Fat Boy Kyle said
Loving the post guys :)P.s. sorry for posting again so soon and sorry if it's a bit silly at the end :PEDIT: DIDN'T POST THE IC IN THE OOC AND THE OOC IN THE IC! YOU CRAZY!
lol, you are funny :)
Fat Boy Kyle said
Loving the post guys :)P.s. sorry for posting again so soon and sorry if it's a bit silly at the end :PEDIT: DIDN'T POST THE IC IN THE OOC AND THE OOC IN THE IC! YOU CRAZY!
Skai said
Anriu, I dont think Iktomi would do anything close to that. Plus, you kind of god modded his character. It would be better if you just wrote that your characters "imp" entered instead of saying what Iktomi was doing.
Lost in my Mind said
I really liked your post Anriu, and I love the title you gave Iktomi. My only problem is the wording at the end. Ik doesn't eat the people he kills, he has them disposed of, which is what I tried to convey by having Iktomi call Alex towards the end.Posted before I saw your comments. It makes more sense now, but perhaps you should edit the wording to reflect that. The way it stands it seems you are saying Ik ate the man.