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Fat Boy Kyle said
Loving the post guys :)P.s. sorry for posting again so soon and sorry if it's a bit silly at the end :PEDIT: DIDN'T POST THE IC IN THE OOC AND THE OOC IN THE IC! YOU CRAZY!

lol, you are funny :)
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I'm gonna murder Zeph.
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what happenned?
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Nothin he's just being lazy. Posted btw.
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lol IC
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Lazy? So writing a post right now is considered lazy?
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Yeah, so it's not going to be a mega-post exactly, cuz I'd be burnt out after a while and take a couple days to do it. Instead, I'm going to do a series of present/past posts in an attempt to be creative, informative, and efficient. Nothing's going to be in chronological order, but I'm pretty sure it won't be too confusing. After like three posts, everything will be in the present and I should be on the same page as everyone.
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ZEPHYR POSTED YAYZZZZ

also good plan mang, I wish you luck with it.
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Sorry for my delay in posting everyone, I hope you will forgive me.
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posted :D
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good post with Iktomi :D
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Anriu, I dont think Iktomi would do anything close to that. Plus, you kind of god modded his character. It would be better if you just wrote that your characters "imp" entered instead of saying what Iktomi was doing.
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Anriu, I dont think Iktomi would do anything close to that. Plus, you kind of god modded his character. It would be better if you just wrote that your characters "imp" entered instead of saying what Iktomi was doing.


Lol I was talking about the guy he just killed I was not goddmodding simply describing what he said in his post.

Sorry if it came accross that way.
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by 'devouring' I did not neccessarily mean eating

What I meant by devouring was that he was absorbing the onikage within that man, something he had just finished saying he was doing.
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I really liked your post Anriu, and I love the title you gave Iktomi. My only problem is the wording at the end. Ik doesn't eat the people he kills, he has them disposed of, which is what I tried to convey by having Iktomi call Alex towards the end.

Posted before I saw your comments. It makes more sense now, but perhaps you should edit the wording to reflect that. The way it stands it seems you are saying Ik ate the man.
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Lost in my Mind said
I really liked your post Anriu, and I love the title you gave Iktomi. My only problem is the wording at the end. Ik doesn't eat the people he kills, he has them disposed of, which is what I tried to convey by having Iktomi call Alex towards the end.Posted before I saw your comments. It makes more sense now, but perhaps you should edit the wording to reflect that. The way it stands it seems you are saying Ik ate the man.


lool kk, did not mean for the missinterpretation, Perhaps devoured his prey's soul?
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That or devoured the Kage that had been residing within the man.
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I changed it, it is better now :D. go check it out :D
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That is perfect Anriu, it fits with my post giving a sense of continuity.
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thanks man, Ima go play some league will I be seeing a reply on my return?
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