 'real time'.The waltz thing was him walking through the gaps in the crowd of students in the hallway.The black sparkles was me having fun with the 'anime/VN/manga' setting of the RP.But yeah. I'm writing in third person, but through the point of view of only one person. Honestly, the only part that may have been confusing would be the whole bit about the Talisman of Aegis. The dream sequence was italicized, and his ramblings about science was just the ramblings about science. Not to mention that Kenji going crazy is 'observed' through the eyes of Hisao. Pretty sure it would be more believable if it was from Kenji's delusional point of view, with a healthy dose of suspension of belief.