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Name: Ratnika

Species: Honedge

Gender: Male

Level: 7

Moves:
-Tackle
-Fury Cutter
-Counter
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Bio: Ratnika began his life when a sword was forged in a forgery on the outskirts of town, by an Escavalier blacksmith named Kekune, who had a Karrablast son named Kokono. Kekune forged to sword to sell, but then a spirit came an decided to inhabit the sword, turning it into a Honedge. kekune didn't want to sell a living Pokemon, so he decided to ask the new Honedge if he would like to be Kokono's friend. The Honedge thought for a bit, and decided that when Kokono's birthday showed up, he'd let Kekune present him as a friend.

The family was able to to buy all these things with the money Kekune made by selling the armor and weapons he forged. The son would usually help out in the forgery by handing the metals and tools to Kekune when he asked for them. They had good business, and the shop made a good income

Days passed, and it was Kokono's birthday. Kekune presented the sword, and Kokono loved it. He picked it up and thanked Kekune, and named it Ratnika. Then he took it outside, and began swinging it around and chopping at grass. He wasn't able to swing it very good, though, as it was a bit too heavy. Kokono began practicing, until he was able to swing the sword freely and smoothly. He was even able to defeat wild pokemon in battle, after awhile. After many days of training, Ratnika was fighting a wild Pokemon, when he suddenly countered the opponent's attack and defeated it. The Spirit that lived inside the sword and made it a Honedge had pulled out the warrior inside of him, and made it so that the sword was now able to use fighting-type moves.

Months passed. The forgery had to close up, because recently, their business was falling very, very quickly, and they couldn't afford to keep it open. So they packed their bags and moved, but Ratnika decided to stay in the city, and so he said his goodbyes to Kekune Kokuno, and they left. After they left, he walked into the city. In the city, he saw notice boards, with advertisements for 'Guilds'. He decided to try and find and join one, as he enjoyed the experience of having a friend.

Appearance: The blue tapestry on the end of the hilt is yellow, instead of blue.

Differences: Ratnika can learn Fighting-type moves.

Notes: When I was writing the Bio, my brain blanked out a few times, please point out what I did wrong, when you read this
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I dunno... I mean, that would mean that, for some weird reason, certain pokemon are considered objects to buy and sell, despite the fact that they're still fully sentient... that kinda borders on slavery. I'd like you to redo the app, please.
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Not only that, but how'd you bring them alive? I mean, there's a plot reason to why Milloon's around, and that's because [DATA EXPUNGED] and therefore you cannot use it for yourself. Even unintentionally.

Also, it ain't a feather... it's a cloth. A tapestry to be specific.

Anyway, Scraggy, I'll get on that.
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Thank you.
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Well, fixed the problem about buying and selling Honedges, guess I'll get to work on the other problem

edited it again
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So wait... how does the child forget about Ratnika so easily? Emotions alone are not enough to destroy memories.

I'm also considerably worried about this: "Differences: Ratnika has an extremely higher attack than a normal Pokemon, but extremely lower defence." He's basically a glass cannon. Or rather, a glass sword.

The spirit bit is also a bit dodgy, although I'll accept that bit for now. Mainly because Lugia hasn't objected yet, so...
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The part about the spirit is because that's how Honedges are "born", a dead spirit would posses the sword, and it would become a Honedge.
Guess I'll get to work on the other issues
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Don't bother explaining that, I've already accepted that bit. Barely.

Now go work on the other issues.
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Ok, I edited it the issues
But the issue with the reason for why he had to stay by still be little bad, and if it isn't good enough, I'll get back to work on it
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Now that I find acceptable.

Despite this, I'm awaiting Lugia.
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It's never really explained why he can use fighting-type moves... mind explaining that in your character's bio?
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While we're waitin'... Lugia, you gotta go check the PM.
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Why... why are there always 1 idiot that wants to freaken make everyone mad.
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...usage of the word 'parsley' is COMPLETELY inappropriate in such a post. Food is not to appear in psychopathic, masochistic, sexually-influenced posts (unless the influence in question is food, which is still inappropriate).

Anyway, I'm gonna see what I can do.
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Do I even want to know what that guy posted?
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Ridlins said
Do I even want to know what that guy posted?


I would not recommend it. Something something corpses and something something dog skin and parsley.
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Didn't think so.
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It's always such a shame when someone just posts IC without having an app...
even more so when the post includes things that shouldn't be included. Seems that I haven't missed out on anything I wouldn't want to miss.
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Edited app again
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